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God she’s beautiful chapter 30
(Eric spits his drink out)
Eric: I don’t swing that way…we are just friends
Alice: Ok now that we have that out of the way…lets walk and talk a while shall we
Eric: Ok…where do you wanna go?
(Alice points to the long table dinet table)
Alice: We can sit over there
Eric: Ladies first
(Alice smiles)
Alice: Thank you
(Alice and Eric make their way over to the table…They sit and chat)
Dana: Alice always has good luck
Bette: What happened to your lady friend?
Dana: It’s a long story
Bette: Well spare me the horrible details…But are you two atleast seeing each other?
Dana: Not after the other day. Meanwhile I am looking for Mrs. right
Bette: She’ll come you just have to have patience
Dana: How long can that be?
Bette: I’m not sure but when the time’s right she’ll land right in your hands
Tina: Like I did?
Bette: Something like that. But I think that we met through fate dear
Tina: Yeah I agree and look at us now
(Bette brings Tina’s hand to her mouth…She kisses her palm…Eric and Tina catch eyes from a distance…And that told Eric everything…Tina looks away…)
Tina: Bette I’m gonna step out for a sec
Bette: Are you ok?
Tina: Yeah I need some fresh air. The dried smell of paint is making me dizzy
Bette: I can come with you
(Tina puts her hands up)
Tina: No stay and keep your guests company. I’ll be back sooner than you think
Bette: Ok don’t take too long
Tina: I won’t
(Tina kisses Bette on the lips…Eric watches Tina from a distance…He sees her exit the gallery…He excuses himself from Alice…)
Eric: Can you excuse me I’ll be right back
Alice: Ok don’t keep me waiting
(Eric cracks a smiles)
Eric: I won’t…I’ll be right back
(Eric gets up and heads outside…Alice makes her way back over to Bette…)
Bette: Where did Eric go?
(Alice looks at Bette)
Alice: How did you know his name and please tell me he’s not *****
Bette: He’s not. He’s Tina’s ex
(Alice puts her hand over her mouth)
Alice: Oh my god…I feel horrible
Bette: About what?
Alice: For going after him. I thought that she was just suggesting it out of trying to help me out
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yeh the new girl first to comment, i cant beleive you left us hanging like that, please post soon!!!xx
the answer is I CANT…that man have testicus..lol..and he used to carry a ring in the pocket just in case???..lol..i hope Tina make the right choice she already have so much happiness with Bette and let Bette kick his ass..great chappy Vakkav..post soon thanks :o)
does he always go to art shows caring a ring – hes got balls thats for sure –why is tina even hesitating with her answer-NO NO WAY MAN-I’m WITH HER
OMG! this is getting intense Whoa! Awesome Vakkav Thanks for update OMG! Please continue post soon!!
vakkav, I’m coming to kill you if you make tina say yes! and that’s not a threat, it’s a promise! :) now don’t leave us hanging, i wanna know what happens! post soon please!
The only answer I can come up with is. NO,I dont love you I love Bette. short and sweet. Oh,yes be polite say Thank You for asking tho. thanks
Oh my gosh, surely Tina can get no, “I can’t” out of her mouth. “I love Bette.” She should not have to pause to say NO.
what kind of DESPERATE man carries a ring everywhere he goes?? lol– just say it Tina: I’m flattered but I can’t, I love Bette.–Of course you can also say:No way Eric!I don’t love u anymore!
Post the next soon!!
You are evil! LOL! I can’t believe he proposed in the middle of a gang of dykes! Especially in front of Bette! They should simply take him down and throw him out!! Post again soon, please.
what kind of freak walks around with a ring in his pocket. sheesh. tina better not be having a brain fart, cuz this is a no brainer.
just say it Tina u cant cause u love Bette…damn why is she strugglin…poor Bette…post soon!
Ah the emergency black box with 14K gold diamond ring in it! Just in case you have the sudden urge to propose LOL. To finish Tina’s sentence “I . . . can’t marry you because sex is way better with a woman, Man! LOL
WoAhhhhhHhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh such drama post soon. i bet she says no
Grade A story..Yuck I despise Eric. .chauvinistic prick. .He’s full of shit..Tina ought 2 jus tell him “YOUR FULL OF SHIT!”..Tina is falling head over heelz 4 Bette..Flawless chapter you got me waiting..THNX 4 writing, dun stop..Post so0N..
Fourteen carats is nothing to sneeze at, Tina…
Please Tina said nooooo to Eric and come to Bette and make love to her. Hope she will make a right decision. Please post soon, thanks!
fuck….please post soon thanx byeness<33
Are you kidding me? why does Tina always forget the word “no” unless she’s saying it to Bette. Can’t wait for the next chapter.