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Escort – Chapter 4 (Rewrite)
The door slowly opened to reveal Tina dressed in tight fitting jeans and a black top. When they had talked last night Bette had told her to wear something casual which had made her quit curious to what the brunette had planned for them.
“Hi” Tina smiled shyly stepping aside so that Bette could enter.
“You look amazing” Bette smiled as she walked inside.
“You don’t look to bad yourself Ms. Porter” Tina smiled eyeing Bette who was also dressed in tight fitting jeans and a blue top.
Bette stepped up close to Tina, bringing her arms around her waist “Hi” she smiled.
“Hi” Tina smiled, moving her arms around Bette’s neck as they shared a soft kiss.
“We should get going” Bette smiled as they broke the kiss.
“Where are we going?” Tina asked eyeing Bette curiously.
“You’ll have to wait and see” Bette smiled.
“No tell me now!” Tina said eager to know.
Bette just laughed stepping out of the door “Come on” She smiled extending her hand.
Tina took Bette’s hand in hers before they walked out of the building and up to Bette’s car.
Bette opened the door for Tina before walking over to her side and getting in herself.
“So where are we going?” Tina asked as they made their way out onto the freeway.
“You are very impatient Miss. Kennard” Bette laughed.
“Bette, come one tell me” Tina laughed.
“Ok fine” Bette smiled “We’re going to the pier”
“Really!?” Tina exclaimed with an excited look on her face “I love the pier!”
Bette chuckled at Tina’s excitement.
“You are just full of surprises aren’t you?” Tina smiled.
“You didn’t expect me to take you to the pier?”
“No” Tina laughed “The pier doesn’t seem very Bette Porter to me”
“Well Bette Porter is more than just fancy dinner parties and gallery openings” Bette winked at her.
They walked side by side down the pier and Tina immediately sought out Bette’s hand with her own. Bette looked over at her smiling as Tina took her hand in hers.
“Oh look I love that game!” Tina squealed pointing to the game where you shoot water into a balloon until it pops.
Bette laughed at Tina’s excitement as they made their way over.
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(3 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
Loving this rewrite.
this is soo great lllooovveeee this story thank you!!!
Such a cute date ! I love this story :]
This is really interesting – please keep up with the rewrite. I enjoyed the original too!
LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!
Great story,thank you for the update.PPS
Thank you love this story.