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Frozen – Chapter 4 – Heartstorm
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“Are you my mommy?” the once faint silence was now a deathly one. Everyone must have been holding their breaths.
Bette slowly turned to face her and I could see the frown lines become deeper. She clenched her jaws, “Why would you ask that?”
“Because you look like me”
“It doesn’t mean I am your mother” her tone cold and sharp.
“Oh, it’s just… Mama once told me that there was a woman who looked exactly like me and that she was my other mommy” Angelica’s voice trembled.
“I guess you got the wrong person” she said, then looked at me and I could feel a grip at the top of my stomach. She stood up and walked away.
I could see Angie’s worried look. Her “Mama I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to be a bad girl” and the glistening in her eyes almost broke my heart. I quickly got up and followed Bette.
“Bette! You could at least use a more gentle tone” I didn’t know why I was feeling that angry.
She ignored me and kept walking toward her room.
“Did you hear me?”
She turned around and just stared at me.
“She’s very sensible, she’s going to beat herself up because of that”
“I apologize. I would have known if I spent more time with her” the sarcasm in her voice didn’t go unnoticed “and for the record you shouldn’t tell your daughter about inexistent people, you know”
“You exist”
“We’ve been practically invisible to one another, she doesn’t know me, I don’t know her. She can’t be my daughter, I can’t be her mother” she laughed sardonically “Oh wait, I get it, your heterosexual dream didn’t work out and now you wanted to try and make things better for your daughter and tell her she has two parents, like all the other kids, just so she won’t feel different, but normal. Normal. Isn’t that why you wanted to marry a man, so she could have a daddy and a mommy?” she wasn’t yelling. Her tone was placate, low, calm. It was as though she was speaking and not feeling.
“I told her because you are her mother”
“And where the fuck was she?” her voice raised now, “Where the fuck was I? Aren’t mother and daughter supposed to be together? You told me, Tina” that’s the first time I heard my name coming out her mouth and it wasn’t pleasurable “You told me you gave birth to her, I couldn’t be her mother!”
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B0P,
Thanks for another great chapter. This story is really sad that anyone who could read this will really feel bad. Bad in a good way coz we could feel the emotions of T&B.
I’ll be waiting for the next chapter.. 2 weeks again? Hehe
Scribe
Fuck, that was so painful to read, it’s so sad and heartbreaking. And Angelica, she must have heard everything, the poor girl, innocent between two torn woman.
I’l forgive you posting so late if wel are going to have a update in a week? ! Kidding, but i do hope you will update soon.
This is good really good….. please bring them back together plllllleeeeeaaaaassssseeeee. Hopefully we will read your next post tommorow…..
Hehe. Thx for posting pps
Sorry me again. Please let Angelica be oraait and safe
Oh, my friend!
I know you said you always Tibetter, but it was really very painful. How can two people who once loved each other deeply, completely destroying each other? maybe, the love is not always enough… but, I want to happy end ;)
it is difficult it is to see how cold person Bette has been too words .. especially with Angelica. I understand her pain, but Angelica is innocent and did not do anything. I hope Angie will be fine, and Bette will help to find her.
Please, you bring us relief :)
I’m with the others, please posting soon.
I’m not liking Bette much right now, but I understand….
This so sad, there need to talk
So sad and now Angelica is in danger.Thank you for the update,PPS.
This is just so, so sad! Please let Boo be ok! PPS
Ouch
Damn Bette im sorry but that was mean! I understand how she feels completely towards Tina but Angie is just a lil kid and she shouldve just not answer the question rather than ripped that lil girls heart out because she’s now heartless…I can’t believe that they are at this point but im enjoying it please do not take a week topl update we need a new chapter in the next few hours pleaseeee lol… and let Angie be safe please
All I can say to Tina is “you reap what you sow”. It’s too bad Bette was destroyed to the point that she’s lost her humanity. No one should ever give another person so much control. I’m sure Angie will be fine but she should not be used as a pawn to get Bette and Tina together. I’m appalled that Tina would address her daughter’s questions about her heritage by telling her she has an ‘invisible’ other mother that looks like her. It was hurtful to Angie but Tina is the cause of that pain, not Bette. She only recognizes Bette as Angie’s parent when it suits her purpose. Thanks for the update.
Yay for your comments, could not say it better myself, but there is no need to, it’s all there!
Wow, that was harsh. Angie is gone out the door and no one noticed. Not good
Thanks
pps
Your Writing is so good you can feel the pain from bette and tina I know bette is hurting but to be so cold to angelica is heartbreaking maybe angelica running outside could be what thaws bettes heart pps
It is about time Bette spoke her mind instead of being so cold and quiet – now cold and loud! Too bad Angie had to hear it for it cannot be unheard. Please let them find her safe. Not that I want Angie’s trip into the storm to bring Bette back but maybe it will at lease be a start. Thank you for this moving story! I hope we get a Bette POV.
Waiting for more of this story. Please don’t leave it unfinished, waaaaay toooooooo many stories seem to have be abandoned.
Don’t worry, Life got in the way, but I didn’t forget about this story, it’s too important for me to leave it unfinished. I’m working on the next chapter. It should be the last (a longer one). But maybe, just maybe, I’m thinking about writing one more chapter.
THANK YOU ALL for reading and commenting!
Yes glad you working on the story but dont end it with one more chapter at least about 5..or 10…….or 15 more chapters like your other stories, but if not *sigh* I guess 2 more chapters will have to do, and I hope everything is going well for you!
chapter 5 please, were are you lol?
LOL, hey! Sorry for the HUGE delay, but I’ve been dealing with some things, lately. The outline is ready, just need to fill in the gaps and figure out the dialogues – the problem is I had a small surgery last week, nothing serious, but I can’t sit properly, and that means I can’t sit at my desk and write. I promise I’ll do my best!
Thank you all for being such faithful readers!
Xoxo
Just letting you know, I’m still working on the new chapter. Sorry, I really haven’t been able to write, lately, but I didn’t forget about you guys.
And I for one have not forgotten you or this story! The front door has been open for three months now and I am concerned about Angelica. Please let us have a new chapter and make us all sleep better !! I am also sooo worried about Bette!!
Hey B0P just checking in . You dint forget us…….:-) still wasiting for the next chapter. Pps
Hey Bette0Porter. Get well soon ya. We are still waiting the upcoming from u. I can’t sleep at night thinking wht would be the ending. So heartwrenching seeing bette like that.
Almighty God !!! was speechless by these chapters,
It was painful, sad, storm, exciting, was amazing!
Very sad to see Bette Boo treated bad.
Chapter was excellent.
10 stars.