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    Drowning 22 (part 2)

    Story written on August 15, 2005 by lucia.
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    And it continues, a little drunken Alice, a little angst, a little humor, read part 1 first!

    “Angry, life sucks music. They do it really well. Check out ‘Do This Anymore’ Great Angry music.”

    “Hmm.” Bette kept scrolling through the list “AL!!! Neil Diamond???”

    “What? Come on, Love on the Rocks? Great life sucks tune! Good classic angst!”

    Bette and Alice were still arguing over the validity of Neil Diamond and The Cure being allowed on the same music list when Robin came back to tell them they had a table ready. Bette and Robin helped Alice walk over to the table, while subtly leaving her drink at the bar. After a few minutes and a small argument with Alice who said that she preferred to drink her dinner, they had all ordered dinner. 

    “So Alice, you were smiling at lunch, you care to share whatever changed?”

    “Nothing changed Porter, am I not allowed to be sad that the woman I thought I was going to spend the rest of my life with has turned into an uncaring, selfish ***** who doesn’t care that she is destroying our plan s for our life.” Alice answered indignantly, “Oh, and for no obvious reason, might I add?”

    “Alice, of course you can be sad. We would never expect you to hide your feelings from us, but when I saw you last night, you were having fun and laughing with her. We are just a little surprised at the change.” Robin said, reaching over to place her hand on top of Alice’s.

    Alice jerked her hand away from Robin’s, “Listen, Robin, that’s really sweet, really. But I don’t want to be comforted, or to talk about it. OK Let’s change the subject before I lose this anger, which is pretty much the only thing keeping me from crying. That work for you guys?”

    “Sure Al, Whatever you need.” Bette answered.

    At another table in a restaurant a few blocks away, a similar scene was playing out. Tina and Dana were sitting across from each other and the tennis player had just finished her third drink. Tina watched her friend with concern and amusement as she flagged the server for another round. She just hoped that Dana hadn’t changed too much in the last 5 years. Enough alcohol in her and Tina would not only get the information on the letters, but copies in triplicate as well.

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    1. NOOOOO please don’t make us wait. I for the life of me can’t figure this out. What could have Dana so scared she would give everything. Now all I’m going to do is obsess even more about this story, so hurry up so I can have a life.

    3. Call the police, Dana! Call the FBI!!!!

      Do you think she can hear me through this internet connection????

      Alice was a soothsayer tonight, thanks to Jack!

    4. I loved it, as usual, but look at the state you have us all in now! You have to post again soon; we can’t stand the suspense. (And, Dana, since Alice is right there on the couch: tell her!)

    5. I forgot and Jo Dee Messina “Love is Not Enough”, that is the ultimate heartbreak song. Beautiful and each time I hear it, I thanked god, I’m not in the middle of a breakup.

    6. I was waiting for you lol! Alice’s collection of songs had me cracking up, btw I love the Carpenters. Tina and Dana was touching and sweet. I missed this group of friends where everyone came together and helped out. You really aren’t gonna make this easy for us, aren’t you? What is going on with Dana? The suspense is killing me!

    8. Ok, I’m coming out of lurkdom to say how much I love this story but it’s driving me crazy. (In a good way) Just when I think Dana’s going to cave in and spill the beans with what’s really going on…she fools me once again! Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    12. i luv this fan fic!! This is such a great storyline!!! please write soon! the suspense is killing me! they gotta get back together! and tinas gotta stay!

    13. Dana has to go to the police, or at least talk to Alice.

      Alice hit the nail on the head with Bette, Bette has to decide what she wants, its not fair on Robin.

      Thank you.

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