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Drowning – Chapter 21
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The thought that she has caused Alice pain is something that Dana wasn’t handling well. Even in her exhaustion, Alice lingers on her mind and sleep is hiding. She knows she would do anything to keep the mess she made away from Alice. She would do anything to shield her from pain or even danger. But nothing was going to keep it all away. The only way to ease the pain and difficulty in Alice’s life was to walk away and that was causing Alice pain. See the cycle? It really was quite a quandary Dana got herself into and she wasn’t sure how to get out. As the sleep finally took hold of her, she dreamt of Alice, her face, her smile, her body and the safety she gave Dana. At least in dreams it was all still there.
She woke to a door slamming. She jumped up off of the couch and saw Shane walking into in, mumbling to herself.
“Hey Shane, You ok?”
“Yeah, fine. Just had a client piss me off. Sorry.” Shane answered, throwing herself down on the couch next to Dana. “So how are you doing, Dane?”
“Fine. Tired. But I’m good. It’s been a long couple of days.”
“I’m sure it has. But it’s been great with Tina here, right?”
“It really has. I didn’t realize how much I missed her until she was here.”
“Yeah, well hopefully after this weekend she’ll feel more comfortable coming back here. Last night was blast. We haven’t laughed like that in a long time.”
“I know. It was great. All of us together like that. It was like it was five years ago and our lives hadn’t changed so much.”
“Dane, you and Alice got along well last night, even today. That’s a good thing, right?”
Dana smiled, “Yeah, it is. It’s really hard Shane. I know you guys don’t get it, but you have to believe that I wouldn’t do this if I didn’t have a reason.”
Shane shook her head, “I’m sure you have your reasons, but it doesn’t make sense to me. It isn’t often you get the chance to be happy and it looks like you’re just throwing it away. Help me understand.”
“I’m not sure how to do that, Shane. I just need you to trust me.”
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What?, Who? damn post soon! I have to say that I really like Julia, difficult situation for her. Thanks.
Way with the cliffhangers -lucia! Whatever Dana has done, I think I’m dreading it more than she is. You really write all these characters well; I even care about Tina in your story, which I don’t so much in the show, and Julia is a nice one too. Awesome that you manage to keep this and your other fic going at the same time, so different from each other but both so good.
holy crap! what’s wrong with Dane! I didn’t think it would be anything serious, sounds like it’s gunna be totally awesome. I hope she tell’s Shane. Yoda’s good with advice lol!!! Update soon!
Wow! Great chapter… can’t believe you stopped there. LOL. I love how you are developing Dana. She is my favorite and you are just making me love her more. So Dana has a “stalker”, I knew that she loves Alice to much to simply walk away b/c she’s scared of losing her friendship. But she would walk away if someone has been threatening to physically hurt Alice. Come on Yoda you can get her through this. :)
I am starting to really like Julia a lot, especially after she tells Tina “No, lie to me, please, yes, honestly.” LMAO.
So…how long will Julia have to suffer i slience? Tina could move back to L.A. to be with Julia. Bette could develop a relationship with Cara. All would be right with the world, almost.
man..u know u are on my favorite writers list right? this was a great chapter it was like i was watchin a soap oprea and a big even just happened finally some light on why dana is doing this….thanks for the great chapter lookin forward to anything that u post next cause u talented like that
Hmmm, I wonder which phsyco ex this is…lol
Just when I thought it can’t get any better, it just did! Like lights, Dana is my favorite and you write so beautifully. You got me so curious now about that mysterious letter, please don’t keep us hanging for too long.
Lucia…I’ve read this story from the start, and this is def one of my top 5 ever!!!! Your story telling is amazing, and I love the suspense with Dana. She is my absolute fav, and this is a great storyline for her. Please post soon
Dana what is going on with you…Tina needs to move on i feel really sorry for Julia, I hope Julia is able to tell Tina how she feels about her and Cara adores her…looking forward to the next post.
Thank you.
Can’t wait to see who it is and what the letter says…post soon!!!
OMG what a twist. i HATE cliffhangers. god post soon *****
like others, i wish Julia can solve her “problem” and she make it happen with Tina. i love them together :) Yoda’s help is needed but i think Alice could help Dana too – unless it’s the way lights said.. Alice in danger :/ please, continue soon. *mumbles* cliffhanger after cliffhanger..