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Bette’s throat nearly closed. The images of all the torturing and killing came flooding back just like the blood. She swallowed, with some difficulty, but glad that it was finally over.
Just as the bouncers started to bag up the body, Jodi suddenly spoke. “Wait. Maybe Eric wasn’t pointing at Vincent.” She had been watching the brunette this whole time, and as she appeared, she was having a good night.
It soon captured everyone’s attention.
Jorge buckled his gun back to his belt and squinted at the brunette woman. He slowly walked up to her, who stood still under his stare. “Is that true?” His voice was like it came right out of his chest, a thick and low roar.
Bette didn’t budge for even a bit. She stood before him, in between Tina and the dangerous man. “No.”
“Hey, I even saw their little rendezvous in the back yard, all naked and noisy and stuff.” Jodi started her little tale telling. “Hmmm, maybe she’s another little rat.”
“You’re lying.” Bette of course wouldn’t believe a single word coming from the crazy woman. “And mind if I ask what were you doing in the back yard, with Andres, hmm?”
Jodi’s smug smirk immediately disappeared.
Jorge wasn’t in the mood for the crap from his wife. He just wanted to get pass Vincent by staring her down, but the woman just stared him back, with her unemotional eyes and frozen facial expression, telling him she didn’t like it when he questioned her loyalty and her woman. “Move.” The single word exchange was like a flash of a match that could easily light up the palpable dynamites in the air.
“I won’t.” Bette clenched her jaw, still holding Tina’s hand behind her back. “She is traumatized and I won’t let you interrogate my woman.”
“Vincent—” Jorge was clearly surprised by the stubbornness. He had never met anyone who just dismissed his demand and challenged him right in the eyes.
“Boss, if you question her, you’re questioning me.” Bette used her other hand to pull out her own handgun from the holster and handed it over to him. “And if I ever did anything to make you question me, just shoot me in the head I wouldn’t say a word.”
There was no reason for him to be doubting her. Jorge was actually impressed and stunned by this fearless woman. She was literally one of the best he had and why would he ever want to take advice from a rat. He nodded, and backed down. “I would never question you, Vincent. Just—ok, Kristen, my apologies for scaring you.” He felt a little guilty when he saw the blonde was sobbing and Vincent took her in for a comforting embrace. A gentleman should never cause tears for a lady.
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It’s been a long day worrying about our dear sweet Pie. She just messaged me, so she’s out of the woods and recovering. Wish her a very speedy recovery and come back to us soon.
I want to dedicate this chapter to Pie, although it is a little…violent, well, maybe next chapter then!
Also SO to the lovely ladies reading and commenting, and being so supportive and kind this entire day. Now we can all settle down and take a nice long breath haaaaaaaaa….
And for the covering pic, yeah, I always envision Jason Stantham as the gentlemanly villain of my story.
I hope you all like how I took care of Henry/Eric. He deserved what he got. So… one less thing to worry about.
Of course I left you with a teaser, coz I’m a terrible tease. And the playfulness returned to me as I knew my friend was ok.
Peace :)
This chapter, like the last few days worrying about Pie, was intense! Dedicate the next one to our Sweet Pie.
Having awoken this morning to a DM from Pie I even forgive you your teasers.
Thank you for your comments and to you and all the others who have been a part of these last worrying days thank you for your prayers.
Peace:)
That was intense! Thanks, I enjoyed it.
Great chapter. Just makes you want more. Looking forward to the next installment
I’m so glad that Pie starts getting better, and I know that she will do it! I also wish her a very speedy recovery and return to us because of the lack already be felt on this site and in our hearts too!
So you’re a tease us? not nice :P
It was indeed a very strong chapter, and yes, Henry received what he deserve.
I’m looking forward to the sequel!
Phew, so far the most cruel chapter i ever read, you did a excellent job describing the punishment “rats” deserve.
Yes, you are a tease, but i will forgive you; )
Glad to hear Pie_Fair is getting better.
Rob-you’ve done a superb job of research for this excellent chapter. Very proud of you and thankful to have you as a friend. Pie is smiling!
Pure adrenaline !!! I was reading each line
and could hardly breathe when henry mouse
was trying to Deliver Tina, my God !! I was
distressed, because I thought Tina would be discovered, and thanks
Bette protection that did not happen, and when the dog
Jody tried to overdose of Tina and Bette not
allowed, I vibrei.Foi much excitement for my poor
heart, Phew!
And you said a short stretch near pro
chapter, I look forward.
I need to strengthen my pro drug arsenal
heart, because if this story continue this
rhythm, I need to take care of myself.
10 stars with much praise.
Wow once again you have blown my mind with your writing, truly amazing. I could see every moment as it were happening, so well written. Love it