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God she’s beautiful chpt. 9
Shane: I’m going to the bar
Alice: Don’t have too much fun
Shane smiles and disappears through the crowd…The other woman back up against the wall…They all nod their heads to the beat of the music…Marina turns to Suzie
Marina: Wanna dance?
Suzie: Sure
Marina extends her hand…Suzie takes it and Marina guides her to the dance floor…
Alice: Come on
Alice extends her hand to Dana
Dana: Be good
Alice: I swear pinky promise
Alice looks at Bette and she winks her eye…The brunette laughs…Tina looks at her
Tina: What did I miss?
Bette: Nothing.
Bette watches as Alice takes Dana out on the dance floor…She laughs and watches how Alice dances…The song ends and a slow song comes on. R-Kelly’s “Feeling on your booty”…The lights go out reveling only people’s glow lights…From a distance you could hear Alice scream…The lights come back on…But they are dim…Just enough light to see but nothing too bright…Tina turns and steps in front of Bette
Tina: Wanna dance?
Bette: Yes
Tina: Come on
Tina brings Bette out to the dance floor..She opens her arms as Bette wraps her arms around her waist…She and Bette both look at each other…Tina rests her head on her shoulder as Bette leads the way with the dance…Tina could smell the perfume that Bette was wearing?
Tina: You smell good
Bette: Thank you. You smell good too
Tina: Thanks
Bette continues to hold the innocent blond…Tina runs her hands up and down Bette’s back…She pulls her in close as their bodies match forming an incredible mold…Bette buries her face in Tina’s hair…She inhales the frangrance of Herbal Essence shampoo…Tina turns and looks at Bette…She smiles at her…The brunette smiles back
Tina: Thank you for inviting me
Bette: Your welcome. Are you having a nice time?
Tina: I am
Bette: You look real beautiful tonight Tina
She blushes and smiles…Bette looks down at her lips and then her eyes
Bette: Did anyone ever tell you that you have a beautiful smile?
Tina: No
Bette: Well I’ll be the first to tell you. Tina you have a beautiful smile
The blond blushes more…The final part of the song plays…
Tina: I love this part
Tina holds Bette tight…They both rock back and forth to the song inhaling one another’s scents wishing that it was more…The brunette knew that she wanted Tina and she wanted to take her time with her and give her as much space as possible…She wanted her to take as much time as she needed until she was confortable to tell Eric the truth…The song ends…The brunette and the blond separate smiling and grinning ear to ear…
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aww so sweet i cant wait till the date!! so excited please post sono thanx byeness<330927352903857
Good chapter. Bette and Tina are so sweet and can’t wait to see their date. Post soon please, thanks!
keep going. lets see where this goes.
Oh! this is so sweet OMG! I Love it Hey Vakkav that was so Beautiful Story Please continue and it’s getting interesting all the time Thanks.
SWT….keep it up..Post sOOn..
Loving the product placement.
…back to the story…
Tina is so honest she will tell Eric that she met some she is falling in love with and she will leave him. I can dream can’t I. Thanks
You know, this is probably how these things begin in real life, subtly. Not with a bang, but a whimper.
Cataclysmic love at first sight: is it merely an invention?
Discuss amongst yourselves…
Then get back to me.
I like this version of B and T.When are they going to get to that day?
sweet!!!!!!!!!!
Excellent as always, can’t wait for more.
hello vakkav, first time i leave a message but hey i have been reading all your stories. as always greet and yes you love to keep us hanging. i love that: the reward is always great. just one little thing: please let tina not been torn between two lovers, would love to have a strong decision from tina. but you are the writer and it’s all yours. thanks.
great chapter. wonder when’s Tina gonna tell Eric.
God they are so perfect together..Eric needs to go. great chapter
This was so good, but if anyone of their phones rings again I’m going to jump threw the fucking internet and throw them.in water, then come.back out and read what happens next…aarrgghhh