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From Above…Ch.7
“Thank you T, I can’t begin to tell you how much that means to me” I said, my voice becoming choked with tearsSwitch off the water works now Porterare you getting your period?! I compose myself and give Tina my winning ‘Porter smile’.
The waiter clears his throat and hands us our menu’s. I look at him to give my apologies for being oblivious to him for a moment or to. He gives me a gentle smile and takes our bag of beer off the table to pour into glasses for us. We start to look at the menu and as Tina gets more absorbed in it, I get more absorbed in looking at Tinayou’re going to be my wife one day Tina KennardI just know itI can’t breathe without you
“Ready to order madams?” The waiter has returned with two huge glasses of beer and some complimentary popadoms and chutney.
“Yes, I think so!” says Tina confidently and I look at my menu in panic, realising I haven’t glanced at it once yet*****, what did you have last time Porterthink, think!
“Eryeah, why not!” I say almost manically, “I’ll have the chicken madras with pilau rice”you KNOW that’s not what you ordered last time Porterbe it on your own head!
“And I’ll have the king prawn balti-saag and the bread that comes with itthat’s all thanks.”
The waiter moves away and we make quick work of the popadoms in front of us
“Gosh, these are gorgeous Bette, I think you’re going to prove me wrong about this place.”
Our food arrives and I am victorious as Tina moans in ecstasy through mouthfuls of rice and curry
“Bette, this is divineI never thought.ohhhh!”
I on the other hand, am not experiencing quite the same kind of joythe food is so delicious but a ‘tad’ too hot for me
“Phew, this is quite hot! Really tasty but hot!” I gasp, forgetting all my table manners and wiping my nose with the back of my hand
“Bette!!! Where are your manners young lady?!” Tina laughs handing me a paper napkin
“I’m sorry!” I splutter through my laughter, spraying rice on the table, which cracks Tina up even more
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(53 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
i almost choked on, am i getting my period. lol. that was some good stuff lou. and what the hell kind of teacher are you. dont know when you start rotflmao. your students must love you. love bettes thoughts. tina is helping her right along and uh, very hot girl. really enjoyed this. thanks ever so.
K
Great chapter, very sweet. Glad B can open up lol sorry with her emotions. Love it.
great story lou. I love london. have been there twice to visit. B&T so cute and lovin.
Very good Lou….very very good!!!
What a Wonderful Story I Love it keep going Please continue post soon Thanks.
“Though i had opened up a can of worms with Bette’s insecurity and didn’t just want to move on like ‘lalalalala everythings fine with me now she loves me’ kind of attitude…does that make sense?!”
Of course it makes sense !! That’s very realistic, because nobody can radically change his/her deep nature so easily and quickly – even with love’s magic wand. One needs time and patience for that. And since our dear Bette is on the like-a-child-in.front-of-her-first-Christmas-tree phase, that’s also inevitable to feel insecurities more than ever : such a sudden and amazing hapiness can seem too miraculous and so rrrrun the good old what-if-I’d-loose-everything state of mind ! Too dreamy to be true, so it must be a “but” somewhere, hmm ? Anyway, our fragile Bette is so cute with all her inward thoughts ! Touching and funny – quite irresistible, for me.
By the way, I love a lot the way you used these beautiful lyrics to mix enchantment with emotional fears. Music, and especially songs, are such a powerful and unique way to express feelings, they can so easily and quickly change our moods… Even Tina, here, felt the same moving thoughts.
Yes, a lot of songs are just like your magnificent London : rain and fog are pieces of beauty, but a melancholic one, and so brang us at the same time warmth in heart and tears in eyes…
So that’s certainly not a chance if you ended this chapter with rain beating on a square. (… I wonder why you didn’t like this end here ? Ah, authors’ “Porterian” insecurity and willing for perfection ! (*wink & smile !*)
Finally… thanks a lot for the Curry House recommendation ! Next time I’ll go to London, be sure I’ll go there ! (… god, I’m feeling pretty hungry, now… I wonder why !)
Thank you for this great story ! No doubt I’m addicted to it…
Excellent, yet again!
Also, keep the tips on London hotspots a’coming. I’ll be there in 2 weeks and hope to try this Curry House.
Lou..that was great! Can’t wait to hear more about our girls in London. Thanks for the post
Great story.It took Bette a long time to build that wall. Tina is doing it in days.. good job.
i just love this story — i love how romantic AND sexy it is. Bette’s thoughts really make this story extra interesting. How about some loving on the London Eye ??
that was amazing,lou!
& the song, it made me burst into tears(just kidding, only a few tears..)
BEAUTIFUL AND LOVELY, LOVE IT. POST SOON, THANKS!