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From Above…Ch.7
“Bette! I can’t take you anywhere!” She has tears streaming down her face through laughing at the sight of my discomfort.
“Aggh! The beer just fuels the flames!” I yelp as I swallow a huge mouthful of it “Help me Tina!”
“Ha ha ha ha! Ermexcuse me waitermy girlfriend here doesn’t seem to be able to manage the rest of her delicious mealdo you think you could bring her some ice cream?” She turns and whispers loudly to the waiter “She’s a bit hot I think”
“Certainly madam, I’ll bring some straight away” he smiles knowingly at Tinaeverybody falls in love with herand walks away towards the kitchen where I hear loud laughter seconds lateryou know that’s all for you Porteryou wuss!
After cooling my tongue down with the ice cream and being able to enjoy the rest of my beer, we pay for the meal and leave the restaurant. The sky is now black and rain is pounding onto the cobbles in front of us. We stand there holding hands with our clothes and hair getting gradually wetter and wetter. I don’t care one bit about the weather or getting wet from the rain because I get to look at my beautiful angel looking so goddamn ***** as her tight shirt begins to stick to her body and her long eyelashes catch the smallest raindrops
“Good old British weather hey?” I say with a smile and pull Tina round the corner into an empty little alleyway for a *****, rain-soaked, up-against-the-wall kiss. She instantly responds to me by pushing her body up against mine. She runs her fingers through my tangled curls and caresses my face. Her other hand is under my wet shirt, trailing her fingernails lightly up and down my spineI’m in heaventhis is such an incredible turn-onshe knows exactly what to do to get meI kiss her more deeply, press against her more firmly, wanting our bodies to merge as one
She senses my change in gear and pulls away, whispering in my ear “Not yet Bette, the night is still young and I hear good music coming from behind this wall”
We walk round further down the alleyway to find a small door set into the wall with a huge man stood outside who we hadn’t noticed before we had started getting it on in his alleyway.
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(53 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
i almost choked on, am i getting my period. lol. that was some good stuff lou. and what the hell kind of teacher are you. dont know when you start rotflmao. your students must love you. love bettes thoughts. tina is helping her right along and uh, very hot girl. really enjoyed this. thanks ever so.
K
Great chapter, very sweet. Glad B can open up lol sorry with her emotions. Love it.
great story lou. I love london. have been there twice to visit. B&T so cute and lovin.
Very good Lou….very very good!!!
What a Wonderful Story I Love it keep going Please continue post soon Thanks.
“Though i had opened up a can of worms with Bette’s insecurity and didn’t just want to move on like ‘lalalalala everythings fine with me now she loves me’ kind of attitude…does that make sense?!”
Of course it makes sense !! That’s very realistic, because nobody can radically change his/her deep nature so easily and quickly – even with love’s magic wand. One needs time and patience for that. And since our dear Bette is on the like-a-child-in.front-of-her-first-Christmas-tree phase, that’s also inevitable to feel insecurities more than ever : such a sudden and amazing hapiness can seem too miraculous and so rrrrun the good old what-if-I’d-loose-everything state of mind ! Too dreamy to be true, so it must be a “but” somewhere, hmm ? Anyway, our fragile Bette is so cute with all her inward thoughts ! Touching and funny – quite irresistible, for me.
By the way, I love a lot the way you used these beautiful lyrics to mix enchantment with emotional fears. Music, and especially songs, are such a powerful and unique way to express feelings, they can so easily and quickly change our moods… Even Tina, here, felt the same moving thoughts.
Yes, a lot of songs are just like your magnificent London : rain and fog are pieces of beauty, but a melancholic one, and so brang us at the same time warmth in heart and tears in eyes…
So that’s certainly not a chance if you ended this chapter with rain beating on a square. (… I wonder why you didn’t like this end here ? Ah, authors’ “Porterian” insecurity and willing for perfection ! (*wink & smile !*)
Finally… thanks a lot for the Curry House recommendation ! Next time I’ll go to London, be sure I’ll go there ! (… god, I’m feeling pretty hungry, now… I wonder why !)
Thank you for this great story ! No doubt I’m addicted to it…
Excellent, yet again!
Also, keep the tips on London hotspots a’coming. I’ll be there in 2 weeks and hope to try this Curry House.
Lou..that was great! Can’t wait to hear more about our girls in London. Thanks for the post
Great story.It took Bette a long time to build that wall. Tina is doing it in days.. good job.
i just love this story — i love how romantic AND sexy it is. Bette’s thoughts really make this story extra interesting. How about some loving on the London Eye ??
that was amazing,lou!
& the song, it made me burst into tears(just kidding, only a few tears..)
BEAUTIFUL AND LOVELY, LOVE IT. POST SOON, THANKS!