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Fall in Vermont Chapter 13
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The Doctor explained things to Tina and then asked Tina come with
Jessie to x-ray. It seemed like Jessie was now trying to say something.
“Mommy, Mommy” “Shhh, sweetie I’m here. Everything is going to be ok
now”
While Tina went with Jessie to get more tests Bette waited and Kit,
Alice and Shane waited with her. They all didn’t say very much. Bette
looked a million miles away in thought and Shane just paced the floor.
“Bette I should tell you that Devon is on his way over here too” Kit
knew Bette was not going to want to hear that but he was on his way to
club and found out there was a family emergency. “Bette did you hear
me?” “I don’t care if he’s here the only thing I can think about right
now is Jessie”
Just then Bette heard a familiar voice. “Ms Porter I’m Alec Simpson I
was on the beach with you and your daughter today.” “Oh my gosh thank
you so much” Bette sprang up to give the women who had been the nurse
on the beach a hug. “I’m a nurse here at the hospital and wanted to
check on you and Jessie” “She’s down in x-ray with Tina her mom. I’m
not Jessie’s mother” “Oh, I thought for certain you were. You certainly
acted with all the instincts of mom”
“And how are you?” Alec turned to address Shane who looked pale and
worried and had a cut above her eye and bruises. “Has anyone examined
you?” “Hey thanks but I’m fine” Shane did not want to be fussed over.
“Stop being so damn tough and let them check you out,” Alice said
sharply. “She’s right Shane, I want to make certain you are ok too”
Bette rubbed Shane’s shoulder letting her know that she was in no way
upset with Shane. “Come with me please” Alec point Shane towards an
examine room to check on her cut. She thought Shane might actually need
a couple of stitches and she also noticed what beautiful eyes Shane
had.
“And Bette you give me that sweatshirt back anytime you like” Alec said
with a smile. She had given Bette her sweatshirt on the beach when
Bette was using her t-shirt to stop Jessie’s bleeding.
After about an hour they all looked up to see Jessie being wheeled
backs to a more private exam area. Bette joined them along with the
doctor. At the same time Devon walked up with a huge teddy bear and a
balloon. “We don’t need everyone in here,” the Doctor said. “I’m
family,” said Devon. Bette gave him the look of death. It was what she
feared, Devon thinking he could assert himself as a Dad. “Doctor if you
don’t mind we all need to be here” Tina said trying to cut the tension
between Bette and Devon.
The Doctor looked at them all knowing that something was going on but
he complied with Tina’s request. “Jessie has a very mild concussion,
and is going to need stitches in the top of her head and to be watched
carefully the next 24 hours but all in all I will say she is one lucky
young lady” “Thank you Doctor we will watch her closely”
Tina and Bette looked relieved beyond words and Bette stepped into the
waiting room to inform everyone else. Shane was stilled being examined
by Alec.
Tina and Bette moved into the hallway away from everyone else. Tina sat
down in one of the chairs and began to cry as release and overwhelming
emotion. Bette bent down in front her wiping away her tears and giving
her a shoulder to cry on while speaking softly to her. “It’s ok Tee,
she’s fine” “Bette what if something had happened to her?” “Don’t think
like that baby” “Bette I need you to promise me something” “Anything
for you Tee” “If something ever happens to me you will be her family?”
Bette was overwhelmed herself now. She knew what Tina was really asking
her. Tina’s eyes searched Bette’s for an answer and there it was loud
and clear. “I love you with my entire being and Jessie too and I will,
I promise”. Their lips met in a crushing kiss of passion and intense
emotion after all that had happened that day; each of them trying to
express so much with this kiss.
Devon was really angry with Bette. And after thinking about it all week
he knew that he wanted to be a regular part of his daughter’s life.
Devon knew it was time to talk to his mother about Jessie. “Hi mom it’s Devon. I need to tell you something, I need your help”
tbc
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Oh boy, here it comes!
This is a great story. It reads so well. You’re writing strikes the perfect balance. Look forward to the next chapter. Congratulations on your award. (TMerlin)
You deserve the award all the way! Devon better step off, he waived his rights. B&T don’t need this right now.
Wow, have just read your story from the beginning tonight and I can’t get enough of it. Such a great story, well written and makes me melt. Thanks for posting. Can’t wait for more when you’re ready – especially now that the drama is coming thick and fast.
First off, Congrats…Ms. Bomb!!! You are an incrediable romantic writer. Sea told me about you and so I caught up with your story today, this story is an inspiration, thank you. I want to kill Devon though but that is alright I know that I am not the only one. AS for little Jessie…i have fallen in love with her, she is just so adorable. AS for B&T, you truly have created such love, it is incrediable. You are awesome girl…keep it up.
LOL I had to laugh when I saw you posted. I hope I didn’t make you feel too guilty tonight!! Good God you had no problem bringing on the drama!! First Jessie, then Devon (the little jerk!) Thanks C…for not making us wait until Saturday morning!!! Now I can go to bed with a smile on my face! Oh, and I’ll go shopping for your tiara tomorrow little Miss ‘The Bomb’!
Oh, and grats on the award! Awesome story. :)
congratulations on your award, the story is absolutely great…devon has to back off…i don’t want him to create problems for B&T…maybe he can die surfing
Congratulations on the award, it’s so well deserved :o)) Another great and amazing chapter from you, but why all the drama LOL……”Dad” needs to back off and why is he angry at Bette – it should be the other way round…..Tina needs to tell him a thing or two, so he knows his place!!!! I’m already looking forward to next Friday – have a good weekend :o))
I was just about to head to bed when I saw you put up a new chapter. Thank god there was a nurse around to help Bette and Shane with Jessie. And Devon…WTF, mate? He has no reason to be pissed at Bette and needs to back the hell away.
Your story always puts a smile on my face, and hope in my heart.Thanks so much for sharing, and congrats you truly deserve it for keeping us sane thru this madness we call S3!!!!
I’m glad Jessie is fine and that B & T know where they are headed. I cannot stand Devon. He’s going to have his high power attorney mother try to revoke the contract he made with Tina about paternal rights. I just can see it now. God, Bette may just kill him first. LOL. Please continue.
I just love your story. Devon is going to be a big problem for our B&T. I hope he doesn’t cause any friction between them. You are a great writer and the FF award is very much deserved. Congrats!
Congrats on the award and thanks for giving us a good story to read while we go through the heartbreak of season 3!!!
Fuck that…maybe Devon needs to surf and hit his head! Thanks for the post and congrats on your award. you are awesome!
Great job.. I hope Tina consent papers are legal.. And I hope Kit steps in and Kicks Devons ass. They need to be together Bette & Tina not the third party.. Post soon.
Oh Lord, More drama….guess it wouldn’t be a very good story if there wasn’t a crisis for B&T to deal with. As long as they face it together, I can handle it. Congrats on the award. I do love your style of writing, obviously, so do the judges.
the shit is going to hit the fan!!!!!!!!!!!
Great chapter. I love your story. Congratulations on the award. Is very deserved. Looking forward to more.
you SO SO deserved the award — when i was computer less a few weeks ago yours was the only story i would have killed to hear. you are just brilliant mate — just so perfect. well done from one winner to another. :-)
I too would like to say congratulations. I love this story and only hope that Bette and Tina can have the family that they deserve to have. I hope that the agreement that Tina had him sign before the insemanation (can’t spell a lick) is legal and binding and that he has no foot to stand on. That way even with his mother the lawyer there is no way that he can claim Jessie as his daughter.
First, congratulations, well deserved. Now that jerk pork Devon needs to understand that he is a sperm donor who just happens to be related to one of the child’s parents and Tina needs to tell him to back off. Teddy bears and balloons in the emergency room, nice but inappropriate, already showing he doesn’t have the right stuff to be a parent. Preggers Alice is kind of bizarre, makes me just a little nervous. Liked the mouse ears look on Bette, she should wear them in Italy.
What the fuck, devon want his ass to get kick and Bette will doing it soon to him, and Kit too. Drama coming and let see what’s next, thanks! Congrats on your award!
Congrats on the award and what Fergz1 said, lol.
Congrats on your award, the story is absolutely AWESOME…
I first congratulate you on your award. It is the reason I am now aware of your great story. Second, although I agree that William Devon needs to back up, we have to keep in mind that he has probably only heard the bad things about Bette (the ex) from Tina. He has to feel the same about Bette as she feels about him. I’ll always be on Bette’s side, but…yes, this is drama!
Ahhh, and so the trouble begins with Devon. If Tina moves back to LA, is Devon going to be around? I don’t remember where he lives.