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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 53

     

    Things finally settled down after lunch.  Bette was in the family room watching cartoons with Amy Jo and Jordan.  Tina noticed it had gotten very quiet.  Tina peaked around the corner, but all she could see was the back of Bettes head on the couch.  As she walked over to the front of the couch there laid the most beautiful sight.  Bette asleep on the couch with Amy Jo on one side and Jordan on the other with Bettes arms wrapped around them both as they slept soundly against Bettes chest. 

     

    There was a knock at the front door, as everyone knew not to ring the bell.  Tina was expecting Sharon.  She leaned down, kissed Bette on her forehead, and went to answer the door.  Since Bette and the kids were in the family room, Tina decided to use Bettes office at the other end of the house. 

     

    Sharon:  How are you feeling today Tina?

     

    Tina:  Much better thanks. 

     

    Sharon:  I understand you left last night leaving Bette a note that she would be better off.

     

    Tina:  Its complicated.  But, how did you know?

     

    Sharon:  Bette called.  She didnt know what to do.  Her heart told her to go after you, find you, but she was afraid you might not come back.  She called me asking what she should do. 

     

    Tina:  We were  I was… making love to her. Everything felt so right, so perfect.  I thought I was ready.  But then I couldnt..  I was so close and then it just disappeared.  Sharon, whats wrong with me?  This is my Bette.  I have loved her, trusted her always and my body now betrays me.  I felt everything up to the point of climax and then I Its like I forced it away. 

     

    Sharon:  Tina there is nothing wrong with you.  Other than the fact that you are going through the healing process after a very emotionally damaging rape.  This has nothing to do with whether you love or trust Bette.  It has everything to do with you trusting yourself.  What I mean is.  Last night you prevented your body from experiencing an ***** with Bette.  Now why do you think that happened?

    Comments

    1. Gah! Woman that was completely amazing. Totally loved it. You used the magic words, heh. I love how Bette was so conscious of how Tina felt and that Tina knew this and felt more loved. More, later twin!

    2. good chapter – i think now may be a good time to get Tina to get pass her trauma and bring perhaps a closure to the rape thing – how long can both T&B be tortured and not to make the story too draggy – tks

    3. As always, great chapter. You are actually showing true love at its finest & what happens with communication & love. Keep up the good work, just keep the love flowing. Oh, and much – much more pertaining to the twins please — THANKS!

    4. Good chapter. Yes Bette’s eyes is have alot of love and safe. Now Tina need to see Bette’s eyes and she will find love and safe and like home again. Post soon, thanks!

    5. OMFG – I died and came back to life between this chapter and the last. This is so excellent. I can’t get enough. Please becareful with the arm and continue to write “softly”.

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