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    From Afar

    Story written on July 24, 2005 by Jwet.
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    Chapter 81 – Miracle of Grace

     

    The sound of Tina’s voice surprised Bette as she thought
    Tina had fallen to sleep.  Smiling at the
    question “Is that what you want Tina?” Bette asked back softly.

     

    This got Tina to sit up and lean on one elbow as she wanted
    to make Bette realize that yes that was what she wanted.  “You’re not suppose to answer a question with
    a question.” Tina jokingly complained “Really Bette do you need my to tell you
    that YES I want you to move in.  I
    think you already knew that.”  At this
    Tina pauses as she is looking at Bette trying to read her expression.  “What is it? 
    What’s holding you back?” Tina asks as she is correctly reading
    Bette.  “Is it something I can help you
    with?” Tina knows that this was something that Bette was going to have to be
    totally comfortable with before she would return on a permanent basis.

     

    Bette looked at Tina and didn’t know what to say.  There wasn’t any one thing that she could put
    her finger on.  She couldn’t describe her
    hesitation that easily.  Instead she
    thought she would try to impress on Tina the need to go carefully.  “You know Tina what we are building here is
    just the most important thing in my life. 
    I don’t want to rush it.  This is
    just too important.”

     

    “Bette does if feel like we are rushing things to you?” Tina
    wonders as it didn’t seem that way to her.

     

    “We can’t pretend it didn’t happen.  We can’t go back to our lives as if I never
    had made this horrendous mistake.  We
    need to be precise in how we move forward in that I can’t loose you again.”
    Bette says all this in a manner that made Tina feel that this may have been the
    gospel she has been living by.

     

    “I agree that it’s important but Bette we aren’t the same
    people we were even a year ago.  Is this
    what caused that look?” Tina asks now as it is all beginning to make
    sense. 

     

    “What look?” Bette is confused now as to what Tina is
    talking about.

     

    Realizing how vague she must sound Tina smiles, moving so
    she can touch Bette’s cheek with her fingertips.  Tina makes a soft stoke down Bette’s cheek
    and then across her forehead.  “Bette it
    was that look of confusion, the crease you had here before you committed to
    rocking my world.  Was this feeling of
    you not being worthy have anything to do with that look?”

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    3. man what a fear of loose someone again does when really exist love huh? Bette is a diferent person in every single way and i´m glad she could open completely for Tina..amazing chapter Jwet thannsk :-)

    4. 1st -so happy youre back. 2nd – you had me laughing, crying, worried, etc. and trying to type this with one hand, my left no less, is driving me crazy. you are amazing. what goes on in your head is awesome. my heart is skipping happily. *ding dong the witch is dead*, cant wait for that. please post soon.

    5. You can get even with Helena, But you can try to forget that she is in this world. She is so evil, and wicked her turn will come Pay back is hell thanks

    6. Jwet glad to see you are back, we missed you. Great, intense and emotional chapter. I still can hardly wait to see the look on Alice’s face when she finally reveals to Tina that Bette was behind the foundation only to find out the she already knows. We all want to get Helena, but lets take it slow to make her really suffer. Quick would be TOO good for her, and she would not learn her lesson. Helena thinks that Bette is beneath her, so we need to show her how out classed she really is. Money maybe able to get you into a classy joint, but it can’t buy you or make you a class act. Please post soon.

    7. So glad you are back!! I have truly missed this story…but, more than that…your writing. Thanks!!! And I agree with Chase…woohoo, Bette is moving home!!

    9. *sigh* It’s good. It’s all good. Your vision of Bette and Tina is just so moving and I just love it!

      Can’t wait to see what you do to Helena – something dignify of Bette and Tina, or not.

      Thanks for writing and sharing.

      PS: Did not read potter yet, who dies?

    11. WOW, soooo super sweet and honest and open and ahhhhhhhhh – another string to Bette’s bow. Not that she needs any more strings in my book, but can she get any sexier, hell no – but I can’t wait to read some more and more and more and more of her trying to be!! Another Brilliant Chapter mate.

    13. I love the unfolding of layers with your characters. That deep unearthing of feeling and emotions – it really draws you into the story. I have loved this story and series. Wonderful!

    14. I’M in TelAviv — traveling — and I saw a chapter by JWET and had to take a moment — great chapter — as always — loving this story — thanks

    16. Welcome back JWET! Great to see another chapter. My, my what an outpouring of emotion from Bette. To bare one’s soul takes courage, trust and faith. I tried to give Bette several cyber hugs but my labored breathing and tears impaired me…..and I ended up hugging the keyboard! I sure hope the imprint of the ‘FGHJ’keys in the middle of my forehead go away before I go to work tomorrow!

      OK, is Alice hysterically funny or what? LMAO. Will Dana and her need a larger apartment to store all of the goodies?

      Thanks for another great chapter! Not only is it worth a ga-zillion stars but it took one-thousand sheets of Kleenex (two 500 count boxes…with aloe)!!!!! LOL

    17. Oh my goodness…Alice has bought out Costco! The Slim Jims peeking out of the sunroof was hysterical. But the description of the orange stains on the keyboard was genius inspired!! Uh…are you speaking from experiece? LOL. Dana’s journey through the salt and carbohydrate jungle gave me a belly laugh that I haven’t had in years. I say we get Alice sober for a moment and have her partner up with Tina to bring Helena down. That would keep Bette out of the fray and make up for Alice giving her spot up to Helena at the awards dinner. Not to mention, an Alpha Tina going for blood would be fun to see. But hey, I’m not the author.

      The push and pull of both Tina and Bette’s emotions was truly heart wrenching. So much has happened and Bette has been to the depths of despair, understandable that she would never want to visit that valley again. Not sure what else Tina can do that is not physical to prove to Bette that the has a safe haven in Tina’s heart.

      Beautiful and funny, once again. More, more, more…and then again, more!

    21. Wonderful as Always Jwet WHOA! Thanks for posted again we Missed your Story but Thank Gosh your back anyway WOW! I can’t wait to see what is gonna happen if Bette moved HOME to Tina OK I’m just gonna wait then LOL! Please Post soon THANKS.

    22. Thanks for this utterly amazing chapter Jwet. It was simply beautiful. As I wipe away the tears, I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

    23. Hey Jwet, i’v missed your story hope your are nice and refreshed and have heaps of chapters to post…lol…
      this chapter was very funny and emotional….your Alice just cracks me up…LMAO….yep its time for Bette to move home…the body armour is no longer needed, she has stripped herself bare she has nothing left to hide…
      Thanks for the chapter J and enjoy whats left of the weekend.

    24. Missed you and thanks for coming back with such a great and emotional chapter. Can’t wait for Bette to move home and for them to have some more conversations. Helena=Bitch. Just remember that as you are writing. : )

    25. WOW!! Si moving for Bette to finally expose herself to Tina..Not lets get even with that bitch Helena…Post soon..PLEASE!!! I have been waititng for your post…Thank you for taking the time.

    26. Jwet, I had to stop reading your author’s note, because you were giving spoilers for Harry Potter! I’ve only just started it, my copy didn’t arrive from amazon until wednesday. This chapter was great, as all your chapters are…so happy to see them making progress.

    29. Damn! I think the lump that Bette had in her throat has permanently lodged itself in mine! Thank goodness for comic relief– Alice is delightful!! Jwet, you are wonderful! Thanks

    31. Good God Woman, what are you trying to do…kill us. The lump in my throat may requrie the Heimlich Maneuver. Cough, cough…I need water, or better yet…another chapter.

    33. I honestly cannot find the words to express just how awesome this chpater was. I have loved this story from the very beginning and I thought it was simply the best then. All I can say now is OMG everything is coming full circle and your story has me so amazed. You are such a wonderful writer Jwet. Thank you so much for taking me a long for the ride.

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