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    Drowning 22 (part 2)

    Story written on August 15, 2005 by lucia.
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    And it continues, a little drunken Alice, a little angst, a little humor, read part 1 first!

    “Dana, if you have something to say, please just say it. I really am late. And this isn’t amusing.”

    Dana looked at Alice. She could see the pain and anger in her eyes and the guilt she felt knowing that she caused it was growing exponentially. She wasn’t sure if she would ever get a good night’s sleep again. Every time she closes her eyes, she sees images of Alice crying mixed with images of Alice hurt. “I’m sorry, Al.”

    “You seem to be saying that a lot recently.” Alice drawled at Dana.

    “Al…” Dana said hopelessly. “I am sorry. I didn’t mean to upset you. You know that right? You know I would never do anything to hurt you intentionally?”

    Alice signed in response “Yeah, Dane, I do. But to be totally honest with you, it doesn’t make it any easier. I really have to go. Have fun tonight.” Without waiting for a response, she turned and walked out of the house.

    Chapter 22 part two

    When Bette and Robin got to the restaurant, they looked around for Alice. Robin lightly tapped Bette’s arm and nodded her head towards the bar. Alice was sitting on a bar stool, her shoulders and head drooped, her hand wrapped around a half empty rocks glass, her eyes staring blankly at the brown liquid. Bette and Robin walked towards her and Bette smiled upon seeing the headphones coming from Alice’s ears. She motioned to Robin about the headphones. Bette cautiously placed her hand on Alice’s shoulders, causing the blonde to jump.

    Alice looked up and saw Bette smiling at her and Alice let a small smile creep across her face. She reached up and grabbed Bette into a big hug. “Hi Porter. I’ve been waiting for you guys. Where’s Robin? Oh, there she is. Come here Robin.” Alice said, reaching out for Robin and including her in the hug she was giving Bette.

    Bette finally pulled away. “Wow, Glad to see you too, Alice.”

    ‘Yeah, well, I was here waiting. And this nice man here,” Alice started gesturing towards the bartender, “was very sweet and gave me a drink while I waited.”

    “How many drinks did he give you Alice?”

    “Oh, I got here early. Dana came to the house and I didn’t want to see her so I left and came here but I didn’t want to bother you so I figured I’d just wait here with Jack.” Alice answered in one big breath.

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    1. NOOOOO please don’t make us wait. I for the life of me can’t figure this out. What could have Dana so scared she would give everything. Now all I’m going to do is obsess even more about this story, so hurry up so I can have a life.

    3. Call the police, Dana! Call the FBI!!!!

      Do you think she can hear me through this internet connection????

      Alice was a soothsayer tonight, thanks to Jack!

    4. I loved it, as usual, but look at the state you have us all in now! You have to post again soon; we can’t stand the suspense. (And, Dana, since Alice is right there on the couch: tell her!)

    5. I forgot and Jo Dee Messina “Love is Not Enough”, that is the ultimate heartbreak song. Beautiful and each time I hear it, I thanked god, I’m not in the middle of a breakup.

    6. I was waiting for you lol! Alice’s collection of songs had me cracking up, btw I love the Carpenters. Tina and Dana was touching and sweet. I missed this group of friends where everyone came together and helped out. You really aren’t gonna make this easy for us, aren’t you? What is going on with Dana? The suspense is killing me!

    8. Ok, I’m coming out of lurkdom to say how much I love this story but it’s driving me crazy. (In a good way) Just when I think Dana’s going to cave in and spill the beans with what’s really going on…she fools me once again! Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    12. i luv this fan fic!! This is such a great storyline!!! please write soon! the suspense is killing me! they gotta get back together! and tinas gotta stay!

    13. Dana has to go to the police, or at least talk to Alice.

      Alice hit the nail on the head with Bette, Bette has to decide what she wants, its not fair on Robin.

      Thank you.

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