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“Well which one do you want me to do? Shut my mouth or start talking?”
I knew it was a mistake as soon as the words came out of my mouth.
“Bette! Speak, before the whole fucking United States shows up on my chest!”
Now that would be something to see, but since I do want to live to see another day, and since I do want to get all this shit off my chest I decided that could wait for another time.
“T, could you come and sit with me on the bed?”
She hesitated for a moment, sighed a few over exaggerated sighs, rolled her beautiful eyes and then walked over and sat on the bed.
“This has not been easy for me either, ok? Do you think have I enjoyed not seeing you? Or talking to you? This has been the hardest six weeks of my life.”
“Well Bette, why then? Why put us both through this misery? I have been going over and over it in my head, and can’t for the life of me come up with a logical reason for you to do that. Is it me? Is it something I did?”
“God Tina, no! It was nothing you did or said, this is all about me, please don’t ever think that you did anything. You have been nothing but everything I could ever want in a best friend.”
“Then what is it then? Are you tired of us? I mean, I know we have been spending a lot of time together since we both moved back, but I thought it was a mutual thing, I thought we were just making up for lost time. If you need a break, just say so Bette, we don’t have to spend every minute together, you could have just told me, you didn’t have to…..”
“Tina, would you shut up!”
At this point I was just ready to kiss her. That would shut her up, and get my point across a whole hell of a lot faster. I am usually all about the easy way out, but nothing about Tina is easy, and that is one of the many reasons why I love her. ‘Good things come to those who wait’ keeps running through my mind. Fuck! I have been in this waiting room for five years, there better damn well be good things on the other side, and it better be something other than greener grass!
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Hoping you won’t keep us waiting too long with Tina’s reaction. PPS
Whoa! Come back and finish :) please.
I love stories that just reach down and grab you by the pit of your stomach … I will confess that Bette’s speech had me “mesmerize”. You truly have a graceful way with words.Now for the love of all that is “Virginia ” post the next set of chapters :-)Thanks for a great story !!!
Come on now! I am sitting right here till this story continues. I cannot go to sleep without knowing what happens next.
After this ending u have to post like now, PLEASE, love this story n this chapter was just beautiful.PPPPS
Bette’s confession was absolutely beautiful.
oh you dirty dog. Loving this story more and more with each chap. It reminds me of how falling in Love for the first time brings out the best in you. PPS
Ugh…what a cliff hanger! I so hope that Tina has a positive reaction to Bette’s confession. I love the humor you add to this but I’m feeling the drama right now. I hope Tina doesn’t break Bette’s heart by rejecting her. Please post soon!
Bummer you stopped.
Loved this. Absolutely loved how Bette just came right out and said what she said. OMG. Wish my name was Tina. Her Tina. LOL.
That’s a lovely confession by Bette. I hope Tina was ready to hear it… *Please* more soon. thanks for posting! :)
That was EVIL!! We waited 4 chapters for the drama, and you do this.. =(( Please please please post soon. I loved Bette’s description, the hurricane comparison was amazing. =)) Thanks for this!! I hope Tina secretly loves Bette too, if not poor Bette will be devastated. PPVS! =D
Now that it is out in the open, I want to know just how Tina reacts to the news. Tina’s mother already knows that they are in love with each other, I think Tina is the only one that has not realized her true feelings for Bette. So glad Bette told her. You do have a fully developed sense of humor and I love it. Virginia, that was too funny. Thanks for posting and please, please post again very soon. Can hardly wait to know Tinas reaction.
Loved Tina’s humor and Bette’s confession. Can’t wait for Tina’s reaction. Very curious indeed!
OMG are you kidding me, you just leave us like that, very mean lol. Damn that was so good, Bettes word is beautiful sweet, Im so into it lol, now let see Tinas reaction. Please post more thanks!
This was an amazing conversation…but you now have to post really soon so I that I can read about Tina reaction
I’m sorry I never left a comment on your story before. I really enjoy it, though. I usually love stories where B&T are best friends before becoming anything more (wait… they will be more than friends here, right? ;) ). And in this area, you story is great. I love the humour and the gravity at the same time. Thank you for sharing with us.Oh and congratulations, too : you sure know how to write a cliffhanger lmao.
Why did you stop! That was sooo good! Can’t wait! Thank you!
Tease! I hope Tina is receptive to Bette. Can’t wait or more!
You’re kidding right? Leaving off there…Not cool. I sure hope you post soon. But this was a really great post. I think I would have cried too if I heard Bette speak like that. *sigh*
i knew you were going to end there… and PLEASE… bette has just poured her heart out… don’t let tina walk all over it… i hope tina says she ia also in love with bette and has been forever… maybe she was also scared of saying it first… love this… pps
ahhhhhh this is unbelievable entertaining and well written and awesome..i love the relationship between bette and tina in this story, its like nothing ive read on here before