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Drowning 20
Oh goodness. What a beautiful little girl. Kit looked over at Bette, knowing her sister couldnt be handling this too well. Tina, you have a daughter, Im so happy for you and Julia.
Julia and Tina looked at each other and laughed, No, no, Kit. Caras my daughter. Julia is a friend of mine. Shes a misplaced New Yorker, now living here, actually she is Alices new editor.
Oh, Im sorry. I just thought. Sorry.
Julia smiled at Kit, Its ok. We used to get that a lot in New York.
Kit, do you have time to join us for lunch?
Shaking her head, Im sorry, Im short handed today. But Ill stop over again in a bit. I should actually get back to work. Ill send someone over to you guys for your order. Tina, I cant tell you how happy I am to see you here. Welcome home, girl.
Thanks, Kit. Well catch up later? Ill come in and we can have some coffee?
Definitely. Kit said walking away.
Wow, Kit Porter. I cant believe it. I still have all of her stuff on album. Julia remarked to no one in particular.
Yeah, we all felt like that when we first met her. Except for Dana. Alice answered.
What? I didnt know who she was. You know its not like my parents opened me up to a diverse musical selection growing up, Al. Ive gotten better.
Alice started laughing, Yeah, she grew up on Neil Diamond and Babs.
Not that theres anything wrong with them. Shane added.
No, as long as its mixed with something else. Maybe a little rock or a little disco or a little Motown. Thank God she met us when she did. Alice said, still laughing. She put her arm around Dana, Really Dane, you might have been a lost cause. But seriously guys, she did get much better. A couple of years ago she even got me tickets to a Gorillaz concert and they dont put on the most traditional shows. She even knew the songs when we got there. So, she has improved a lot musically.
Thanks, Al. Dana stated, embarrassed by the conversation.
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(69 votes, average: 4.26 out of 5)
I’m totally agree with lights, Dana is a difficult character, maybe for that the writers in the show don’t try to do something better with her and let us that job. Anyway thanks for this.
Really good job, again :) I hope that hug means something progress in Dana’s and Alice’s relationship. And Julia really needs to tell Tina how she feels.
I fucking love this story, update soon… waiting for more kills me!
This story is one of my favorites. Love the interaction between all the characters and the way you portray the Alice/Dana relationship. REally curious to know what is going on with Dana. Look forward to your next post. Yeah, Drowning and Laws of Attraction rule my fan ficton world!!!
I love this story…great work..
Really enjoyed it. And I really really want to know what Dana’s problem is, but then I fear we might be in for some angst next chapter. Loved “Dana you might want to close your mouth a little”. So gay! I would love to see that scene.
So long and so satisfying. I really can’t tell where this is going to go. You aren’t telegraphing your ending. Bette and Tina could or could not get back together.
Thanks!
Great job. I love this story.
This is fast becoming a favorite. I can see a nice love triangle between Bette, Tina and Julia.
I love this story…
Thank you.
Update soon =D
lucia – great job – i am dying to know what dana’s secret is. hurry up and post
I am really enjoying this story. I like how easily you make dialogue transitions between each of the characters. I love how Alice knows Dana so well and is trying to understand her. Dana is the hardest character to write, but you do a fabulous job in trying to make the reader “see” that she truly is a complex character. I love this story and I hope that you post soon.
Everyone else had said what was in my mind! You’re doing a much better job with them than the show. Now I’m looking forward to dinner ; )