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Echoes in Darkness, Chapter 7: The bitterness inside
Shane pulled Tina out of the way, pressing her against the wall, and
fished in her pocket, pulling out a keychain with a small flashlight on
it. Several other women did the same. Small lights flickered in the
cavernous black room, like fireflies. They weren’t bright enough to
illuminate anything, but there was something comforting just in having
some light, any light, to hold the darkness at bay.
But it wasn’t holding back the panicky crowd. Bodies pressed through
the doors, too many at a time, pushing and shoving other bodies out of
the way. Cries rang out as the smaller or less mobile were knocked to
the floor.
Shane edged around the wall, pulling Tina with her, until they reached
the now dead sound board. Shane grabbed Carmen and pulled her close.
“You OK?” Her green eyes searched Carmen’s face, looking for
reassurance. Carmen smiled uncertainly and nodded, then threw her arms
tightly around Shane’s neck and shuddered into her.
A bright light was heading their way. Above it, a thin pale hand waved.
“Hey! Guys? Over here.” The four women left the safe anchor of the DJ
board and moved toward Alice.
Tina gripped her friend’s arms. “Are you OK? Where’s Dana? Where’s Bette?”
“I dunno,” Alice said. “Over there somewhere,” she waved the flashlight
in the direction of the buffet and cash bar. Lara was frozen in place,
serving spatula in hand, mouth open in shock. Bette was hanging on to
the bar to steady her uncertain legs. Dana was trying to hold her up.
Alice decided, on behalf of the other four, that it was going to be
easier to head toward their other friends. Bette looked like she
couldn’t take more than a few steps without falling down, with or
without Dana’s broad athletic shoulders to hang onto. Marina grabbed
Jenny and followed the halogen glare of Alice’s flashlight.
It was like swimming against the tide, threading their way through the
thinning of crush of bodies fleeing in the opposite direction, but
eventually they made it. Now they simply stood and looked at each
other, then back at the dwindling crowd.
“Wow,” Dana said finally, “what’s THAT all about?”
Alice rolled her eyes, safely outside the circle of light made by the flashlight in her shaky hand.
Bette’s eyes were bleary but she wasn’t so far gone she didn’t notice
Helena holding onto Tina’s arm. Hot anger flared in her. She clenched
her fists and jaw, stepped away from the bar. What are you doing
with.” She slipped and went down hard on her *****. “*****!!!!!” she
yelled in frustration. Frankly, her ***** was so numb by now that she
hardly even felt the impact of thinly padded bone hitting the tile.
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Cool ! I love disaster/survialist type stories. And since you have Shane and Carmen together, it’s all good.
I just read all of your chapters. I must admit the first chapter had me a little confused but it makes perfect sense now. I believe in B and T all the way but you make this so believable. I can’t wait to see what happened and what has caused this blackout. This is very unique and well written. I will hold out in the belief that you will keep our girls safe.
Alright, I posted a comment on this hours ago but it dissappeared in cyberspace. LOL This whole story is so deliciously dark and foreboding. I LOVE the story and the vividly stark descriptions! You paint this picture so skillfully, never straying from the characters true personalities, often giving them more depth than the original series. I’m glad to read something not formulaic B&T. I’m eager to read how the girls hunker down, LOL. With this motley crew there’s bound to be many more explosions. Wickedly imaginative. Keep going!
Wow, okay, I’m beyond intrigued here. I love this! as it’s been said, very dark, and very mysterious. And I like your Helena in this fic. I think she’s better for Tina, than Bette is here. I hope Shane’s fears settles a bit eventually. And YAY, go Shane and her sensible self in an unusual, potentially dangerous, and difficult situation like this! :D Good thing most of them were gathered there at the party, so they can look out for one another. And then Shane doesn’t have to worry about whether Carmen will be alright or not. Bette could not have chosen a worse time to get drunk hah, badness, slowing them down. Awesome fic! This really tickled my curiosity, so I can’t wait to read more!
thanks shane!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tina your playin with the devil WTF are you doing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AGH! The loom of impending doom is making me shiver! You got me on the edge of my seat for real. Great chapter. I’m freakin out to see what’s happening next