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Drowning – Chapter 21
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She had loved Alice for as long as she could remember. She was instantly attracted to her when they met. When Dana blushed after Alice called her hot the afternoon they met, it wasn’t because she was called hot, it was because someone she thought was hot, thought the same of her and she didn’t know what the ***** to do. From the moment they walked into The Planet that day, she felt safe by Alice’s side. Dana had tried for along time to figure out where that feeling of safety came from.
She wasn’t one to trust people implicitly and or to open up to virtual strangers. So when the cute blonde asked her into the bar to meet her friends, she really thought it was going to be for one drink. But then Alice took her hand to lead Dana into the bar and all thoughts of leaving went away. When Alice said she would protect Dana from all of the women, she believed her. It really hadn’t made much sense to Dana. When she analyzed it, which she did for quite some time, she figured it out. Alice was one of those rare people who say exactly what’s on her mind, regardless of consequence. She doesn’t mince words or hide behind pretense. It was obvious. Alice was exactly who she claimed to be at all times. It’s not that she wore her heart on her sleeve, exactly, it was the exact opposite, but when it came to everything else, she was straight up honest. She could insult someone to his or her face, with a smile on her own and the situation would never get ugly. So with a person like that, how could you doubt her sincerity? When she said bad things she meant them and when she said good things she did too. Simply put, Alice was sincere.
Dana hadn’t met too many people like that in her life. To this day, she could count on one hand the people who had that type of honest nature, and most of them were sitting around the table at the house for breakfast. She got lucky with her friends, but she got luckier with Alice. It has been so many years. She couldn’t really remember her life before Alice. Its not that she didn’t remember actually living, its just that she can’t isolate those memories from Alice. Like when she looks back to her younger life, to her childhood, she imagines Alice through them. She imagines Alice’s responses, her sarcastic puns, her innate ability to put Dana at ease and her absolute power to make Dana feel loved and safe. Somehow her childhood didn’t feel as lonely as she knows it was, because Alice is there now. It makes no sense when she thinks about it, so a long time ago so stopped thinking about it and just accepted it. It made life better, so why question it.
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What?, Who? damn post soon! I have to say that I really like Julia, difficult situation for her. Thanks.
Way with the cliffhangers -lucia! Whatever Dana has done, I think I’m dreading it more than she is. You really write all these characters well; I even care about Tina in your story, which I don’t so much in the show, and Julia is a nice one too. Awesome that you manage to keep this and your other fic going at the same time, so different from each other but both so good.
holy crap! what’s wrong with Dane! I didn’t think it would be anything serious, sounds like it’s gunna be totally awesome. I hope she tell’s Shane. Yoda’s good with advice lol!!! Update soon!
Wow! Great chapter… can’t believe you stopped there. LOL. I love how you are developing Dana. She is my favorite and you are just making me love her more. So Dana has a “stalker”, I knew that she loves Alice to much to simply walk away b/c she’s scared of losing her friendship. But she would walk away if someone has been threatening to physically hurt Alice. Come on Yoda you can get her through this. :)
I am starting to really like Julia a lot, especially after she tells Tina “No, lie to me, please, yes, honestly.” LMAO.
So…how long will Julia have to suffer i slience? Tina could move back to L.A. to be with Julia. Bette could develop a relationship with Cara. All would be right with the world, almost.
man..u know u are on my favorite writers list right? this was a great chapter it was like i was watchin a soap oprea and a big even just happened finally some light on why dana is doing this….thanks for the great chapter lookin forward to anything that u post next cause u talented like that
Hmmm, I wonder which phsyco ex this is…lol
Just when I thought it can’t get any better, it just did! Like lights, Dana is my favorite and you write so beautifully. You got me so curious now about that mysterious letter, please don’t keep us hanging for too long.
Lucia…I’ve read this story from the start, and this is def one of my top 5 ever!!!! Your story telling is amazing, and I love the suspense with Dana. She is my absolute fav, and this is a great storyline for her. Please post soon
Dana what is going on with you…Tina needs to move on i feel really sorry for Julia, I hope Julia is able to tell Tina how she feels about her and Cara adores her…looking forward to the next post.
Thank you.
Can’t wait to see who it is and what the letter says…post soon!!!
OMG what a twist. i HATE cliffhangers. god post soon *****
like others, i wish Julia can solve her “problem” and she make it happen with Tina. i love them together :) Yoda’s help is needed but i think Alice could help Dana too – unless it’s the way lights said.. Alice in danger :/ please, continue soon. *mumbles* cliffhanger after cliffhanger..