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Escort – Chapter 4 (Rewrite)
“I’m really happy you took me here tonight” Tina smiled.
“Me too” Bette replied softly “I’m having a really good time with you”
Tina lifted her head off of Bette’s shoulder and looked into her eyes. Bette smiled bringing her hand up stroking Tina’s cheek before slowly leaning in and pressing her lips against Tina’s.
Tina, desperate to feel more of the brunette let her tongue out, stroking Bette’s lips asking for permission to enter. Bette opened her mouth to the blonde’s eager tongue, moaning softly as it explored her mouth.
Bette brought her hand to the back of Tina’s head holding her close to her. Tina’s nails stroked down Bette’s muscular arms giving the brunette goose bumps. Tina let her hands travel to Bette’s back pulling her in as close as she could.
They kissed intensely for a minute before breaking the kiss, resting their foreheads together. The Ferris wheel had almost made it all the way around and they got ready to get off.
It had gone dark outside and as it was starting to get chilly they decided to head home.
They had made it back to Tina’s apartment and she opened the door taking a few steps inside before turning back to Bette.
“You want to come in for some tea or coffee? She asked not wanting the date to end just yet.
“I would love to” Bette smiled, happy that Tina wanted her to stay.
They went inside and Bette followed Tina into the kitchen.
“So what would you like?” Tina smiled.
“Some tea would be great”
“I’ll make some, you can look around if you’d like and make yourself comfortable”
“Ok” Bette smiled. She went into the living room, looking around the room, admiring Tina’s choices in decoration. She continued into Tina’s bedroom seeing some framed pictures on the dresser. The pictures showed Tina and her friends and Bette smiled at the goofy ones.
“Hey” Tina smiled as she walked into the room and up to Bette “The tea’s ready”
“Ok” Bette smiled “So these pictures are all of your friends?” she asked.
“Yeah” Tina smiled.
“You don’t have any of your family?” Bette asked seeing Tina’s smile disappear “I’m sorry” she said quickly “Never mind”
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(3 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
Loving this rewrite.
this is soo great lllooovveeee this story thank you!!!
Such a cute date ! I love this story :]
This is really interesting – please keep up with the rewrite. I enjoyed the original too!
LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!
Great story,thank you for the update.PPS
Thank you love this story.