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Escort – Chapter 4 (Rewrite)
“Kiss me” Bette smiled.
“What?” Tina asked confused.
“Kiss me” Bette repeated softly.
A smile grazed Tina’s face as she leaned forward and softly pressed her lips to Bette’s. She pulled back looking into Bette’s eyes “Was that good?”
“Perfect” Bette smiled.
Bette and Tina were having fun playing games and enjoying some pizza before continuing exploring the pier.
“Go tell that guy you think his girlfriend is cute” Bette grinned pointing to a guy that had his arm around a girl.
“What!?” Tina exclaimed “I can’t do that!”
“You have to do everything I tell you, remember?” Bette said still grinning.
Tina gave Bette a deadly stare before making her way over to the couple.
“Hi” she said hesitantly.
“Um hi” the guy replied eyeing her curiously.
“I just wanted to say that I think your girlfriend is cute” Tina blurted out, wanting to get it over with as soon as possible. She knew that she really didn’t have to do this but she had never been one to turn down a challenge.
The girl smiled at her as the guy looked confused. That confusion quickly turned into a smile as he looked over to his girlfriend. The girl leaned in and whispered something to the guy.
“Look we were just about to head out…you want to join us?” he asked smiling.
Tina stood there shocked before mumbling “No sorry but thanks”
She turned and saw Bette bent over in laughter and quickly made her way back to her “You are going to pay for that” she said angrily.
“Awe I’m sorry” Bette chuckled looking at Tina who looked pissed off.
“I’m sorry” she said again but Tina didn’t look at her.
“I’m sorry” Bette said as she leaned in kissing Tina softly. Tina smiled as they broke apart.
“Are we good?” Bette asked seeing the smile on Tina’s face.
“Yeah” Tina said “But I’ll still make you pay for that” she added.
“Bring it” Bette laughed pulling Tina in for a hug.
They continued walking along the pier and came in front of the big Ferris wheel.
Bette looked at Tina “Wanna go?”
“Sure” Tina smiled before they made their way over.
They sat close together as the wheel started moving. Bette put her arm around Tina who smiled as she rested her head on the brunette’s shoulder.
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(3 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
Loving this rewrite.
this is soo great lllooovveeee this story thank you!!!
Such a cute date ! I love this story :]
This is really interesting – please keep up with the rewrite. I enjoyed the original too!
LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!
Great story,thank you for the update.PPS
Thank you love this story.