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    From Afar

    Story written on July 24, 2005 by Jwet.
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    Chapter 81 – Miracle of Grace

     

    This thought must have struck a nerve with Alice as it got her to completely stop what
    she was doing.  Looking back to Dana “You
    know Dane that might be the best idea. 
    It could be solution to my problem. 
    Thanks that’s a great idea.” Alice
    says as she smiles to Dana.  “Thanks
    honey that is the best idea.”

     

    Dana felt all warm and fuzzy that she could have this effect
    on Alice walks
    over and reaches in for a tender kiss.

     

    ***

     

    Tina had just finished taking the last piece of Bette’s
    clothing off as she now was admiring the beauty before her.  Bette was so precious as she let her guilt
    and insecurities get the better of her at times.  Tina wanted her to know that no matter what,
    she was wanted and needed.  “Bette there
    is so much that I want to show you.  You
    know that you need to forgive yourself and move on.  I plan on tempting you until you say you will
    move in.” Tina says as she now begins to tease Bette by softly blowing on her
    *****.  The hot breath coming from Tina
    has the effect of causing Bette’s nipples to stand erect. 

     

    Tina looked up to see the effect her teasing was having on
    Bette.  What she saw made her stop,
    frozen.  Bette’s face was clouded and
    masked not the look of an excited lover that Tina had expected. 

     

    Bette looks away from Tina as she starts talking “When I’m
    not around you I am just a cold bronze figure, a statue which stands poised in
    the background.  Always ready but never
    engaging just there hanging on the edge. 
    You bring all the warmth, purpose into my life and give my life
    meaning.” Bette says as the tears are welling up in her eyes threatening to
    stream down her cheeks.

     

    Tina seeing the tears immediately moves up to Bette’s
    face.  “Bette please don’t cry.  I won’t push. 
    We don’t have to say anything more about moving in right now I won’t push
    you.”

     

    “No No I just want you to know that I have tried to live
    without you and I can’t.  I had to settle
    .” Bette says but looses her voice as she chokes on the lump in her
    throat.  Trying to swallow to make it go
    away so she can go on.

     

    “No .. it’s OK Bette .. really” Tina says trying to comfort
    Bette as this isn’t going anywhere near the way she had intended it to go.  Tina tries to wipe the tears away from
    Bette’s face with her thumb as she gently moves them across her cheeks.  Looking at Bette struggling, just melts Tina
    “Babe, Come here” Tina says softly as she reaches out and pulls Bette close,
    resting her head on Tina’s chest. 
    Wrapping her arms around Bette so Bette feels the sturdy security of
    Tina’s arms.

     

    Bette clears her throat and goes on “Tee I’m trying to
    explain why I want TO move in.  You, Anna
    and all this” Bette says as she pulls back from Tina and waves her one arm in a
    sweeping motion meant to invoke all the rest of their world “This is what I
    want.  That’s why I hesitate.”

     

    Tina looks at Bette perplexed not quite getting Bette’s
    point “Sssoo you want to move in?”

     

    “Second chances are a miracle of grace.  They don’t happen often.  For me to have this second chance with you
    means that this, me and you, was truly meant to be ” Bette chokes out and once
    again has her voice fails.

     

    This is Bette exposing her soul for her and Tina knew that whatever
    Bette is telling is so close to her core being that she is having problems
    articulating it. 

     

    Bette tries again “T there just aren’t anymore words to
    describe what you and Anna mean to me The connection I feel the closeness
    that there has always been.  Do you feel
    that connection?  Is it that way for you
    too?”  As Bette asks this she is looking
    into Tina’s heart for the answer with tears still streaming down her face
    unchecked.

     

    Tina’s knows what Bette is asking but she is so moved by how
    vulnerable Bette has made herself by asking this that Tina can’t find her
    voice.  With a face that is moist by
    tears of her own Tina just grabs Bette’s hand and pulls it to her chest.  Holding it over her heart as they look into
    each others souls.  Tina is left nodding
    her head for an answer as that is all the more each of them need to say as they
    both know Bette is moving home.

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    3. man what a fear of loose someone again does when really exist love huh? Bette is a diferent person in every single way and i´m glad she could open completely for Tina..amazing chapter Jwet thannsk :-)

    4. 1st -so happy youre back. 2nd – you had me laughing, crying, worried, etc. and trying to type this with one hand, my left no less, is driving me crazy. you are amazing. what goes on in your head is awesome. my heart is skipping happily. *ding dong the witch is dead*, cant wait for that. please post soon.

    5. You can get even with Helena, But you can try to forget that she is in this world. She is so evil, and wicked her turn will come Pay back is hell thanks

    6. Jwet glad to see you are back, we missed you. Great, intense and emotional chapter. I still can hardly wait to see the look on Alice’s face when she finally reveals to Tina that Bette was behind the foundation only to find out the she already knows. We all want to get Helena, but lets take it slow to make her really suffer. Quick would be TOO good for her, and she would not learn her lesson. Helena thinks that Bette is beneath her, so we need to show her how out classed she really is. Money maybe able to get you into a classy joint, but it can’t buy you or make you a class act. Please post soon.

    7. So glad you are back!! I have truly missed this story…but, more than that…your writing. Thanks!!! And I agree with Chase…woohoo, Bette is moving home!!

    9. *sigh* It’s good. It’s all good. Your vision of Bette and Tina is just so moving and I just love it!

      Can’t wait to see what you do to Helena – something dignify of Bette and Tina, or not.

      Thanks for writing and sharing.

      PS: Did not read potter yet, who dies?

    11. WOW, soooo super sweet and honest and open and ahhhhhhhhh – another string to Bette’s bow. Not that she needs any more strings in my book, but can she get any sexier, hell no – but I can’t wait to read some more and more and more and more of her trying to be!! Another Brilliant Chapter mate.

    13. I love the unfolding of layers with your characters. That deep unearthing of feeling and emotions – it really draws you into the story. I have loved this story and series. Wonderful!

    14. I’M in TelAviv — traveling — and I saw a chapter by JWET and had to take a moment — great chapter — as always — loving this story — thanks

    16. Welcome back JWET! Great to see another chapter. My, my what an outpouring of emotion from Bette. To bare one’s soul takes courage, trust and faith. I tried to give Bette several cyber hugs but my labored breathing and tears impaired me…..and I ended up hugging the keyboard! I sure hope the imprint of the ‘FGHJ’keys in the middle of my forehead go away before I go to work tomorrow!

      OK, is Alice hysterically funny or what? LMAO. Will Dana and her need a larger apartment to store all of the goodies?

      Thanks for another great chapter! Not only is it worth a ga-zillion stars but it took one-thousand sheets of Kleenex (two 500 count boxes…with aloe)!!!!! LOL

    17. Oh my goodness…Alice has bought out Costco! The Slim Jims peeking out of the sunroof was hysterical. But the description of the orange stains on the keyboard was genius inspired!! Uh…are you speaking from experiece? LOL. Dana’s journey through the salt and carbohydrate jungle gave me a belly laugh that I haven’t had in years. I say we get Alice sober for a moment and have her partner up with Tina to bring Helena down. That would keep Bette out of the fray and make up for Alice giving her spot up to Helena at the awards dinner. Not to mention, an Alpha Tina going for blood would be fun to see. But hey, I’m not the author.

      The push and pull of both Tina and Bette’s emotions was truly heart wrenching. So much has happened and Bette has been to the depths of despair, understandable that she would never want to visit that valley again. Not sure what else Tina can do that is not physical to prove to Bette that the has a safe haven in Tina’s heart.

      Beautiful and funny, once again. More, more, more…and then again, more!

    21. Wonderful as Always Jwet WHOA! Thanks for posted again we Missed your Story but Thank Gosh your back anyway WOW! I can’t wait to see what is gonna happen if Bette moved HOME to Tina OK I’m just gonna wait then LOL! Please Post soon THANKS.

    22. Thanks for this utterly amazing chapter Jwet. It was simply beautiful. As I wipe away the tears, I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

    23. Hey Jwet, i’v missed your story hope your are nice and refreshed and have heaps of chapters to post…lol…
      this chapter was very funny and emotional….your Alice just cracks me up…LMAO….yep its time for Bette to move home…the body armour is no longer needed, she has stripped herself bare she has nothing left to hide…
      Thanks for the chapter J and enjoy whats left of the weekend.

    24. Missed you and thanks for coming back with such a great and emotional chapter. Can’t wait for Bette to move home and for them to have some more conversations. Helena=Bitch. Just remember that as you are writing. : )

    25. WOW!! Si moving for Bette to finally expose herself to Tina..Not lets get even with that bitch Helena…Post soon..PLEASE!!! I have been waititng for your post…Thank you for taking the time.

    26. Jwet, I had to stop reading your author’s note, because you were giving spoilers for Harry Potter! I’ve only just started it, my copy didn’t arrive from amazon until wednesday. This chapter was great, as all your chapters are…so happy to see them making progress.

    29. Damn! I think the lump that Bette had in her throat has permanently lodged itself in mine! Thank goodness for comic relief– Alice is delightful!! Jwet, you are wonderful! Thanks

    31. Good God Woman, what are you trying to do…kill us. The lump in my throat may requrie the Heimlich Maneuver. Cough, cough…I need water, or better yet…another chapter.

    33. I honestly cannot find the words to express just how awesome this chpater was. I have loved this story from the very beginning and I thought it was simply the best then. All I can say now is OMG everything is coming full circle and your story has me so amazed. You are such a wonderful writer Jwet. Thank you so much for taking me a long for the ride.

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