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    God she’s beautiful chapter 30

    Story written on October 15, 2005 by vakkav.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=57120
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    A Bette and Tina beginning VAKKAV’s version

    Bette: She was

    Alice: Do you think that I mad her mad?

    Bette: Of course not. Tina is fine with it

    (She turns towards the gallery doors)

    Bette: Atleast I hope she is

    Alice: What was that?

    (Bette shakes her head)

    Bette: Nothing. Since we are on the topic of Eric…where is he?

    Alice: Oh he said that he needed to step out for a sec…I think he went outside

    (Bette jumps)

    Bette: Outside?

    Alice: Yeah…what’s your problem

    Bette: Tina’s outside

    (Bette and Alice look at each other before both heading for the gallery doors…Dana tails not too far behind them…)

    OUTSIDE ON THE CORNER OF THE GALLERY…

    (Tina is outside smoking a cigarette…She smokes them every now and then…Eric comes around the same corner…Tina jumps…)

    Tina: Eric you scared me

    (Eric smiles)

    Eric: I’m sorry…I didn’t mean to make you jump like that

    Tina: It’s ok

    (There is silence between the two…That’s until)

    Eric: Tina you look beautiful

    (Bette, Alice and Dana come around the corner)

    Bette: Doesn’t she

    (Tina chokes on the smoke…Bette looks at her)

    Bette: Tee what’s going on?

    Eric: Tee who’s that

    (The women look at Eric)

    Tina: That’s me Eric. Tee is for short

    Eric: Well I see alot has changed

    Bette: For the good not the bad

    Eric: So let me get this straight…Bette you and Tina are a couple?

    Tina: We are

    Bette: We are

    Dana/Alice: They are

    Eric: But so soon

    (Bette and Tina nod their heads…)

    Eric: Well have you atleast thought about us?

    (Tina looks surprised…)

    Tina: Of course

    Eric: So….

    Tina: So what?

    Eric: So I have been thinking about you for the longest. I can’t eat, I can bearly sleep, and then I run into you at the gallery and your already with someone else. A woman?

    Bette: Named Bette Porter

    (Eric begins to get angry…He turns to Bette)

    Eric: Bette do you all mind if Tina and I have a moment?

    Tina: Whatever you have to say you can say it here

    (Eric doesn’t like the response…)

    Eric: Ok then if that’s your choice

    Tina: It is

    (Eric steps closer to Tina…He bends down supporting his weight on his one knee…He reaches into his pocket and retrieves a black box…He opens it revealing the 14 karet gold diamond ring…Tina’s heart skips beats at the shock…Bette stands their pissed and so are Alice and Dana…)

    Eric: Tina I know that we had out fights in the past and I apologize for them. And I feel as though there is nothing that can’t be fixed Tina. I am willing to take that challenge of loving you everyday. I want you and every part of you and I swear I’m not lying. I want to have babies with you and I would love it most if you were my wife. You are smart, *****, beautiful, and very loving. The best that I’ve had and the best that I want closest to my heart. Your my friend and I love you Tina. Your the best friend that anyone can ever have. I know that we were together for only two years and to you that’s not enough time. We can wait for as long as you like and when your ready I’m ready. Tina will you marry me?

    (It’s quiet and Bette begins to feel sick…Alice and Dana come by her side for support…She never takes her eyes off of Tina…Tina never took her eyes off of the diamond ring…She looks Bette in the eyes and all types of thoughts run though her mind…She looks back down to Eric and the box that he was holding…)

    Tina: I don’t know what to say

    Eric: Say yes…make me the happiest man in the world

    Bette: Tee

    (Tina looks at her…Tears begin to weld up in her eyes…She shakes her head from side to side…Tears too come to the blond’s eyes as well…She doesn’t know what to do but one thing is this and she must come up with a decision…)

    Tina: I…..

    TBC…..

     

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    2. the answer is I CANT…that man have testicus..lol..and he used to carry a ring in the pocket just in case???..lol..i hope Tina make the right choice she already have so much happiness with Bette and let Bette kick his ass..great chappy Vakkav..post soon thanks :o)

    3. does he always go to art shows caring a ring – hes got balls thats for sure –why is tina even hesitating with her answer-NO NO WAY MAN-I’m WITH HER

    5. vakkav, I’m coming to kill you if you make tina say yes! and that’s not a threat, it’s a promise! :) now don’t leave us hanging, i wanna know what happens! post soon please!

    8. what kind of DESPERATE man carries a ring everywhere he goes?? lol– just say it Tina: I’m flattered but I can’t, I love Bette.–Of course you can also say:No way Eric!I don’t love u anymore!
      Post the next soon!!

    9. You are evil! LOL! I can’t believe he proposed in the middle of a gang of dykes! Especially in front of Bette! They should simply take him down and throw him out!! Post again soon, please.

    12. Ah the emergency black box with 14K gold diamond ring in it! Just in case you have the sudden urge to propose LOL. To finish Tina’s sentence “I . . . can’t marry you because sex is way better with a woman, Man! LOL

    15. Grade A story..Yuck I despise Eric. .chauvinistic prick. .He’s full of shit..Tina ought 2 jus tell him “YOUR FULL OF SHIT!”..Tina is falling head over heelz 4 Bette..Flawless chapter you got me waiting..THNX 4 writing, dun stop..Post so0N..

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