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    Frozen – Chapter 4 – Heartstorm

    Story written on May 12, 2014 by Bette0Porter.
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    I knew her like I know the back of my hand. It took just a glance, a frown, a little gesture to see what she was thinking about. I could easily read her mind, she was an open book, a beautiful, gripping, enthralling story. Things changed, though. She translated herself in a language I couldn’t

    I knew her like I know the back of my hand. It took just a glance, a frown, a little gesture to see what she was thinking about. I could easily read her mind, she was an open book, a beautiful, gripping, enthralling story. Things changed, though. She translated herself in a language I couldn’t comprehend and the unknown scared me, Helena saw a side of her no one had ever seen, she said. What else could be stronger, scaring at times, than the passion I knew so well?

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    “Bette what is it with all this black you’re wearing?!” Alice voice broke the silence “I mean, I know you always liked it, but there’s not even a little nuance of colors on you. I got to tell you is freaking scary! You look like a Death Angel” the nerve she could have was amusing and unnerving at the same time and I could see Bette was thinking pretty much the same thing.
    She smirked and then adopting a serious tone of voice, she added: “I’m grieving” I didn’t know whether she was joking or not, as Alice said, it was scary indeed. A simple, yet twisted reply, which managed to hush Alice curiosity as well. Everyone fell silent.
    We were all sitting by the fireplace and, every now and then, I took advanced of the fact that she wasn’t looking at me, to just study her. Now that I thought about what Alice said, and Bette’s response I could easily agree with my friend. She looked like someone who’s not from our world. The deep signs between her brows were a sign of years and years spent frowning. Her once gold skin was now greyish, her actions detached as if there was no particular motive to do so, inertia was her fuel. A living dead.
    After my quiet contemplation, I noticed Angelica, who just some minutes before was sitting between my legs, leaving her spot and slowly approaching Bette. Just like me, she was inquisitively studying the woman. Something occurred to me and I started to panic, what if she’s going to recognize her from my descriptions? She knew about her look alike ‘invisible mother’, though I didn’t really show her pictures, and now that they were close  the resemblance between the two of them was palpable. I just hoped she didn’t utter a word. Fuck me, she did!

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    1. B0P,

      Thanks for another great chapter. This story is really sad that anyone who could read this will really feel bad. Bad in a good way coz we could feel the emotions of T&B.

      I’ll be waiting for the next chapter.. 2 weeks again? Hehe

      Scribe

    2. Fuck, that was so painful to read, it’s so sad and heartbreaking. And Angelica, she must have heard everything, the poor girl, innocent between two torn woman.

      I’l forgive you posting so late if wel are going to have a update in a week? ! Kidding, but i do hope you will update soon.

    3. This is good really good….. please bring them back together plllllleeeeeaaaaassssseeeee. Hopefully we will read your next post tommorow…..
      Hehe. Thx for posting pps

    5. Oh, my friend!
      I know you said you always Tibetter, but it was really very painful. How can two people who once loved each other deeply, completely destroying each other? maybe, the love is not always enough… but, I want to happy end ;)
      it is difficult it is to see how cold person Bette has been too words .. especially with Angelica. I understand her pain, but Angelica is innocent and did not do anything. I hope Angie will be fine, and Bette will help to find her.
      Please, you bring us relief :)
      I’m with the others, please posting soon.

    11. Damn Bette im sorry but that was mean! I understand how she feels completely towards Tina but Angie is just a lil kid and she shouldve just not answer the question rather than ripped that lil girls heart out because she’s now heartless…I can’t believe that they are at this point but im enjoying it please do not take a week topl update we need a new chapter in the next few hours pleaseeee lol… and let Angie be safe please

    12. All I can say to Tina is “you reap what you sow”. It’s too bad Bette was destroyed to the point that she’s lost her humanity. No one should ever give another person so much control. I’m sure Angie will be fine but she should not be used as a pawn to get Bette and Tina together. I’m appalled that Tina would address her daughter’s questions about her heritage by telling her she has an ‘invisible’ other mother that looks like her. It was hurtful to Angie but Tina is the cause of that pain, not Bette. She only recognizes Bette as Angie’s parent when it suits her purpose. Thanks for the update.

    15. Your Writing is so good you can feel the pain from bette and tina I know bette is hurting but to be so cold to angelica is heartbreaking maybe angelica running outside could be what thaws bettes heart pps

    16. It is about time Bette spoke her mind instead of being so cold and quiet – now cold and loud! Too bad Angie had to hear it for it cannot be unheard. Please let them find her safe. Not that I want Angie’s trip into the storm to bring Bette back but maybe it will at lease be a start. Thank you for this moving story! I hope we get a Bette POV.

      • Don’t worry, Life got in the way, but I didn’t forget about this story, it’s too important for me to leave it unfinished. I’m working on the next chapter. It should be the last (a longer one). But maybe, just maybe, I’m thinking about writing one more chapter.

        THANK YOU ALL for reading and commenting!

        • Yes glad you working on the story but dont end it with one more chapter at least about 5..or 10…….or 15 more chapters like your other stories, but if not *sigh* I guess 2 more chapters will have to do, and I hope everything is going well for you!

      • LOL, hey! Sorry for the HUGE delay, but I’ve been dealing with some things, lately. The outline is ready, just need to fill in the gaps and figure out the dialogues – the problem is I had a small surgery last week, nothing serious, but I can’t sit properly, and that means I can’t sit at my desk and write. I promise I’ll do my best!

        Thank you all for being such faithful readers!
        Xoxo

      • And I for one have not forgotten you or this story! The front door has been open for three months now and I am concerned about Angelica. Please let us have a new chapter and make us all sleep better !! I am also sooo worried about Bette!!

    21. Hey Bette0Porter. Get well soon ya. We are still waiting the upcoming from u. I can’t sleep at night thinking wht would be the ending. So heartwrenching seeing bette like that.

    22. Almighty God !!! was speechless by these chapters,
      It was painful, sad, storm, exciting, was amazing!
      Very sad to see Bette Boo treated bad.
      Chapter was excellent.
      10 stars.

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