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From Afar
Now Dana put two and two together and understood all the
food,
must have had a major attack of the munchies as she apparently worked
away. Shaking her head Dana had to get
to
jumped a mile at hearing Dana’s shout “Oh My God, DANA what are you trying to
do, kill me!”
says as she looks up to Dana on her left.
“Can’t you see I’m really into this.
I think I got something here.”
says as she bends her head back over her laptop as her fingers are dancing
across the keys.
“Yeah I can see that you are into quite a lot of things
here.” Dana says sarcastically as she waves her hands around the room.
was already back into focusing on her work as her fingers were once again
racing across her keyboard. Totally
missing the sarcasm
vaguely registered Dana’s comments “Huh?
Oh yeah.”
Realizing that her comment was lost upon
Dana decided to be direct “
what’s with all this stuff?”
knew that Dana was talking but just didn’t want to loose her train of thought
as it was really good stuff answered vaguely “Huh Yeah I went to the grocery story for you.”
was her total explanation.
“What you mean store Great!” was all Dana could say as
she knew from past experience that
needed to finish her process before Dana could talk to her. As Dana went to make her way to the bedroom
to change she saw a stack labeled ‘
this stack?”
Al, .. Al .. what is this stack?”
dragged herself away from her laptop with her head turning last. “What Dane?!”
Dana looking exasperated at
“Hey what is this stack for?”
“Oh that is all about
don’t have time to look into it now.”
explained impatiently.
“Oh” Dana says as she
picks up a couple articles and reads through them. As she is reading a thought came to mind “
maybe you should give these to Bette and let her look into these?” Dana says as she looks over to
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Beautiful and amazing chapter. LOVED it. So glad B is moving home. Can’ wait for more.
wow you never disappoint me you’r the writer i know just keep bringing it on- you really know our couple fantasticwriting
man what a fear of loose someone again does when really exist love huh? Bette is a diferent person in every single way and i´m glad she could open completely for Tina..amazing chapter Jwet thannsk :-)
1st -so happy youre back. 2nd – you had me laughing, crying, worried, etc. and trying to type this with one hand, my left no less, is driving me crazy. you are amazing. what goes on in your head is awesome. my heart is skipping happily. *ding dong the witch is dead*, cant wait for that. please post soon.
You can get even with Helena, But you can try to forget that she is in this world. She is so evil, and wicked her turn will come Pay back is hell thanks
Jwet glad to see you are back, we missed you. Great, intense and emotional chapter. I still can hardly wait to see the look on Alice’s face when she finally reveals to Tina that Bette was behind the foundation only to find out the she already knows. We all want to get Helena, but lets take it slow to make her really suffer. Quick would be TOO good for her, and she would not learn her lesson. Helena thinks that Bette is beneath her, so we need to show her how out classed she really is. Money maybe able to get you into a classy joint, but it can’t buy you or make you a class act. Please post soon.
So glad you are back!! I have truly missed this story…but, more than that…your writing. Thanks!!! And I agree with Chase…woohoo, Bette is moving home!!
great chapter. i’ve missed you. as for helena, i think she should just die in a firey crash!!! death for the evil in my book. lol
*sigh* It’s good. It’s all good. Your vision of Bette and Tina is just so moving and I just love it!
Can’t wait to see what you do to Helena – something dignify of Bette and Tina, or not.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
PS: Did not read potter yet, who dies?
GLAD YOUR BACK..SUCH AN AMAZING CHAPTER..PLEASE POST SOON..THANKS
WOW, soooo super sweet and honest and open and ahhhhhhhhh – another string to Bette’s bow. Not that she needs any more strings in my book, but can she get any sexier, hell no – but I can’t wait to read some more and more and more and more of her trying to be!! Another Brilliant Chapter mate.
Awesome really great theres something very classy about this story it has style, looking forward to lots more thanks
I love the unfolding of layers with your characters. That deep unearthing of feeling and emotions – it really draws you into the story. I have loved this story and series. Wonderful!
I’M in TelAviv — traveling — and I saw a chapter by JWET and had to take a moment — great chapter — as always — loving this story — thanks
laughter, tears, unions, your story has it all.(thank god im not the only one who cried at harry potter)
Welcome back JWET! Great to see another chapter. My, my what an outpouring of emotion from Bette. To bare one’s soul takes courage, trust and faith. I tried to give Bette several cyber hugs but my labored breathing and tears impaired me…..and I ended up hugging the keyboard! I sure hope the imprint of the ‘FGHJ’keys in the middle of my forehead go away before I go to work tomorrow!
OK, is Alice hysterically funny or what? LMAO. Will Dana and her need a larger apartment to store all of the goodies?
Thanks for another great chapter! Not only is it worth a ga-zillion stars but it took one-thousand sheets of Kleenex (two 500 count boxes…with aloe)!!!!! LOL
Oh my goodness…Alice has bought out Costco! The Slim Jims peeking out of the sunroof was hysterical. But the description of the orange stains on the keyboard was genius inspired!! Uh…are you speaking from experiece? LOL. Dana’s journey through the salt and carbohydrate jungle gave me a belly laugh that I haven’t had in years. I say we get Alice sober for a moment and have her partner up with Tina to bring Helena down. That would keep Bette out of the fray and make up for Alice giving her spot up to Helena at the awards dinner. Not to mention, an Alpha Tina going for blood would be fun to see. But hey, I’m not the author.
The push and pull of both Tina and Bette’s emotions was truly heart wrenching. So much has happened and Bette has been to the depths of despair, understandable that she would never want to visit that valley again. Not sure what else Tina can do that is not physical to prove to Bette that the has a safe haven in Tina’s heart.
Beautiful and funny, once again. More, more, more…and then again, more!
For an emotionally unarticulate person Bette has just said the most wonderful thing. Bravo Jwet – bloody marvelous.
this story and your writing never ceases to amaze me.
Bette baring her soul has me teary eyed. Great job Jwet. Bette’s moving home…Woo Hoo!
Wonderful as Always Jwet WHOA! Thanks for posted again we Missed your Story but Thank Gosh your back anyway WOW! I can’t wait to see what is gonna happen if Bette moved HOME to Tina OK I’m just gonna wait then LOL! Please Post soon THANKS.
Thanks for this utterly amazing chapter Jwet. It was simply beautiful. As I wipe away the tears, I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
Hey Jwet, i’v missed your story hope your are nice and refreshed and have heaps of chapters to post…lol…
this chapter was very funny and emotional….your Alice just cracks me up…LMAO….yep its time for Bette to move home…the body armour is no longer needed, she has stripped herself bare she has nothing left to hide…
Thanks for the chapter J and enjoy whats left of the weekend.
Missed you and thanks for coming back with such a great and emotional chapter. Can’t wait for Bette to move home and for them to have some more conversations. Helena=Bitch. Just remember that as you are writing. : )
WOW!! Si moving for Bette to finally expose herself to Tina..Not lets get even with that bitch Helena…Post soon..PLEASE!!! I have been waititng for your post…Thank you for taking the time.
Jwet, I had to stop reading your author’s note, because you were giving spoilers for Harry Potter! I’ve only just started it, my copy didn’t arrive from amazon until wednesday. This chapter was great, as all your chapters are…so happy to see them making progress.
yea Bette is moving home where she belongs. wonderful chapter Jwet. very sweet.
Bette is moving home… wow
Damn! I think the lump that Bette had in her throat has permanently lodged itself in mine! Thank goodness for comic relief– Alice is delightful!! Jwet, you are wonderful! Thanks
Woohoo!! Your back!! You had me all hot and bothered then laughing then damn near crying… wow I missed ya.
Good God Woman, what are you trying to do…kill us. The lump in my throat may requrie the Heimlich Maneuver. Cough, cough…I need water, or better yet…another chapter.
Quite sweet. Bette really is coming home. So…is the ever going to ‘fess up about being at the birth?
I honestly cannot find the words to express just how awesome this chpater was. I have loved this story from the very beginning and I thought it was simply the best then. All I can say now is OMG everything is coming full circle and your story has me so amazed. You are such a wonderful writer Jwet. Thank you so much for taking me a long for the ride.
Alice is too funny!
Jwet… each time it’s a wonderful pleasure to read it. thank you. Dane and Al it’s so sweet.
hey, happy you’re back. I’ve needed my dose of this story :) great as always!
Just beautiful, amazing, great. Please post again soon. 5 stars for you :)
it is good to read that Bette will be once again with Tina!!! I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Yes this is beautiful and amazing. Bette is moving back home!