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God she’s beautiful chpt. 9
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Tina: Your a good dancer
Bette: Thanks. Your not to bad yourself?
Tina: I try you know it might not be much but I got the moves
Bette: You got the moves huh?
Tina: Oh yeah. I got the moves
Bette: So when are you going to show them to me?
Tina’s cellphone rings…
RING RING!
Bette and Tina look at one another…Tina takes the phone out of her purse and checks the caller id…
Tina: Can you excuse me for a second?
Bette: Sure
Tina: I’ll be back
Bette: Ok
Tina exits the ballroom and heads to the restroom…She takes the call…
Tina: Hey Eric
Eric: Hey I called the house and you wasn’t there
Tina: I know I’m out with some friends tonight
Eric: You are huh. Where did you all decide to go?
Tina: To a club in North Hollywood
Eric: Oh I party up there every now and then. What’s the name of the club?
Tina hesitates for a second…She knows how Eric feels about her partying at ***** clubs…
Tina: A club called LIDS
Eric: LIDS I never heard of it. Maybe you and I can go sometime
Tina laughs
Tina: I don’t think that you would like this club
Eric: Why?
Tina: The area it’s a bad area to be in at night
Eric: Well it’s funny that you said that because your there
Tina: Yeah I know but I am with other people and if something happens then we can all help each other
Eric: I see. Ok well you know the club better than I do so I can’t argue with you on that one
Tina’s relieved…She leans on the bathroom sink and continues her conversation with Eric
Eric: So what time should I be expecting you?
Tina: Expecting me I thought that you were at work
Eric: I was but then I was able to leave early so that I can come home and spend some time with you
Tina: Oh
Eric listens to the tone in Tina’s voice…
Eric: Tina is everything alright?
Tina: Yes everything is just fine
Eric: So are you going to answer my question?
Tina: I’ll be home soon Eric
Eric: Soon like?
Tina: The next hour
Eric: Ok don’t be late I’ll hold you to it
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aww so sweet i cant wait till the date!! so excited please post sono thanx byeness<330927352903857
Good chapter. Bette and Tina are so sweet and can’t wait to see their date. Post soon please, thanks!
keep going. lets see where this goes.
Oh! this is so sweet OMG! I Love it Hey Vakkav that was so Beautiful Story Please continue and it’s getting interesting all the time Thanks.
SWT….keep it up..Post sOOn..
Loving the product placement.
…back to the story…
Tina is so honest she will tell Eric that she met some she is falling in love with and she will leave him. I can dream can’t I. Thanks
You know, this is probably how these things begin in real life, subtly. Not with a bang, but a whimper.
Cataclysmic love at first sight: is it merely an invention?
Discuss amongst yourselves…
Then get back to me.
I like this version of B and T.When are they going to get to that day?
sweet!!!!!!!!!!
Excellent as always, can’t wait for more.
hello vakkav, first time i leave a message but hey i have been reading all your stories. as always greet and yes you love to keep us hanging. i love that: the reward is always great. just one little thing: please let tina not been torn between two lovers, would love to have a strong decision from tina. but you are the writer and it’s all yours. thanks.
great chapter. wonder when’s Tina gonna tell Eric.
God they are so perfect together..Eric needs to go. great chapter
This was so good, but if anyone of their phones rings again I’m going to jump threw the fucking internet and throw them.in water, then come.back out and read what happens next…aarrgghhh