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Feeling Bound – Tina Kennard
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We’d stretched out on a couch, our view overlooking the city.
”You ordered an enormous piece of cake, may I get you some?” I’d asked.
”It smells good, doesn’t it?”
Returning with the cake, I’d sliced off a piece and brought it up to her lips, where it had disappeared in an instant. She’d licked her lips and our eyes had locked.
”Not yet, you and I have more cake to eat.” I remember saying, as I’d fed her another bite to keep her occupied.
”This is nice, Tina. I’m glad you came.”
”Are you different out of town? What is going on?”
”More cake, please,” she’d said.
”Okay, are you finished with me?”
”What do you mean?” she had looked shocked.
”I just…ah, crazy thought,” I’d stumbled, ”that maybe this business of having sex with me in airplanes and under tables in restaurants is some kind of last thrill fucking trip, because in your mind we’re over.”
”Put the cake away. We need to talk.” She’d sat up on the couch.
If I’d learned one thing in the six months I’d been dating her it was during her sensual moods, talking has very little interest to her yet, riled she’d prevailed.
”Why on earth would you think that? Am I not being a good host to you in New York?”
I’d gone over to the tray with the wine and poured myself half a glass, keeping my back to her.
”Tina, bring me one, too, please and on the way over – do answer me.”
”You’re always going to be like this, aren’t you? Highly sexed, always waiting to pounce, you can’t be that one dimensional.”
She’d laughed and had taken her wine. ”You’re about to talk yourself out of something really fantastic later.”
”You realize you made my point?”
”Do you realize I have no intention of arguing with you? About what? That I’m crazy about you and brought you to New York to…well, I was going to wait until fucking later, but…” her voice had grown agitated, ”do you want to live with me?”
”Huh?”
”Goddammit! You’ve got me mad now.” She’d started pacing the suite, her bathrobe flying open at times, showing me her shaved black patch that went straight down in a perfect black line.
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Oh Blackbird, it is not the first time i a read it, but it seems better than the first time! Better is not the right word, it is amazing!
I truly enjoy the inner thoughts from Tina and Bette, they are funny, sexy but most important they tell and explain their feelings, reasons why they have handled or have done things or spoke in the past or more recent.
It’s fantastic how you let them tell about their past and memories.
I’m already ready for your next chapter !
Thanks again for reposting this fantastic story!
Bibi, There are maybe 120 words that are similar to the story from 2014, making this one very different. After I enjoyed polishing “Remembering Me” (after your hints) I’m finding great themes in that series when all the stories had them “them behind the scenes” and my imagination of what might have happened,
It’s a funny thing writers say to each other about something they’ve written – that one day they may go back to it and find pieces of gold to use for something else.
That happened here and my storytelling has improved over time.
Delighted you enjoyed the tale! Always appreciate your comments and that you enjoy my stories.
Blackbird
I am delighted you found the pieces of gold to use it for something else, this new and improved version.
Only like 120 words that are similar ???? wow, i already thought that this was not the original story, but you wrote it a few years ago and i can’t remember the story word for word.
I will reread it somewhere in the future.
I am looking forward to the moment Tina get her wish to have a ring on her finger.
I have such a crush at Laurel. I totally love her picture on page one ????
Hey Bb
Very nice and hot chapter, I have read this story on your website, but I think here is a little different, improved, I would say; I like very much your narrative from Tina’s point of view, how she describe herself emerging from a conservative and traditional family toward a free environment where she can openly behave the way she is and feels, and then her story with Bette. Thanks so much for the chapter I’ll wait for the update.
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Thanks Proteonomics, As I said to Bibi, I’m changing the storylines in this series that I wrote in 2014. I’m planning on eliminating many tiresome things the writers did in the show, like Henry and Jodie, as examples. We won’t see them.
Here in this rewrite, our lovers are together and Tina, as you’ve just read, has decided she wants a ring on her finger, and soon.
Bye for now,
Blackbird
YAY!!!!????. Excellent, drama is good but hatred is too much. Thanks for re-writing this very nice story.
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Not much for a lot of words but wanted you to know how much I am enjoying the rewrite.
Nice of you to come down from the ethers and drop me a line! Nice to see you. I’m delighted you’re enjoying the progress. Presently, I’m staring at the ceiling trying to help Tina figure out how to test the marriage waters with Bette or perhaps tricking her into flying the Boston. I’m leaning toward tricking her.
Let’s see what happens…
Blackbird
Hiding from work in the cushness of the 1st floor handicap stall yeah I really shouldn’t be reading this stuff at work. Loved it!!!!
”You want a blindfold to go with that?”