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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 53
Tina: Before this. I would have never thought anything could. I know what you are saying. I know the demon by name that I have to fight. I just dont know if I am strong enough.
Tina: I know she would. I know youre right. Can we stop for today. This is just I just need time to think.
Tina: Ill try. I am just so afraid that it will push her away eventually. But, thank you for your help. I guess I have a lot to think about. Will I see you next week?
Tina: Ok then. Ill see you then.
After
Kissing Bette sweetly on her lips. Bette, baby wake up. Honey, if you dont wake up the twins will keep you up all night. Tina said with a grin. HUH, what? What is it baby? Whats wrong? Bette said startled from her sleep.
Tina: Nothings wrong babe. We just need to wake the twins or they will never get to sleep tonight.
Bette: Oh yea. Gosh I’m sorry. I was just so tired. How long have we been asleep?
Tina: A few hours.
Bette: Ok you grab one, Ive got the other. Wait, wait!!!!
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(57 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
really good chapter
Gah! Woman that was completely amazing. Totally loved it. You used the magic words, heh. I love how Bette was so conscious of how Tina felt and that Tina knew this and felt more loved. More, later twin!
beautiful…Tina really see trust in Bettes eyes…great chapter and i ready to next bring it on nc 17 FIRE..lol..
A wonderful chapter. And yes, if Tina see Bette’s eyes, she’ll be safe for love making.
Great chapter. Its great that you are easing them into this.I have come to enjoy the drama and the comedic parts as well.Keep it up.
K
Wonderful chapter as always. Very sweet. Can’t wait for more.
Just beautiful TK – really a very nice chapter for Bette to gain Tina´s trust back. Post soon
Very touching.
WOW! Truly an amazing chapter.
WOW…simply amazing!.
Really GREAT chapter. Tina voicing what she needs — looking into Bette’s eyes…amazing. Very well written.
I literally forgot to breath during that bathtub scene. If it had been any longer, I might have passed out!!
great chapter. please post soon. please.
good chapter – i think now may be a good time to get Tina to get pass her trauma and bring perhaps a closure to the rape thing – how long can both T&B be tortured and not to make the story too draggy – tks
As always, great chapter. You are actually showing true love at its finest & what happens with communication & love. Keep up the good work, just keep the love flowing. Oh, and much – much more pertaining to the twins please — THANKS!
Good Post. Its all in the eyes.
Good chapter. Yes Bette’s eyes is have alot of love and safe. Now Tina need to see Bette’s eyes and she will find love and safe and like home again. Post soon, thanks!
OMFG – I died and came back to life between this chapter and the last. This is so excellent. I can’t get enough. Please becareful with the arm and continue to write “softly”.