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From Above…Ch.7
Story written on September 1, 2005 by lou2282.
“My life is brilliantmy love is pureI saw an angel, of that I’m sure
She smiled at me on the subwayshe was with another manbut I wont lose no sleep on that,
‘Cause I’ve got a planYou’re beautifulyou’re beautiful
You’re beautiful, it’s true”
I glanced over at Tina and kissed her on the cheek as she swayed to the amazing music and when she looked at me I whispered to her,
“But not as beautiful as you”
We danced and drank and sang our way through the songs the singer belted out and I was just about to suggest we head back to the flat to make our own music when the crowd fell silent to hear James Blunts final song, just him and the guitarI miss the first few lines as I am rapt by Tina’s beauty once more and her intense focus on the haunting words coming from the stage “I am here for you if you’d only careYou touched my heart, you touched my soul.You changed my life and all my goals,And love is blind and that I knew when,my heat was blinded by you.I’ve kissed your lips and held your head,Shared your dreams and shared your bed.I know you well, I know your smell,I’ve been addicted to you” I am addicted to you T
I realise James is singing about a love he’s lost but I relate to his passion and how intense he must have felt about this woman and the song as stole my heart as it has stole Tina’s. I feel her hand slip around my waist and her head rest on my shoulder “Goodbye my lover,Goodbye my friend” never say goodbye to me T “You have been the one,You have been the one for me” you are the one for me T “I’m a dreamer but when I wake
You can’t break my spiritit’s my dreams you take
I sense Tina reach up and wipe her eye and as James and his guitar continue to serenade us, I look round to see many other people, couples, friendsjust standing in awe at the sheer beauty of this song
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(53 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
i almost choked on, am i getting my period. lol. that was some good stuff lou. and what the hell kind of teacher are you. dont know when you start rotflmao. your students must love you. love bettes thoughts. tina is helping her right along and uh, very hot girl. really enjoyed this. thanks ever so.
K
Great chapter, very sweet. Glad B can open up lol sorry with her emotions. Love it.
great story lou. I love london. have been there twice to visit. B&T so cute and lovin.
Very good Lou….very very good!!!
What a Wonderful Story I Love it keep going Please continue post soon Thanks.
“Though i had opened up a can of worms with Bette’s insecurity and didn’t just want to move on like ‘lalalalala everythings fine with me now she loves me’ kind of attitude…does that make sense?!”
Of course it makes sense !! That’s very realistic, because nobody can radically change his/her deep nature so easily and quickly – even with love’s magic wand. One needs time and patience for that. And since our dear Bette is on the like-a-child-in.front-of-her-first-Christmas-tree phase, that’s also inevitable to feel insecurities more than ever : such a sudden and amazing hapiness can seem too miraculous and so rrrrun the good old what-if-I’d-loose-everything state of mind ! Too dreamy to be true, so it must be a “but” somewhere, hmm ? Anyway, our fragile Bette is so cute with all her inward thoughts ! Touching and funny – quite irresistible, for me.
By the way, I love a lot the way you used these beautiful lyrics to mix enchantment with emotional fears. Music, and especially songs, are such a powerful and unique way to express feelings, they can so easily and quickly change our moods… Even Tina, here, felt the same moving thoughts.
Yes, a lot of songs are just like your magnificent London : rain and fog are pieces of beauty, but a melancholic one, and so brang us at the same time warmth in heart and tears in eyes…
So that’s certainly not a chance if you ended this chapter with rain beating on a square. (… I wonder why you didn’t like this end here ? Ah, authors’ “Porterian” insecurity and willing for perfection ! (*wink & smile !*)
Finally… thanks a lot for the Curry House recommendation ! Next time I’ll go to London, be sure I’ll go there ! (… god, I’m feeling pretty hungry, now… I wonder why !)
Thank you for this great story ! No doubt I’m addicted to it…
Excellent, yet again!
Also, keep the tips on London hotspots a’coming. I’ll be there in 2 weeks and hope to try this Curry House.
Lou..that was great! Can’t wait to hear more about our girls in London. Thanks for the post
Great story.It took Bette a long time to build that wall. Tina is doing it in days.. good job.
i just love this story — i love how romantic AND sexy it is. Bette’s thoughts really make this story extra interesting. How about some loving on the London Eye ??
that was amazing,lou!
& the song, it made me burst into tears(just kidding, only a few tears..)
BEAUTIFUL AND LOVELY, LOVE IT. POST SOON, THANKS!