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Drowning 20
You were never able to keep up with us, Dane. Its not a bad, just not your thing.
Hey, Baby Sis. What are you doing here? Kit said, walking up to the table.
Bette flashed a huge smile and pointed at the woman sitting next to her, Im having lunch with an old friend.
An old friend? Kit asked, then she recognized who was sitting at the table. Oh my God. Tina! Girl, you look great. Tina, I cant believe it. Arent you a site for sore eyes?
Tina got up from the table and gave Kit a big hug. Kit, you look great. Its so good to see you.
You too girl. You stayed away too long.
Yeah, it has been a long time, Kit. But Im here now.
How long are you here for? Are you back for good?
Tina laughed, No, Kit. Im in for the weekend. I got a distress call from Shane and thought it had been enough time. So here I am.
Well, I certainly am glad. Wait a distress call, what about?
Alice cut in, Long story Kit, but its all good. She looked over at Dana who dropped her eyes to the table, embarrassed at what she had caused and saddened that Alice could answer or think that its all good.
Kit looked over at the table, So, who do we have here?
Oh, I didnt realize you hadnt met yet. Julia Michaels, this is Kit Porter, Kit, Julia.
Kit Porter, the musician? Julia asked.
Heh, yeah, thats me. But around here Im better known as Bette Porters sister.
Wow, Kit Porter. Its a pleasure to meet you. Julia said, shaking Kits hand. Who dont you guys know? Ive been here a week and I meet a sports star and a rock star. I think I like you guys!
Oh and Kit, this, Tina said, lifting Cara off of the seat, is my daughter, Cara.
Oh my, well, hello beautiful. Im your Aunt Kit.
Cara looked up at her Mom, I have anover aunt? Tina nodded her head. Cara looked Kit over and decided it was ok, Hi Aunt Kit, you have a silly name too.
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(69 votes, average: 4.26 out of 5)
I’m totally agree with lights, Dana is a difficult character, maybe for that the writers in the show don’t try to do something better with her and let us that job. Anyway thanks for this.
Really good job, again :) I hope that hug means something progress in Dana’s and Alice’s relationship. And Julia really needs to tell Tina how she feels.
I fucking love this story, update soon… waiting for more kills me!
This story is one of my favorites. Love the interaction between all the characters and the way you portray the Alice/Dana relationship. REally curious to know what is going on with Dana. Look forward to your next post. Yeah, Drowning and Laws of Attraction rule my fan ficton world!!!
I love this story…great work..
Really enjoyed it. And I really really want to know what Dana’s problem is, but then I fear we might be in for some angst next chapter. Loved “Dana you might want to close your mouth a little”. So gay! I would love to see that scene.
So long and so satisfying. I really can’t tell where this is going to go. You aren’t telegraphing your ending. Bette and Tina could or could not get back together.
Thanks!
Great job. I love this story.
This is fast becoming a favorite. I can see a nice love triangle between Bette, Tina and Julia.
I love this story…
Thank you.
Update soon =D
lucia – great job – i am dying to know what dana’s secret is. hurry up and post
I am really enjoying this story. I like how easily you make dialogue transitions between each of the characters. I love how Alice knows Dana so well and is trying to understand her. Dana is the hardest character to write, but you do a fabulous job in trying to make the reader “see” that she truly is a complex character. I love this story and I hope that you post soon.
Everyone else had said what was in my mind! You’re doing a much better job with them than the show. Now I’m looking forward to dinner ; )