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Fall in Vermont Chapter 13
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Shane entered the conversation with a distraction just in the nick of
time. “Hey Jessie look what I got for you yesterday” Shane held up a
small black and pink wet suit. “I was think you could go boogie
boarding with me today” Jessie looked thrilled. “Actually that would be
great since Auntie Bette has surprise for mommy today too” Bette gave
Shane a grateful look of relief and so did Tina.
“Tina, Alice will be here in about an hour to escort you to your
surprise” Tina looked very curious but was willing to go along with
Bette’s plan. Tina dressed and brought along the things Bette told her
she needed.
“So what’s this plan Ms. Porter?” Tina and Bette were alone for a few
minutes in Tina’s room. Bette moved in behind Tina holding her at the
waist and giving her neck a gentle kiss. “I think that you are an
amazing mommy and that you deserve some time to yourself and pampering”
“Bette you are too much” “This is only the beginning Baby, only the
beginning” They swayed together exchanging a kiss full of desire.
Alice knocked on the door poking her head in. “All right love birds cut
it out” Bette and Tina laughed at being caught in such a passionate
kiss. “And what about Jessie?” “No worries Baby, she’ll be with me and
Shane. You just relax and enjoy some Tina time” “Oh my gosh you two are
so cute” Alice was really happy to see her friends so close and so into
one another”
Tina could not believe Bette had booked her for a Spa day at the
Beverly Hills Hotel. From the moment she arrived she was being
pampered; massage, wraps, wax, fresh juice squeezed in front of her.
Alice made certain she turned her phone on silent and did nothing but
relax. They giggled together for hours and talked about babies and
love.
Jessie was like a fish. You could not keep her out of the water and
thank goodness so was Shane. After lunch Bette said one more time in
the water then time for some rest and a nap. Bette laid her towel out
on the deck and decided she would take a nap herself.
But she was woken up by Shane’s scream.
Bette leaped from her deck chair startled and feeling panic she ran
towards the beach and the sound of Shane’s call for help. As she
approached she could see that Jessie was lying on the edge of the waves
and the blood on Shane’s hands. “Is she breathing?” Bette’s heart was
racing and Shane looked shocked and somewhat pale herself. “I think so
but barely”
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Oh boy, here it comes!
This is a great story. It reads so well. You’re writing strikes the perfect balance. Look forward to the next chapter. Congratulations on your award. (TMerlin)
You deserve the award all the way! Devon better step off, he waived his rights. B&T don’t need this right now.
Wow, have just read your story from the beginning tonight and I can’t get enough of it. Such a great story, well written and makes me melt. Thanks for posting. Can’t wait for more when you’re ready – especially now that the drama is coming thick and fast.
First off, Congrats…Ms. Bomb!!! You are an incrediable romantic writer. Sea told me about you and so I caught up with your story today, this story is an inspiration, thank you. I want to kill Devon though but that is alright I know that I am not the only one. AS for little Jessie…i have fallen in love with her, she is just so adorable. AS for B&T, you truly have created such love, it is incrediable. You are awesome girl…keep it up.
LOL I had to laugh when I saw you posted. I hope I didn’t make you feel too guilty tonight!! Good God you had no problem bringing on the drama!! First Jessie, then Devon (the little jerk!) Thanks C…for not making us wait until Saturday morning!!! Now I can go to bed with a smile on my face! Oh, and I’ll go shopping for your tiara tomorrow little Miss ‘The Bomb’!
Oh, and grats on the award! Awesome story. :)
congratulations on your award, the story is absolutely great…devon has to back off…i don’t want him to create problems for B&T…maybe he can die surfing
Congratulations on the award, it’s so well deserved :o)) Another great and amazing chapter from you, but why all the drama LOL……”Dad” needs to back off and why is he angry at Bette – it should be the other way round…..Tina needs to tell him a thing or two, so he knows his place!!!! I’m already looking forward to next Friday – have a good weekend :o))
I was just about to head to bed when I saw you put up a new chapter. Thank god there was a nurse around to help Bette and Shane with Jessie. And Devon…WTF, mate? He has no reason to be pissed at Bette and needs to back the hell away.
Your story always puts a smile on my face, and hope in my heart.Thanks so much for sharing, and congrats you truly deserve it for keeping us sane thru this madness we call S3!!!!
I’m glad Jessie is fine and that B & T know where they are headed. I cannot stand Devon. He’s going to have his high power attorney mother try to revoke the contract he made with Tina about paternal rights. I just can see it now. God, Bette may just kill him first. LOL. Please continue.
I just love your story. Devon is going to be a big problem for our B&T. I hope he doesn’t cause any friction between them. You are a great writer and the FF award is very much deserved. Congrats!
Congrats on the award and thanks for giving us a good story to read while we go through the heartbreak of season 3!!!
Fuck that…maybe Devon needs to surf and hit his head! Thanks for the post and congrats on your award. you are awesome!
Great job.. I hope Tina consent papers are legal.. And I hope Kit steps in and Kicks Devons ass. They need to be together Bette & Tina not the third party.. Post soon.
Oh Lord, More drama….guess it wouldn’t be a very good story if there wasn’t a crisis for B&T to deal with. As long as they face it together, I can handle it. Congrats on the award. I do love your style of writing, obviously, so do the judges.
the shit is going to hit the fan!!!!!!!!!!!
Great chapter. I love your story. Congratulations on the award. Is very deserved. Looking forward to more.
you SO SO deserved the award — when i was computer less a few weeks ago yours was the only story i would have killed to hear. you are just brilliant mate — just so perfect. well done from one winner to another. :-)
I too would like to say congratulations. I love this story and only hope that Bette and Tina can have the family that they deserve to have. I hope that the agreement that Tina had him sign before the insemanation (can’t spell a lick) is legal and binding and that he has no foot to stand on. That way even with his mother the lawyer there is no way that he can claim Jessie as his daughter.
First, congratulations, well deserved. Now that jerk pork Devon needs to understand that he is a sperm donor who just happens to be related to one of the child’s parents and Tina needs to tell him to back off. Teddy bears and balloons in the emergency room, nice but inappropriate, already showing he doesn’t have the right stuff to be a parent. Preggers Alice is kind of bizarre, makes me just a little nervous. Liked the mouse ears look on Bette, she should wear them in Italy.
What the fuck, devon want his ass to get kick and Bette will doing it soon to him, and Kit too. Drama coming and let see what’s next, thanks! Congrats on your award!
Congrats on the award and what Fergz1 said, lol.
Congrats on your award, the story is absolutely AWESOME…
I first congratulate you on your award. It is the reason I am now aware of your great story. Second, although I agree that William Devon needs to back up, we have to keep in mind that he has probably only heard the bad things about Bette (the ex) from Tina. He has to feel the same about Bette as she feels about him. I’ll always be on Bette’s side, but…yes, this is drama!
Ahhh, and so the trouble begins with Devon. If Tina moves back to LA, is Devon going to be around? I don’t remember where he lives.