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God she’s beautiful chapter 30
Bette: I’m so rude…Tina this is Luis and Luis this is Tina Kennard my partner
(Tina and Luis say their hello’s and shake hands…)
Luis: Bette I want you to meet my friend Eric
(Tina freezes at the sound of the name and so does Bette…They both watch as the tall gentlemen turned around with a glass of white wine in his hand…He turns to see Bette and he smiles at her until he looks at the person next to her and sees that it’s Tina…He drops his drink to the ground spilling it’s contents onto the newly hardwood floor…)
Eric: Tina…
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DAY 14 GALLERY OPENING NIGHT…(PART 2)…
(Tina’s shocked)
Tina: Eric…I didn’t know that you would be here
Eric: The same here. When did you come about liking artist galleries?
(Tina looks at Bette)
Tina: For about a week or so
(Bette nods her head)
Bette: Yeah something like that
(It’s silent for a moment until)
Eric: So Tina who are you here with?
(Tina blushes)
Tina: You see…I’m here with-
Bette: Me
(Eric looks lost)
Eric: You…I didn’t know that you two knew each other
Tina: We really don’t know eachh other like that but-
(Tina looks at Bette and takes her hand in hers…Eric notices this and becomes curious about their relationship)
Tina: We will know each other better as the days come and go
(Bette looks at Tina and smiles…Eric gets ready to say something until…)
Luis: Hey Eric that’s James over there
(Luis taps Eric on the shoulder breaking his concentration)
Eric: Where?
Luis: Over there next to the image of Jesus is within me. Come on lets meet him
Tina: Yeah go ahead we’ll talk another time
(Eric looks confused)
Eric: Yeah…sure
(Eric turns to leave and Tina looks at Bette)
Tina: That was close
Bette: Very close
(The gallery doors swing open…In comes Alice and Dana together…Alice automatically scans the room for available straight men…)
Alice: Now he’s cute
(Alice points to a tall muscular man…)
Alice: I can eat him for lunch and dinner
Dana: And don’t forget breakfast
(Alice laughs)
Alice: Lets go over there
Dana: I think that we should find Bette and Tina
Alice: We will along the way…come on
(Alice drags Dana over to the muscular man…Alice and the man talk while Dana stands by)
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yeh the new girl first to comment, i cant beleive you left us hanging like that, please post soon!!!xx
the answer is I CANT…that man have testicus..lol..and he used to carry a ring in the pocket just in case???..lol..i hope Tina make the right choice she already have so much happiness with Bette and let Bette kick his ass..great chappy Vakkav..post soon thanks :o)
does he always go to art shows caring a ring – hes got balls thats for sure –why is tina even hesitating with her answer-NO NO WAY MAN-I’m WITH HER
OMG! this is getting intense Whoa! Awesome Vakkav Thanks for update OMG! Please continue post soon!!
vakkav, I’m coming to kill you if you make tina say yes! and that’s not a threat, it’s a promise! :) now don’t leave us hanging, i wanna know what happens! post soon please!
The only answer I can come up with is. NO,I dont love you I love Bette. short and sweet. Oh,yes be polite say Thank You for asking tho. thanks
Oh my gosh, surely Tina can get no, “I can’t” out of her mouth. “I love Bette.” She should not have to pause to say NO.
what kind of DESPERATE man carries a ring everywhere he goes?? lol– just say it Tina: I’m flattered but I can’t, I love Bette.–Of course you can also say:No way Eric!I don’t love u anymore!
Post the next soon!!
You are evil! LOL! I can’t believe he proposed in the middle of a gang of dykes! Especially in front of Bette! They should simply take him down and throw him out!! Post again soon, please.
what kind of freak walks around with a ring in his pocket. sheesh. tina better not be having a brain fart, cuz this is a no brainer.
just say it Tina u cant cause u love Bette…damn why is she strugglin…poor Bette…post soon!
Ah the emergency black box with 14K gold diamond ring in it! Just in case you have the sudden urge to propose LOL. To finish Tina’s sentence “I . . . can’t marry you because sex is way better with a woman, Man! LOL
WoAhhhhhHhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh such drama post soon. i bet she says no
Grade A story..Yuck I despise Eric. .chauvinistic prick. .He’s full of shit..Tina ought 2 jus tell him “YOUR FULL OF SHIT!”..Tina is falling head over heelz 4 Bette..Flawless chapter you got me waiting..THNX 4 writing, dun stop..Post so0N..
Fourteen carats is nothing to sneeze at, Tina…
Please Tina said nooooo to Eric and come to Bette and make love to her. Hope she will make a right decision. Please post soon, thanks!
fuck….please post soon thanx byeness<33
Are you kidding me? why does Tina always forget the word “no” unless she’s saying it to Bette. Can’t wait for the next chapter.