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    Fear, fearful, fearless

    Story written on January 11, 2015 by robyntibetter.
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    Tito waved to his left, and four bouncers came out dragging two men on the floor, both beaten up and bleeding excessively. The people in the room soon made way for them. Two bloody lines stained the dust-free tiles as the men were dragged across the room to Jorge’s feet. Then they were dropped heavily

    Tito waved to his left, and four bouncers came out dragging two men on the floor, both beaten up and bleeding excessively. The people in the room soon made way for them. Two bloody lines stained the dust-free tiles as the men were dragged across the room to Jorge’s feet. Then they were dropped heavily on the floor.

    Tina almost broke out into tears when she finally saw the blood covered face of the two men. One of them was Henry, the other one, she remembered from the files, was Henry’s voucher, Leon. Henry was still struggling, and getting kicked in the ribs, while Leon seemed to have completely given up, lying there lifelessly.

    Bette sensed the woman tensing up. She moved a little and took her into her arm.

    “It’s… it’s a misunderstanding…” Henry begged, barely making out a sentence with most of his teeth gone missing. The blood in his mouth gurgled and he coughed and spat out some, nearly staining Jorge’s shoe—another mistake that earned him a few more kicks in the stomach.

    “A misunderstanding you say?” Jorge faked a surprised look. He shot up one eye brow and looked down at the man as if he was not bothered by all the blood. “Well then, explain, why is that only your site got busted today? Coz, I can’t think of another person who could’ve told the uniform that I’d be there. Hmmm.” He stroke his chin and chuckled. A cruel chuckle it was. “Oh, and how about that extra fifty thousand. Shouldn’t it be under my name? Unless it grew legs and ran to yours.” 

    “I’m sorry…! I’m sorry.” Henry squirmed in pain and begged more.

    “No no no, I’m sorry,” Jorge suddenly lowered his voice, and crotched down beside Henry. “coz I’m going to break every single bone in your body, and throw you into Lake Michigan. Maybe you’ll get lucky some fishermen will find your body, maybe you’ll get eaten by the lake monster.” He stood up and nodded to the bouncers.

    The big men resumed their torture, even bringing out a hammer to smash the bones in his leg.

    Nobody even had to hold him down. Both his feet had holes in them, the blood welling out of his shoes. When he wanted to climb away, Jorge took out his handgun and shot him right in the back of his hands. And he screamed more, like a pig being slaughtered.

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    1. Author:

      It’s been a long day worrying about our dear sweet Pie. She just messaged me, so she’s out of the woods and recovering. Wish her a very speedy recovery and come back to us soon.
      I want to dedicate this chapter to Pie, although it is a little…violent, well, maybe next chapter then!

      Also SO to the lovely ladies reading and commenting, and being so supportive and kind this entire day. Now we can all settle down and take a nice long breath haaaaaaaaa….

      And for the covering pic, yeah, I always envision Jason Stantham as the gentlemanly villain of my story.
      I hope you all like how I took care of Henry/Eric. He deserved what he got. So… one less thing to worry about.

      Of course I left you with a teaser, coz I’m a terrible tease. And the playfulness returned to me as I knew my friend was ok.

      Peace :)

      • This chapter, like the last few days worrying about Pie, was intense! Dedicate the next one to our Sweet Pie.

        Having awoken this morning to a DM from Pie I even forgive you your teasers.

        Thank you for your comments and to you and all the others who have been a part of these last worrying days thank you for your prayers.

        Peace:)

    4. I’m so glad that Pie starts getting better, and I know that she will do it! I also wish her a very speedy recovery and return to us because of the lack already be felt on this site and in our hearts too!
      So you’re a tease us? not nice :P
      It was indeed a very strong chapter, and yes, Henry received what he deserve.
      I’m looking forward to the sequel!

    5. Phew, so far the most cruel chapter i ever read, you did a excellent job describing the punishment “rats” deserve.

      Yes, you are a tease, but i will forgive you; )

      Glad to hear Pie_Fair is getting better.

    7. Pure adrenaline !!! I was reading each line
      and could hardly breathe when henry mouse
      was trying to Deliver Tina, my God !! I was
      distressed, because I thought Tina would be discovered, and thanks
      Bette protection that did not happen, and when the dog
      Jody tried to overdose of Tina and Bette not
      allowed, I vibrei.Foi much excitement for my poor
      heart, Phew!
      And you said a short stretch near pro
      chapter, I look forward.
      I need to strengthen my pro drug arsenal
      heart, because if this story continue this
      rhythm, I need to take care of myself.
      10 stars with much praise.

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