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Escort – Chapter 4 (Rewrite)
“I should warn you I’m really good” Tina smirked as they paid.
“Oh really?” Bette smirked back “You think you can beat me?”
“I’m positive I can”
“You want to make this interesting?” Bette asked.
“What do you have in mind?” Tina asked raising an eyebrow.
Bette thought for a moment before her lips turned into a smirk “The looser have to do everything the winner says for the rest of the evening”
“Bring it on” Tina laughed taking one of the water guns “and prepare to loose”
Bette laughed as she picked up a water gun.
“Are you ready ladies?” the man running the game asked.
“I’m ready” Tina smiled glancing over at Bette.
“I’m ready too” Bette said getting into position and aiming her water gun.
“Ok then…Ready, set, go” the man said.
Both women pressed the buttons on their water guns and the balloons filled up quickly.
Bette’s balloon burst a few seconds before Tina’s who looked over at her with her mouth hanging open.
The man handed Bette a small stuffed teddy bear.
“How did you do that?” Tina asked as they started walking “I always win that game” she pouted.
“Well I know how to handle a gun” Bette replied with a smile.
“You do?”
“Yes…my sister Kit owns a café and one night when she counted the money in the register a man broke in and robbed her. He pointed a gun at her and it freaked her out so after that she decided to take a gun shooting class so that she would be able to protect herself and she forced me to come along with her” Bette explained.
“Oh” Tina replied feeling bad for Bette’s sister before realizing what Bette had done.
“You lied to me” she exclaimed.
“No” Bette chuckled “You kept bragging about how good you are and I just didn’t say anything”
“Oh right” Tina blushed.
“So” Bette said.
“So what?”
“So now you need to do everything I tell you for the rest of the evening” Bette smirked.
Tina met Bette’s eyes raising her eyebrows at the brunette “You are going to enjoy this aren’t you?”
“Well of course” Bette laughed.
“So what do I need to do?” Tina sighed.
Bette took Tina’s hand making her stop.
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(3 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
Loving this rewrite.
this is soo great lllooovveeee this story thank you!!!
Such a cute date ! I love this story :]
This is really interesting – please keep up with the rewrite. I enjoyed the original too!
LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!
Great story,thank you for the update.PPS
Thank you love this story.