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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 53

     

    Tina:  Bette!  Baby, can you come here. 

     

    Bette:  Whats wrong?  Oh no!  Not again.  We are going to have to put their cribs further apart.  You know that dont you. 

     

    Tina:  I assume you didnt leave the baby powder that close, huh?

     

    Bette:  No, not since the last time it took me two hours to clean it up.  I guess Kit must have. 

     

    Tina:  Well, you grab Jordan and Ill get Amy Jo into the tub.  If you will bath them, I will vacuum up WW III powder storm in here. 

     

    Bette:  Yea, well maybe I should vacuum them as well. 

     

    Both were laughing at this.  There precious little wonders covered head to toe in baby powder thanks to Amy Jo and her band the Hissy Fits and shaking it all over like Elvis. 

     

    Ok here we go all clean and smelling like.  Tina they still smell like baby powder.  I just finished bathing them.  Bette yells from the bathroom.  Tina came in and smelled of the twins.  No baby, its not the twins. Its you.  Look in the mirror.  Your face and hair is covered in baby powder, Tina said laughing as she went back to vacuum. 

     

    Yeah, well you can bathe them next time and get powder all in your face and hair and get all gooie.  Bette yelled at Tina.  What babe, I cant hear you over the vacuum.  Tina yelled.  Oh, I just bet you cant hear me.  Its always funny when I get it in the face.  Oh lets just laugh at me why dont ya.  Smartass Bette mumbled.  I heard that Tina yelled.  Yea, see there.  You are hearing impaired too.  Its called selective hearing, Bette yelled once again.  Fine Ill fix her, Bette said to the twins.

     

    Tina had just finished putting the vacuum up in the hallway closet.   She turned to see three very clean but very naked little butts walking down the hall.  Tina couldnt help but bust out laughing at the sight.  Walking into the twins room Bette placed Jordan in his crib long enough to get Amy Jo dressed.  Tina was still laughing standing in the doorway looking at Bette with Amy Jo on the changing table.  Bette glanced back over her shoulder and said, Well if you cant beat them, join them just as Amy Jo squirted the baby powder in Bettes face again.  Tina started laughing so hard she sat right down on the floor holding her chest.  She didnt know which was worse.  That she couldnt catch her breath or that she was about to pee in her pants.  Bette just stood there looking like the ole comedy classics where someone yelled Makeup and she got hit with a powder puff.

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    1. Gah! Woman that was completely amazing. Totally loved it. You used the magic words, heh. I love how Bette was so conscious of how Tina felt and that Tina knew this and felt more loved. More, later twin!

    2. good chapter – i think now may be a good time to get Tina to get pass her trauma and bring perhaps a closure to the rape thing – how long can both T&B be tortured and not to make the story too draggy – tks

    3. As always, great chapter. You are actually showing true love at its finest & what happens with communication & love. Keep up the good work, just keep the love flowing. Oh, and much – much more pertaining to the twins please — THANKS!

    4. Good chapter. Yes Bette’s eyes is have alot of love and safe. Now Tina need to see Bette’s eyes and she will find love and safe and like home again. Post soon, thanks!

    5. OMFG – I died and came back to life between this chapter and the last. This is so excellent. I can’t get enough. Please becareful with the arm and continue to write “softly”.

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