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    Frozen – Chapter 4 – Heartstorm

    Story written on May 12, 2014 by Bette0Porter.
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    “I was angry” I shut my eyes, knowing it wouldn’t fill the six years gap, “I shouldn’t have done it, okay? It happened three years ago. She asked me why she didn’t look like me or like her friends. She kept asking me about the color of her skin. I had to tell her. I

    “I was angry” I shut my eyes, knowing it wouldn’t fill the six years gap, “I shouldn’t have done it, okay? It happened three years ago. She asked me why she didn’t look like me or like her friends. She kept asking me about the color of her skin. I had to tell her. I had to” my voice cracked, “I also tried to contact you, I wanted to make amends, but no one would talk to me. Not our friends, not even Kit. I didn’t know how to take a hold of you”
    “That’s because I didn’t want you to contact me”
    “Even if that was about Angelica?”
    “Especially for that!” she said looking into my eyes. She couldn’t actually think that, “I don’t fucking care, Tina! It’s your choice; it’s your daughter, deal with it”
    “You are heartless!” I spat. And if I only knew what was going to happen after that, I would happily avoid that slight outburst.
    She grabbed my hand with force, for a split second I feared she could hurt me, but it was nothing compared to what she told me next. And it hurt, it tore my soul apart to see what I did to the woman in front of me.
    She placed it on her chest “Can you feel it?” she asked me, not knowing what she was talking about at first, then I gasped and withdrawn my hand as if it was on fire. Her heart, it wasn’t beating, or at least that’s how it looked like. If it was, it surely wasn’t working properly; it was imperceptible “Exactly! As you may see, you are completely right. I don’t have a heart. You ripped it off my chest, six years ago and shattered it. I am dead. My body rejects every kind of feeling. I can’t feel anything, not even a single emotion, not even anger”
    Rooted to the spot, I watched as she walked away from me and entered her room. I turned around, I was shaking, my friends shocked. Bette’s words still roaming across my mind, the calmness in her voice was the opposite of the force held by her words. The silence was too silent, the storm placated. No soothing sensation overwhelmed me, a sharp pain, instead, in my chest when I suddenly noticed something neither of us did, for the succession of events took everybody by surprise. I shivered and this time was actually because of the cold.
    Angelica was nowhere to be seen, the front door open.

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    1. B0P,

      Thanks for another great chapter. This story is really sad that anyone who could read this will really feel bad. Bad in a good way coz we could feel the emotions of T&B.

      I’ll be waiting for the next chapter.. 2 weeks again? Hehe

      Scribe

    2. Fuck, that was so painful to read, it’s so sad and heartbreaking. And Angelica, she must have heard everything, the poor girl, innocent between two torn woman.

      I’l forgive you posting so late if wel are going to have a update in a week? ! Kidding, but i do hope you will update soon.

    3. This is good really good….. please bring them back together plllllleeeeeaaaaassssseeeee. Hopefully we will read your next post tommorow…..
      Hehe. Thx for posting pps

    5. Oh, my friend!
      I know you said you always Tibetter, but it was really very painful. How can two people who once loved each other deeply, completely destroying each other? maybe, the love is not always enough… but, I want to happy end ;)
      it is difficult it is to see how cold person Bette has been too words .. especially with Angelica. I understand her pain, but Angelica is innocent and did not do anything. I hope Angie will be fine, and Bette will help to find her.
      Please, you bring us relief :)
      I’m with the others, please posting soon.

    11. Damn Bette im sorry but that was mean! I understand how she feels completely towards Tina but Angie is just a lil kid and she shouldve just not answer the question rather than ripped that lil girls heart out because she’s now heartless…I can’t believe that they are at this point but im enjoying it please do not take a week topl update we need a new chapter in the next few hours pleaseeee lol… and let Angie be safe please

    12. All I can say to Tina is “you reap what you sow”. It’s too bad Bette was destroyed to the point that she’s lost her humanity. No one should ever give another person so much control. I’m sure Angie will be fine but she should not be used as a pawn to get Bette and Tina together. I’m appalled that Tina would address her daughter’s questions about her heritage by telling her she has an ‘invisible’ other mother that looks like her. It was hurtful to Angie but Tina is the cause of that pain, not Bette. She only recognizes Bette as Angie’s parent when it suits her purpose. Thanks for the update.

    15. Your Writing is so good you can feel the pain from bette and tina I know bette is hurting but to be so cold to angelica is heartbreaking maybe angelica running outside could be what thaws bettes heart pps

    16. It is about time Bette spoke her mind instead of being so cold and quiet – now cold and loud! Too bad Angie had to hear it for it cannot be unheard. Please let them find her safe. Not that I want Angie’s trip into the storm to bring Bette back but maybe it will at lease be a start. Thank you for this moving story! I hope we get a Bette POV.

      • Don’t worry, Life got in the way, but I didn’t forget about this story, it’s too important for me to leave it unfinished. I’m working on the next chapter. It should be the last (a longer one). But maybe, just maybe, I’m thinking about writing one more chapter.

        THANK YOU ALL for reading and commenting!

        • Yes glad you working on the story but dont end it with one more chapter at least about 5..or 10…….or 15 more chapters like your other stories, but if not *sigh* I guess 2 more chapters will have to do, and I hope everything is going well for you!

      • LOL, hey! Sorry for the HUGE delay, but I’ve been dealing with some things, lately. The outline is ready, just need to fill in the gaps and figure out the dialogues – the problem is I had a small surgery last week, nothing serious, but I can’t sit properly, and that means I can’t sit at my desk and write. I promise I’ll do my best!

        Thank you all for being such faithful readers!
        Xoxo

      • And I for one have not forgotten you or this story! The front door has been open for three months now and I am concerned about Angelica. Please let us have a new chapter and make us all sleep better !! I am also sooo worried about Bette!!

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