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From Above…Ch.7
“Hello ladies” he says with a gruff east end accent and a smile that says ‘I’ve just watched your little show from start to finish’ but does not move aside.
“Erhi, is there a band on tonight?!” I ask in my politest cute female voice, wrapping my arm around Tinareminding him of what he’s just seen and what he could see if he would only let us in.
“There’s a special VIP performance tonight by Mr James Blunt but it’s invite only”
I sense some negotiation in his voice and I snap into Bette Porter ‘sweet talker extraordinaire’.
“Well I have money? It’s mine and my girlfriends first night in London and frankly, if I’d have known James Blunt was playing here tonight, you would have seen my name on the guest list because I would have moved heaven and earth all the way from California to get on itwe love James Blunt don’t we beautiful?” I say looking lovingly into Tina’s eyesgo along with it T and giving the doorman a bit more to ogle at.
“Oh yeah, for sure baby” Tina replies catching on and giving me equally sickly sweet puppy eyes
The doorman looks around to see if anyone else has joined us in the alleyway and says to us shiftily
“Twenty five quid for the two of you and I’ll smuggle you inme boss’ll have me bollocks for this if he finds outbut he knows my weakness for pretty birds and well you too are” He shakes his head in disbelief.
We all laugh good-naturedly and I hand over the money, which he rolls up and stuffs in his blazer pocket. He ushers us inside and covers us from view of the manager whilst we run over to the bar and submerge ourselves into the small crowd around it.
“What will it be Miss Kennardyou pretty little bird?” I say trying to mimic the doormangeez Porter, lay off the accent, you can’t do it and stop trying!
“I fink I’ll ‘av another beerme pretty little bird” she replies in a perfect imitation of our admirer which makes me green with envy
I buy two beers and we attach ourselves to the back of the crowd that has gathered around the stage as the warm up band leaves and James Blunt makes his entrance with his acoustic guitar.
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(53 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
i almost choked on, am i getting my period. lol. that was some good stuff lou. and what the hell kind of teacher are you. dont know when you start rotflmao. your students must love you. love bettes thoughts. tina is helping her right along and uh, very hot girl. really enjoyed this. thanks ever so.
K
Great chapter, very sweet. Glad B can open up lol sorry with her emotions. Love it.
great story lou. I love london. have been there twice to visit. B&T so cute and lovin.
Very good Lou….very very good!!!
What a Wonderful Story I Love it keep going Please continue post soon Thanks.
“Though i had opened up a can of worms with Bette’s insecurity and didn’t just want to move on like ‘lalalalala everythings fine with me now she loves me’ kind of attitude…does that make sense?!”
Of course it makes sense !! That’s very realistic, because nobody can radically change his/her deep nature so easily and quickly – even with love’s magic wand. One needs time and patience for that. And since our dear Bette is on the like-a-child-in.front-of-her-first-Christmas-tree phase, that’s also inevitable to feel insecurities more than ever : such a sudden and amazing hapiness can seem too miraculous and so rrrrun the good old what-if-I’d-loose-everything state of mind ! Too dreamy to be true, so it must be a “but” somewhere, hmm ? Anyway, our fragile Bette is so cute with all her inward thoughts ! Touching and funny – quite irresistible, for me.
By the way, I love a lot the way you used these beautiful lyrics to mix enchantment with emotional fears. Music, and especially songs, are such a powerful and unique way to express feelings, they can so easily and quickly change our moods… Even Tina, here, felt the same moving thoughts.
Yes, a lot of songs are just like your magnificent London : rain and fog are pieces of beauty, but a melancholic one, and so brang us at the same time warmth in heart and tears in eyes…
So that’s certainly not a chance if you ended this chapter with rain beating on a square. (… I wonder why you didn’t like this end here ? Ah, authors’ “Porterian” insecurity and willing for perfection ! (*wink & smile !*)
Finally… thanks a lot for the Curry House recommendation ! Next time I’ll go to London, be sure I’ll go there ! (… god, I’m feeling pretty hungry, now… I wonder why !)
Thank you for this great story ! No doubt I’m addicted to it…
Excellent, yet again!
Also, keep the tips on London hotspots a’coming. I’ll be there in 2 weeks and hope to try this Curry House.
Lou..that was great! Can’t wait to hear more about our girls in London. Thanks for the post
Great story.It took Bette a long time to build that wall. Tina is doing it in days.. good job.
i just love this story — i love how romantic AND sexy it is. Bette’s thoughts really make this story extra interesting. How about some loving on the London Eye ??
that was amazing,lou!
& the song, it made me burst into tears(just kidding, only a few tears..)
BEAUTIFUL AND LOVELY, LOVE IT. POST SOON, THANKS!