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Finale – Frozen Beginning
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It was Bette’s turn to gasp in wonderment as Tina now bared her chest below her. Her mouth watered as she immediately lowered her head to suck a breast in her mouth, flicking her tongue out to tease a hard nipple before biting down gently.
Hands clutched at brown curls and the panting increased.
“Bette.”
It was a good thing her father wasn’t at home or …
Unbeknown to them, the thought entered both women’s mind at the same time, quickly discarded as more pressing matters were at hand.
Bette smiled once more at hearing the soft noises Tina made as she was subjected to her attention.
“I missed the way you say my name.” She released a nipple with a little pop, “Especially when you plead.”
“I don’t do that..” Tina scoffed.
“Is that right?” Bette stopped what she was doing, pushing up on her arms to lift herself out of Tina’s reach.
It only took one look from hazel eyes. The warning was sufficient.
Bette grinned and lowered herself back down greeted by a satisfactory growl from Tina and eager hands intend on ridding the financier of her clothing. Shirt, bra, pants were removed in one fluid movement leaving the brunette with a flicker in her eye and very appreciative of Tina’s enthusiastic impatience.
“I forget how hot it can be to let someone else be in charge for once.”
“Shut up.” The blonde growled rolling her eyes. She flipped their position, kissing Bette hard , gentle touches forgotten as their lips moved together once more with the hunger caused by their long time ‘apart’.
Bette gripped the blonde’s curvy hips, thumbs tracing lazy circles enjoying the weight of the smaller woman as she pressed into her and the feel of their breasts touching once more.
“You are so beautiful.” Bette voiced raggedly between each kiss.
Tina giggled enjoying how powerless Bette had suddenly become. She allowed herself to be rolled back over however, raising her hips to help Bette with the removal of her skirt and underwear, gripping the cushions tight below her when Bette wasted no time and began ghosting a hand over her teasingly.
“Oh my God!” Tina moaned enjoying the light tracing pattern one of Bette’s finger had begun.
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So good to see a update! But did it had to be the last one :-(
But the promise you made to return is making me happy.
Bette totally deserved that slap, i certainly could feel and hear it.
Awesome story! Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
A finale i enjoyed reading.BETTE/TINA together and a little one,thanks .
Thanks for giving us this wonderful story! I like how Bette finally dropps her slightly arrogant behaviour and sacastic remarks and finally confesses her feelings to Tina. Although she already kind of did that at the end of chap. 8, didn’t she? I love the elevator scene when Bette whispers “I cannot forget” to Tina. :-)
I’m a little sad that FB has come to an end but I’m happy to read that you already work on new stories. I think you are a very talented writer and I enjoy your stories immensely.
I enjoyed you story. Thankyou. I’m happy that they are together. Thx for a great end. can’t wait for your new storie
Damn life! Unfortunately this story came to an end ..
Bette finally opened her heart to Tina, is
that slap, ours! Bette well it deserved.
It was a perfect end with pregnant Tina.
Congratulations for this NC 17 was wonderful !.
You are an excellent writer.
The complete constellation.
Thanks so much for finishing this story Kins, I’ve loved it from the start :)
Look forward to more of your great posts with my favourite couple :)
Loved this story. Sorry to see it end but looking forward to more stories. Thanks for giving me many enjoyable hours
Aaaaw so pleased it all worked out in the end.At one point there I thought
Tina was going to rebel and tell Bette where to go.Loved the slap.Bette was so arrogant at times.So full of herself..but in the end she managed to sweet talk Tina
and profess her true feelings for her.
A lovely NC17 ending.Lovingly told.
Great last chapter Kins my dear friend.A true Tibette ending…xx C
Thanks! Sorry to see it end but happy to get another story soon! Be Blessed! PPS
Yeah, I’m thinking you didn’t tag me with this posting since my 44 page vs. your 9 page and 18,000+ written word vs. your 3,800 written word post is no fair trade.
You’ve got more work to do, my dear. I’ll wait patiently for those 2 new docs you’ve got in the works.
Loved every word of this fic, hope to read more of your work soon :)
Another master piece! Thankyou Kins!! Love your writing. Keep going please :)
I’m really sad to see this end, this was a portrayal of Bette and Tina that always had us wanting more. A pity we didn’t get to see more of their life together. Maybe we could have a few snippets of their life, before and after their marriage and pregnancy? Here’s to hoping! And even if that’s not possible, I’m glad to know you have other stories in the works! I’ll read anything you write. :)
So so good kins! Loved it! Especially the very end. I’m a sucker for babies! Haha!
I loved every bit of this story! Beautifully written with such an amazing storyline. I had a feeling there was a connection between Bette and Tina’s father and your story was brilliant in how it came together. I love how he knew there was something between even though he didn’t say and how persistent Bette was. Absolutely brilliant! And the ending perfect!