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God she’s beautiful chpt. 9
Tina takes Bette’s hand…The brunette excorts her to the car…Tina hops in and Bette closes the door…The brunette walks over to the driver side and hops in…She straps herself into her seat…Tina smiles at her and then she straps herself in…Bette cuts the car on and pulls off…
Tina: I see you know how to treat a lady
Bette laughs
Bette: What made you say that?
Tina: Because you had the door open for me you escorted me to the car
Bette: Is that wrong?
The brunette adjusts her rear view mirror
Tina: No it’s not wrong it’s right. Eric doesn’t hold the door for me? Well he did once but not anymore
Bette looks over at Tina
Bette: I didn’t mean to make you mad by doing it. I just thought that it was the right thing to do for a beautiful woman
Tina smiles and looks at Bette…
Tina: That was sweet. That was really sweet
Bette smiles…The brunette pulls up in front of the planet…The two exit the car towards the planet interiors…
Alice: Oh my god look at who the wind blew in
Everyone laughs including Alice
Bette: I told you I was coming
Alice: You say that all the time and never show up
Alice goes over to Tina
Alice: Hello again
Tina laughs
Tina: Hello Alice
Dana and Shane go over to Tina…Dana extends her hand
Dana: Hi I’m Dana
Tina: Hello Dana
Shane extends her hand
Shane: I’m Shane
Tina: Hi Shane
Marina comes over
Marina: Hi I’m Marina
Tina: I’m Tina
Marina: It’s a pleasure meeting you Tina. Bette and Tina I want you too to meet Suzie. Suzie this Bette and Tina
Bette/Tina: Hello
Suzie: Hello
Marina checks her watch…
Marina: Alright we are all set so lets’s go
The women exit the planet and get into their cars…Marina leads the way as Bette and Alice follow her…
Bette: I hope you have a nice time?
Tina places her warm hand on top of Bette’s
Tina: I will. Just do me one favor?
Bette: Anything
Tina: Just don’t worry so much. Just let it ride
Bette: Let it ride?
Tina: Just let it ride. Enjoy the night that’s all that counts
CLUB LIDS
Bette smiles…The three cars pull up into the parking lot of the club…They each get out the car and close their doors…The all head to the door…Upon entering the club they are searched and id’s are shown…They enter the big ballroom with loud music from very large speakers boucing off of their ear drums…Shane looks around the club and notices a woman wink at her from the bar
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aww so sweet i cant wait till the date!! so excited please post sono thanx byeness<330927352903857
Good chapter. Bette and Tina are so sweet and can’t wait to see their date. Post soon please, thanks!
keep going. lets see where this goes.
Oh! this is so sweet OMG! I Love it Hey Vakkav that was so Beautiful Story Please continue and it’s getting interesting all the time Thanks.
SWT….keep it up..Post sOOn..
Loving the product placement.
…back to the story…
Tina is so honest she will tell Eric that she met some she is falling in love with and she will leave him. I can dream can’t I. Thanks
You know, this is probably how these things begin in real life, subtly. Not with a bang, but a whimper.
Cataclysmic love at first sight: is it merely an invention?
Discuss amongst yourselves…
Then get back to me.
I like this version of B and T.When are they going to get to that day?
sweet!!!!!!!!!!
Excellent as always, can’t wait for more.
hello vakkav, first time i leave a message but hey i have been reading all your stories. as always greet and yes you love to keep us hanging. i love that: the reward is always great. just one little thing: please let tina not been torn between two lovers, would love to have a strong decision from tina. but you are the writer and it’s all yours. thanks.
great chapter. wonder when’s Tina gonna tell Eric.
God they are so perfect together..Eric needs to go. great chapter
This was so good, but if anyone of their phones rings again I’m going to jump threw the fucking internet and throw them.in water, then come.back out and read what happens next…aarrgghhh