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“Oh my God! I know what it is! Bette, you have met someone! I can’t believe I didn’t see this before. But it’s not just anyone, it’s the one. Isn’t it? Well, isn’t it? Bette, tell me I’m right!”
Well, talk about someone throwing you a bone wrapped in a big red ribbon. I couldn’t have asked for a better segue.
“Tina, when you’re right, you’re right. I have met ‘the one’. “
“When? Where? Who is it?”
“I have known them for a long time, since high school in fact. The ‘who’ is where it becomes complicated.”
“Then I know them, don’t I? What’s his name? Is it Jeremy? Why is it complicated? Is he married?”
“My God Tina, do you actually think I would be involved with a married man? No they are not married, and no it is not Jeremy. Oh, and thanks for actually thinking I would be a home wrecker. Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.”
“Oh get over yourself Bette. I am just playing twenty questions here, trying to figure all of this out. I didn’t actually think you would get “involved” with somebody that was already “involved”. Come on, it can’t be that bad. Just tell me! Who is it?”
“Ok, one thing at a time. Yes you know them; you know them almost as well as I do. No, it is not Jeremy. Tina, the person I am in love is….well, they are…….it’s a woman.”
As I said this I was looking at the floor. I couldn’t bear to see the disappointment or disgust or whatever negative expression I expected to be there jumping off her face.
“Bette, ok first I need you to quit talking to the floor. Second, is the floor talking back? Cause if it is can you tell it to start cleaning it’s self. I mean it is 2010 we should have self cleaning floors, it is not the time be a lazy floor.”
“Tina? What the hell are you talking about? Did you hear me say that I was in love with a woman?”
“You didn’t let me get to my third thing. Ok third, so you’re in love with a woman? What’s complicated about that?”
“So does this mean you’re ok with me being in love with a woman?”
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Hoping you won’t keep us waiting too long with Tina’s reaction. PPS
Whoa! Come back and finish :) please.
I love stories that just reach down and grab you by the pit of your stomach … I will confess that Bette’s speech had me “mesmerize”. You truly have a graceful way with words.Now for the love of all that is “Virginia ” post the next set of chapters :-)Thanks for a great story !!!
Come on now! I am sitting right here till this story continues. I cannot go to sleep without knowing what happens next.
After this ending u have to post like now, PLEASE, love this story n this chapter was just beautiful.PPPPS
Bette’s confession was absolutely beautiful.
oh you dirty dog. Loving this story more and more with each chap. It reminds me of how falling in Love for the first time brings out the best in you. PPS
Ugh…what a cliff hanger! I so hope that Tina has a positive reaction to Bette’s confession. I love the humor you add to this but I’m feeling the drama right now. I hope Tina doesn’t break Bette’s heart by rejecting her. Please post soon!
Bummer you stopped.
Loved this. Absolutely loved how Bette just came right out and said what she said. OMG. Wish my name was Tina. Her Tina. LOL.
That’s a lovely confession by Bette. I hope Tina was ready to hear it… *Please* more soon. thanks for posting! :)
That was EVIL!! We waited 4 chapters for the drama, and you do this.. =(( Please please please post soon. I loved Bette’s description, the hurricane comparison was amazing. =)) Thanks for this!! I hope Tina secretly loves Bette too, if not poor Bette will be devastated. PPVS! =D
Now that it is out in the open, I want to know just how Tina reacts to the news. Tina’s mother already knows that they are in love with each other, I think Tina is the only one that has not realized her true feelings for Bette. So glad Bette told her. You do have a fully developed sense of humor and I love it. Virginia, that was too funny. Thanks for posting and please, please post again very soon. Can hardly wait to know Tinas reaction.
Loved Tina’s humor and Bette’s confession. Can’t wait for Tina’s reaction. Very curious indeed!
OMG are you kidding me, you just leave us like that, very mean lol. Damn that was so good, Bettes word is beautiful sweet, Im so into it lol, now let see Tinas reaction. Please post more thanks!
This was an amazing conversation…but you now have to post really soon so I that I can read about Tina reaction
I’m sorry I never left a comment on your story before. I really enjoy it, though. I usually love stories where B&T are best friends before becoming anything more (wait… they will be more than friends here, right? ;) ). And in this area, you story is great. I love the humour and the gravity at the same time. Thank you for sharing with us.Oh and congratulations, too : you sure know how to write a cliffhanger lmao.
Why did you stop! That was sooo good! Can’t wait! Thank you!
Tease! I hope Tina is receptive to Bette. Can’t wait or more!
You’re kidding right? Leaving off there…Not cool. I sure hope you post soon. But this was a really great post. I think I would have cried too if I heard Bette speak like that. *sigh*
i knew you were going to end there… and PLEASE… bette has just poured her heart out… don’t let tina walk all over it… i hope tina says she ia also in love with bette and has been forever… maybe she was also scared of saying it first… love this… pps
ahhhhhh this is unbelievable entertaining and well written and awesome..i love the relationship between bette and tina in this story, its like nothing ive read on here before