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God she’s beautiful chapter 30
MEANWHILE IN THE BACK OF THE GALLERY…
(Heidi approaches Bette…)
Heidi: Bette thank god I found you
Bette: What is it?
Heidi: Nothing bad I wanted to know are you ready for the opening?
Bette: I am
Heidi: Ok there is a crowd of people outside waiting to get in
Bette: I am on my way up there but in the meantume open the doors to the public
(Heidi smiles)
Heidi: Ok
(Heidi makes her way to the front…Bette looks at Tina…)
Bette: How do I look?
Tina: Delicious
(Bette looks at Tina…)
Bette: In professional terms?
Tina: Beautiful
Bette: Thank you…come on
(Bette and Tina make their way to the front of the gallery…Heidi opens the doors letting in the cheery guests in…Bette introduces herself and Tina…Bette sees something out the corner of her eye…She turns her head to the right and there was Alice…Talking to some mucular man boy was he tall…Tina catches sight of what Bette’s looking at)
Tina: I see Alice and Dana made it
Bette: Yeah they did
(Bette and Tina make their way over to Alice and Dana)
Bette: I see you decided to come
Dana: I did my plans were cancelled
Bette: What about Shane?
Alice: Her plans are still in effect
Bette: Oh…So I see that you have found interest in Tony Payzant
Alice: I do…how can he go wrong with all of that equipment
Bette: Very wrong you see he’s *****
(Alice frowns)
Alice: All the good looking ones are taken
(Bette puts her arm around Alice’s shoulder)
Bette: Don’t worry the night is still young you never know who might come through
(At that very moment a guy passes the women…He is tall and handsome at that…Alice grins)
Alice: Bette you made my day
(Bette and Tina turn around…Tina frowns..)
Tina: Oh that’s Eric
Alice: Is he available?
Tina: I guess…go talk to him
Bette: Are you ok with that?
(Tina turns to Bette…)
Tina: I’m fine really
(Tina turns to Alice)
Tina: Do your thing
Alice: Ok I will
(Alice makes her way over to Eric…She introduces herself and shakes hands with him)
Alice: So are you here with anyone?
Eric: With a friend of mine Luis he’s a famous artist
Alice: Hmmm…is he your friend or your lover
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yeh the new girl first to comment, i cant beleive you left us hanging like that, please post soon!!!xx
the answer is I CANT…that man have testicus..lol..and he used to carry a ring in the pocket just in case???..lol..i hope Tina make the right choice she already have so much happiness with Bette and let Bette kick his ass..great chappy Vakkav..post soon thanks :o)
does he always go to art shows caring a ring – hes got balls thats for sure –why is tina even hesitating with her answer-NO NO WAY MAN-I’m WITH HER
OMG! this is getting intense Whoa! Awesome Vakkav Thanks for update OMG! Please continue post soon!!
vakkav, I’m coming to kill you if you make tina say yes! and that’s not a threat, it’s a promise! :) now don’t leave us hanging, i wanna know what happens! post soon please!
The only answer I can come up with is. NO,I dont love you I love Bette. short and sweet. Oh,yes be polite say Thank You for asking tho. thanks
Oh my gosh, surely Tina can get no, “I can’t” out of her mouth. “I love Bette.” She should not have to pause to say NO.
what kind of DESPERATE man carries a ring everywhere he goes?? lol– just say it Tina: I’m flattered but I can’t, I love Bette.–Of course you can also say:No way Eric!I don’t love u anymore!
Post the next soon!!
You are evil! LOL! I can’t believe he proposed in the middle of a gang of dykes! Especially in front of Bette! They should simply take him down and throw him out!! Post again soon, please.
what kind of freak walks around with a ring in his pocket. sheesh. tina better not be having a brain fart, cuz this is a no brainer.
just say it Tina u cant cause u love Bette…damn why is she strugglin…poor Bette…post soon!
Ah the emergency black box with 14K gold diamond ring in it! Just in case you have the sudden urge to propose LOL. To finish Tina’s sentence “I . . . can’t marry you because sex is way better with a woman, Man! LOL
WoAhhhhhHhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh such drama post soon. i bet she says no
Grade A story..Yuck I despise Eric. .chauvinistic prick. .He’s full of shit..Tina ought 2 jus tell him “YOUR FULL OF SHIT!”..Tina is falling head over heelz 4 Bette..Flawless chapter you got me waiting..THNX 4 writing, dun stop..Post so0N..
Fourteen carats is nothing to sneeze at, Tina…
Please Tina said nooooo to Eric and come to Bette and make love to her. Hope she will make a right decision. Please post soon, thanks!
fuck….please post soon thanx byeness<33
Are you kidding me? why does Tina always forget the word “no” unless she’s saying it to Bette. Can’t wait for the next chapter.