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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 52

    Story written on June 20, 2005 by OCD.
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    Coming Home

     

    Moving her legs from around Bettes waist, she laid her body on top of Bette as they lowered themselves down onto the bed.  The fire building inside of her, but mostly between Tinas legs needed to feel Bettes body against her.  Kissing Bette passionately, pressing her body as hard as she could against Bettes center.  Tina felt such an intense desire building.  Grinding her center against Bette, she began to move her body.  Feeling her wetness soaking her panties dripping onto her thighs, she moved her body faster against Bettes body.    She felt Bettes hip raise to meet her own.  Tina was kissing and biting Bettes neck sweetly.  Their bodys finding a perfect rhythm, their pace now moving so fast.  Pressing deeper and deeper against one another. 

     

    Bette could feel her body losing control.  She was so close.  Yes baby, Yes Tina, I’m there baby.  Please come with me.  Take me there Tina.   Take us there together.  Bette moaned into Tinas neck as she held onto Tinas hips pulling her harder against her.  Tinas body was rocking so hard against Bettes it only took a second more before Bettes ***** exploded against Tinas body.  Bette moaning, calling Tinas name.  Bette felt her body tremble as waves after wave of her ***** took her completely over the edge. 

     

    As Bette felt her ***** subsiding Tinas body was still thrusting against Bette as hard as she could.  Bette looking at Tina could tell something was wrong.  Bette could tell that Tina was not able to bring herself to climax.  Tina, baby, its ok.  Let me help you baby, Bette whispered.  No!  Tina said as she continued to rock her body faster against Bette.  Bette could feel the pounding against her center becoming painful. 

     

    Trying to allow Tina to bring herself to ***** Bette wrapped her arms around Tina talking to her, moving her center against Tina.  Finally out of pure exhaustion Tinas body collapsed on top of Bette as she burst out in tears against Bettes chest.  Whats wrong with me? Tinas cried.  Bette held Tina in her arms talking to her with comforting words.  Tina, its ok baby.  Its ok.  Its normal after what you have been through honey.  Bette said trying to sound convincing.  Its not normal.  I’m not normal.  Ill never be me again ever!  Tina cried out.  Yes you will baby and Ill help you there.  I love you so much Tina.  Please baby.  Let me help you Bette said pleading with Tina.  Bette, please help me.  I want to be me again.  I want to feel again.  I cant feel Bette.  Please help me.  Tina was crying so hard it was all Bette could do to hold onto her. 

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    1. Oh my freaking God, Tk. That was freaking…ah…amazing. It was so entirely good I just don’t have to the words.

      I will say this…so not posting my chapter after this one, wow. *shakes head* Wow. Gotta love it.

    2. Another great chapter. Thanks. Gee, I missed that part of the news tonight. DRH is now my number one hospital to never enter as a patient. It used to be Wake Med! Oh well.. It doesn’t help that I work at *u*e and have seen how they handle things.

    3. OCD…you get two thumbs up! Truly amazing/fantastic/awesome/excellent. I bow before you ole great one. Please post again soon. Thanks for sharing your incredible writing talent with us.

    4. OMG…you’re truly an amazing writer. I was SO into the chapter…I want more! I’m addicted. I agree you deserve an award for your story. Thanks for writing — great job.

    5. Another really great chapter! I am so glad B was able to catch T before she boarded the plane. I am hoping things will get back to ‘normal’ soon though.

    6. Another wonderful chapter! You certainly know how to take your readers to the brink of a nervous breakdown just to pull us back in the nick of time!! Looking foward to your next chapter!

    7. TK…that was beautiful…loved it…and i am so glad you didn’t leave us hanging… also love how the gang all came to bette rescue….please comtinue…we need more

    8. OMG.You almost had me in tears.Great update.Sorry about all of your physical ailments.I fractured my foot and it sucks to be injured.Keep The Faith and Good Luck To You.

    10. OCD : As I said – you are the Queen of DRamA :D – I love your story every bit of it and you sure know how to drum up the suspense. At least your story had all the elements of pain, heartaches, laughter, sadness, fears and not just some story that goes on endlessly without ending that is always end up the same – YOURS IS DEFINITELY different!!! YOU DESERVE AN AWARD FOR THIS STORY!!!!

    13. Are you personally trying to kill me??? What have I ever done but read every chapter and thoroughly enjoyed it. Now, you want to scare the living day lights out of me by having Tina leave? Girl, if you weren’t already injured I’d surely put a beating on you! Just kidding. This should help TnB with their intimacy! Yay!

    17. Oh god you had me for a whiole there, i really thought she was going to go and never come back! Enough with the drama will ya, get them back home and get that bitch outta Tina’s head as much as someone who raped you can be!

    18. Thank god, you scare the shit of me, but glad Bette found Tina at the time Tina on the line go to the plane. Ok now let see what’s next. Post soon, thanks! Great chapter!

    19. I´m with kg on this one TK – you really deserve an award for this story. You have put us trough hell and back, but your stories are always wonderful and you are the DRAMA QUEEN. I think you have all of us by the end of a seat everytime we see an update from you and we expect a rollercoster ride everytime. You are truely an amazing writer TK. Thank you for this wonderful story of yours and do post soon. I know I have been absent from commenting but I have been away for about a weeks time, so I have to update my own story as well. Post soon TK – you know we love you

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