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Frozen Beginnings – Chapter One
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Her eyes searched the rapidly falling darkness which now was surrounding her and fell on another thick bunch of trees which she thought inwardly again would offer a half decent shelter, should she be forced to spend the night outdoors.
She exhaled a deep sigh. What miracle would it take for her to find the way back to her hotel? She seriously doubted though that her lothario of a future ex-boyfriend would even notice that she was missing, instead believing she had gone for some fresh air or a shopping spree or maybe had booked herself in another of the luxury hotels in the resort with the help of her little flexible plastic friend.
So what? Yes she had been born with a silver spoon in her mouth and money had never been a problem. It did not necessarily mean she was spoilt.
Fat lot of good her credit card was right now though Tina carried on with her internal monologue resigned as she was to the fact she was well and truly lost. And possibly in deep trouble.
Determined to not give up just yet she straightened up and started a careful descent towards the dense trees. She truly hoped they would offer enough shelter and who knows there was maybe a little hut there too, the kind animal conservationists built to support the local wildlife during particularly severe winters. Right about now some straw to protect her from the cold, dampness and the now falling snow would be a luxury she would not refuse.
In near pitch black conditions, her eyes kept firmly on her goal, Tina skied on not noticing however the small mound on her path. One of her skis jammed itself in the soft snowy protrusion, halting her descent abruptly and catapulting Tina over it. She fell ungracefully, immediately starting what felt like a never ending tumble down the slope losing one of her skis in the process.
When she finally came to a natural stop at a point where the slope offered a lesser incline, Tina swore under her breath and made to stand up. Her effort was soon hampered when a sharp pain tore through her ankle, forcing another expletive out of her mouth. The throbbing cut through her like a sharp blade.
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What a nice surprise to see another story from you!
Love the beginning, so Tina is a rich little girl, who is going to find her true love in the snow.
Eric is Just a bastard, i hope this was the last time you mentioned him in the story.
Looking forward to how this wil develop.
K,
Welcome back! You have been missed here. Hope that you will be able to post more bcoz you are such a great writer.
Again you have given as another fresh start with a new B and T beginning. I am hoping for more pages.
I hope that you’ll have an update soon.
Thanks
Scribe
Welcomed back ! Indeed very happy to read your story.
Another TB beginning… Thank you.
Well, Kins, so wonderful to see you again. You’ve been on my mind lately, must be I heard you writing thru the ethers. A wonderful beginning to a Kins saga and I can’t wait to read more.
Have to say I always enjoyed downhill skiing but never to the risk of going outside the ropes. I love the swooshing thru the powder snow for the thrill it gives when timing it perfectly with the mountain side. Sounds like Tina does similar. Funny how life catches up to us when we’re not on the right path nor truly listening to our heart. Surprisingly those bumps and hurdles appear to guide us in the right direction most generally in the right time, too! So it makes me wonder, who would be living on the side of a mountain in a little chalet at this time of the year? Was it the Universe guiding Tina in that direction with an avalanche or two? Hmmmm, I wonder…
SO excited to see you again friend! And excited for another good story from you. So, I shall put another log on the fire, refill my coffee mug and sit back and listen with a beaming smile on my face. :o))
I have heard so much about from you Bumsue, who tells me frequently that she has read everything you have written and wished that you would return. Delighted you have! I enjoyed your story and its auspiciously constructed beginnings.
Presently, I’m having a go at my L Word inspired version of Season 7 in a photo illustrated book titled, Touch Tone. I will be delighted to have your comments on my storyline when you have time. My first chapter, After Midnight is here: http://bit.ly/tina-kennard on LesFan. It follows immediately after Bette proposing to Tina in the Chapter titled, Malibu, found here. http://bit.ly/1qT8rKJ on LesFan.
Delighted to have a talented storyteller return!
Blackbird
so good that you’re back. I always love your stories, and this is now.
Bette and Tina in a new story, it was a wonderful start.
But who will be the savior of Tina? maybe a Bette Porter? :P amazing start. I look forward to the sequel, I hope you’ll be posting frequently on the site.
Ahhhh! You are back, That’s great!
I missed you.
I already like those “Frozen Beginnings’.
Great to have you back with a new story! I so loved the stories on Savannah.
Please post the next chapter asap.
So happy to see you posted a new story. Love your writing and a very interesting start. Thanks
Very Nice!…Can’t wait to read more!
I am so happy to see a post from you, I cant wait for more of this story.
Kins, you know how excited I am about this story…thank you, thank you, thank you! I have been as patient as possible waiting for you to post & of course you did not disappoint! I love it! Bring on chapter 2 love!
-your #1 fan ;)
Welcome back. Loved your stories. Like this one already. Pps
So happy to see a talented writer return with a new offering. I thought “Savanna” was extraordinary. “Frozen Beginnings” has a new vibe and environment. Are you an “outdoors” woman?
She’s back! You dragged me back out of silent readership to, well, comment upon the obvious. :)
Welcome home! Thanks for returning! You was truly missed! PPS
Wahaaay at last my dear friend and favourite author has posted her new story.Great beginning Kins as expected.Soooo looking forward to the next chapter.Sheer coincidence that a certain someone may well be behind the chalet door to rescue the exhausted Tina.Hoping of course it could well be the lovely Bette Porter.Looking forward to the next chapter eagerly Another Kins saga.Cant wait…C xx
So excited to be reading your work again! PPS. Thank you for sharing!
yeah you’re back and I loved the start so pps.
Long time no read. Welcome back. It looks like Tina is in need of rescue. It is the lovely Bette Porter? Great beginning. PPS
So I logged in and go to the l word andsee a new story posted and I look at the author, wait let me take a double look at that name again does it really say Kins40, omg so happy to have you back and starting a new story, #bestdayofmylife lol
Yay you´re back – this is a good day! You ve been missed.
Thank god you’re back! I was almost tempted to message you about future stories! Glad you’re still writing Kins :) The story so far is great and I can’t wait to read more :) Yayyy!
What a pleasant surprise! Welcome back!
Beautifully written, as always. Such a unique and intriguing start. Cannot wait to see where this one goes. I’m all buckled in. Let’s ride!
It’s great to see your story! Like this, it’s different. Made me veery happy, so plese post more!
Kinda wiggin out right now since I feel like you read my mind. I was feeling a lil fiendish for one of your stories the other day, so I started re-reading some of your old stuff and said aloud to myself “I sure hope she posts a new fic soon, cuz she is just phenomenal.” Wouldn’t you know, a few days later, BAM, new material! So excited to see you back, and I can’t wait to see what you have in store when it includes a secluded cabin in the woods!!! ; )
This is nice