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    Frozen Beginnings – Chapter seven

    Story written on October 30, 2014 by kins40.
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    Bette shrugged her shoulders. Tina couldn’t believe her eyes. How had she fallen for such a ‘lesson giver’? But she couldn’t keep her eyes away from Bette. Her mere presence was addictive and she realised that she wanted the brunette by her side… always. “Are you ok?” Bette asked softly. The tenderness in Bette’s voice

    Bette shrugged her shoulders. Tina couldn’t believe her eyes. How had she fallen for such a ‘lesson giver’? But she couldn’t keep her eyes away from Bette. Her mere presence was addictive and she realised that she wanted the brunette by her side… always.

    “Are you ok?” Bette asked softly.

    The tenderness in Bette’s voice took Tina by surprise. But the blonde was determined to not lower herself to agreeing with the brunette. She and her father had after all played her and rancour washed over her.

    She willed herself to take a couple of deep breath before replying.

    “I couldn’t be any better. I have just discovered that you and my father have openly made a fool out of me, that I slept with someone who in short despises me and seized the ‘unforeseen’ opportunity when she saw it. How do you think I feel?”

    Bette looked at Tina intensely for a few second. Her face betrayed both hurt and sadness.

    “Who said that I despised you?” How could you imagine that I could make love to someone I did not have feelings for? It has never happened and it will never happen!”

    Tina listened silently but before Bette’s words could sink in, the brunette carried on.

    “Instead of always feeling sorry for yourself you could spare a thought for others… me for instance!”

    “You?” Tina cried, “Why should I feel sorry for you?”

    “I don’t believe I was the only one who enjoyed the … moment.” The sarcastic voice of the brunette replied, “You were not so innocent that night…”

    Tina opened her eyes wide at the insinuation. Where was Bette going with this?

    “After all,” the brunette carried on, “You had just broken up with Eric, and there I was available for the rebound, your curiosity and the added bonus that given your perception of me as mere help, we probably would never see each other again.”

    Tina was about to protest but she immediately refrained seeing the slippery slope of a conversation which stood in front of her and would no doubt lead her to confessing her true feelings for the arrogant brunette.

    “You have a job proposal?” She coldly changed the conversation. “Did my father put you up to this?”

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    5. Eight pages leaving your readers, as usual, just wanting more!
      Great writing of our two characters in this intriguing storyline.
      Another chapter of these two being ‘professional’ soon please Kins. It is so good to have you back.

    6. One of the best stories I’ve read on here lately. I enjoy the drawn out, push/pull relationship, hopefully leading to a climax (pun intended). Who needs to rush into a relationship, anyways! Keep up the good work!

    8. This was an interesting chapter. It was good to learn more about Bette background.
      I admit but not exactly what I expected this chapter regarding.
      but I’m still a big fan of this story and look forward to the next chapter.

    10. Yet another great chapter, good on you! You have written these characters very well and that’s not an easy task. I would be pissed too if I was Tina, her father and Bette did go behind her back and I feel like Bette should at some point apologize for that. Pls post soon and feel free to post more than 8 pages!;)

    11. Kins my dear friend you never fail to impress.

      Eight pages of another great chapter..

      Tina not wanting to agree with anything Bette offers her.

      Backing down in her own way by putting their relationship on a professional footing.To me Bette

      always seems to have the upper hand but in a subtle way.

      Still no closer to knowing what Bette does as a profession.

      Kins you always leave us wanting more.

      Looking forward eagerly to your next chapter.PPS….C.xx

    16. What happens next? Next chapter please… Bette arrogance can be quite amusing but I hope it melts away. The sarcasm in her can be quite hurtful to someone who genuinely likes her…Hope Tina feels less cheated after a while. It’s awful to feel like a fool. First eric(Eric is such a bastard) and now Bette not being fully honest from the start. It’s hard to trust people after a while. Can’t wait to read how Tina shapes up in this story

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