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Fall in Vermont Chapter 13
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Bette ripped off her shirt to apply pressure and stop the bleeding. She
then began CPR. “Take my phone Shane and call 911″ Jessie was now
breathing shallow breaths and Shane was holding the shirt on her head
to apply pressure while talking to 911 for help. A crowd of a few
people hand suddenly gathered. A woman in running shorts and sweat
shirt knelt down beside Bette. “I’m a nurse please let me help your
daughter”
Bette complied and pulled away her hands that were now shaking. She
knew she needed to get to Tina right away. They climbed in the back of
the ambulance with Jessie on oxygen and barely conscious. Bette held
Jessie’s little hand and stroked her face telling her over and over
again that she was going to be ok.
No answer from Tina’s cell. Bette tried Alice there was no way Alice
would not pick up her phone. “Hello” “Alice give me Tina there has been
an accident” Bette was doing everything she could to keep from crying.
“Tina it’s Bette there’s been some kind of accident”.
Tina grabbed the phone her heart now pounding in her chest. She was
lying on the massage table and now she was reaching for her clothes.
“Baby, what happened” “Tina meet me at Santa Monica Medical. Jessie and
Shane were body surfing and she hit her head as she they came off a
wave. I guess there were some rocks they didn’t see” “Oh my God, my
baby” Tina’s knee’s felt weak but she was also out of her mind with
worry to get to her daughter” “Bette tell me right now is she all
right” “Tee she’s breathing, she did cut her head and she has movement
in her feet there was a nurse on the beach that was a huge help”
“Ok, I will be there as fast as I can” “Ok Baby but please let Alice
drive. I don’t need both my girls hurt today.” “Bette you do whatever
is needed” “I will, please hurry”.
They arrived at the hospital. Rushing Jessie into the exam room. Bette
never left her side. “Please Doctor what’s going on?” The Doctor was
looking at Jessie but not saying much to Bette. “We need to do some
x-rays, she needs stitches and that’s what I know for now.” “At that
moment Tina entered the exam room and went straight to Jessie’s side.
“Mommy is here sweetheart, Mommy is here”. With her other hand Tina
reached for Bette. Bette kissed Tina’s hand and put her arm around
Tina’s shoulder to help strength and comfort her.
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Oh boy, here it comes!
This is a great story. It reads so well. You’re writing strikes the perfect balance. Look forward to the next chapter. Congratulations on your award. (TMerlin)
You deserve the award all the way! Devon better step off, he waived his rights. B&T don’t need this right now.
Wow, have just read your story from the beginning tonight and I can’t get enough of it. Such a great story, well written and makes me melt. Thanks for posting. Can’t wait for more when you’re ready – especially now that the drama is coming thick and fast.
First off, Congrats…Ms. Bomb!!! You are an incrediable romantic writer. Sea told me about you and so I caught up with your story today, this story is an inspiration, thank you. I want to kill Devon though but that is alright I know that I am not the only one. AS for little Jessie…i have fallen in love with her, she is just so adorable. AS for B&T, you truly have created such love, it is incrediable. You are awesome girl…keep it up.
LOL I had to laugh when I saw you posted. I hope I didn’t make you feel too guilty tonight!! Good God you had no problem bringing on the drama!! First Jessie, then Devon (the little jerk!) Thanks C…for not making us wait until Saturday morning!!! Now I can go to bed with a smile on my face! Oh, and I’ll go shopping for your tiara tomorrow little Miss ‘The Bomb’!
Oh, and grats on the award! Awesome story. :)
congratulations on your award, the story is absolutely great…devon has to back off…i don’t want him to create problems for B&T…maybe he can die surfing
Congratulations on the award, it’s so well deserved :o)) Another great and amazing chapter from you, but why all the drama LOL……”Dad” needs to back off and why is he angry at Bette – it should be the other way round…..Tina needs to tell him a thing or two, so he knows his place!!!! I’m already looking forward to next Friday – have a good weekend :o))
I was just about to head to bed when I saw you put up a new chapter. Thank god there was a nurse around to help Bette and Shane with Jessie. And Devon…WTF, mate? He has no reason to be pissed at Bette and needs to back the hell away.
Your story always puts a smile on my face, and hope in my heart.Thanks so much for sharing, and congrats you truly deserve it for keeping us sane thru this madness we call S3!!!!
I’m glad Jessie is fine and that B & T know where they are headed. I cannot stand Devon. He’s going to have his high power attorney mother try to revoke the contract he made with Tina about paternal rights. I just can see it now. God, Bette may just kill him first. LOL. Please continue.
I just love your story. Devon is going to be a big problem for our B&T. I hope he doesn’t cause any friction between them. You are a great writer and the FF award is very much deserved. Congrats!
Congrats on the award and thanks for giving us a good story to read while we go through the heartbreak of season 3!!!
Fuck that…maybe Devon needs to surf and hit his head! Thanks for the post and congrats on your award. you are awesome!
Great job.. I hope Tina consent papers are legal.. And I hope Kit steps in and Kicks Devons ass. They need to be together Bette & Tina not the third party.. Post soon.
Oh Lord, More drama….guess it wouldn’t be a very good story if there wasn’t a crisis for B&T to deal with. As long as they face it together, I can handle it. Congrats on the award. I do love your style of writing, obviously, so do the judges.
the shit is going to hit the fan!!!!!!!!!!!
Great chapter. I love your story. Congratulations on the award. Is very deserved. Looking forward to more.
you SO SO deserved the award — when i was computer less a few weeks ago yours was the only story i would have killed to hear. you are just brilliant mate — just so perfect. well done from one winner to another. :-)
I too would like to say congratulations. I love this story and only hope that Bette and Tina can have the family that they deserve to have. I hope that the agreement that Tina had him sign before the insemanation (can’t spell a lick) is legal and binding and that he has no foot to stand on. That way even with his mother the lawyer there is no way that he can claim Jessie as his daughter.
First, congratulations, well deserved. Now that jerk pork Devon needs to understand that he is a sperm donor who just happens to be related to one of the child’s parents and Tina needs to tell him to back off. Teddy bears and balloons in the emergency room, nice but inappropriate, already showing he doesn’t have the right stuff to be a parent. Preggers Alice is kind of bizarre, makes me just a little nervous. Liked the mouse ears look on Bette, she should wear them in Italy.
What the fuck, devon want his ass to get kick and Bette will doing it soon to him, and Kit too. Drama coming and let see what’s next, thanks! Congrats on your award!
Congrats on the award and what Fergz1 said, lol.
Congrats on your award, the story is absolutely AWESOME…
I first congratulate you on your award. It is the reason I am now aware of your great story. Second, although I agree that William Devon needs to back up, we have to keep in mind that he has probably only heard the bad things about Bette (the ex) from Tina. He has to feel the same about Bette as she feels about him. I’ll always be on Bette’s side, but…yes, this is drama!
Ahhh, and so the trouble begins with Devon. If Tina moves back to LA, is Devon going to be around? I don’t remember where he lives.