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Great Unexpectations Chapter 10
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Sitting in the car, Bette and Tina both stared forward trying to make sense of the disaster the night had become. Bette turned to Tina and put her hand on her thigh. "T? Are you sure you’re ok?" Tina smiled, "Yeah, babe. I’m fine. Just a little sore", she said before she reached into the back seat grabbing Bette’s purse. "Do you still carry Tylenol?"
"Um, yeah", her eyebrows furled as she tried to recall. "I think there’s some in there."
Tina shook the purse and listened for the telltale rattle of a pill bottle. She smiled as she heard the faint sound of a few scattered pills thrashing around in a nearly empty container. She opened the purse and then stopped herself, embarrassed. "God, I’m sorry, Bette. Is this ok?", she asked, seeking permission to go through the purse. "Jesus, T", Bette smiled. "Of course. Any woman who breaks her wrist for me automatically gets free Tylenol." Tina’s eyes sparkled as she chuckled.
"Well, it may be sore, but I don’t think it’s broken", she said holding up her right hand.
Bette shot Tina a look that said Thank God!! They both giggled at the unspoken joke as Tina found the bottle. She attempted to open it, but the childproof cap proved to be too much for her aching wrist to handle. "Here, let me", Bette said as she took the bottle from Tina and quickly flipped the top off. She poured out two pills, handed them over and unscrewed the cap from the half-full bottle of water sitting in the cup holder. Tina swallowed them down quickly and hoped she would soon be feeling the affect. Bette looked at her lover with her eyebrows raised questioningly. Tina nodded. "I’m ready, babe." Bette handed the pill bottle over before she put her key in the ignition and started the car. Tina looked in the bottle at the last two pills that stared up at her. "Fuck it", she whispered as she poured them into her hand and tossed them into her mouth, quickly followed by another swallow of warm water.
Richard watched them pull out of the driveway and waited for the car to turn the corner and out of sight. He made sure that the taillights of the Saab were no longer visible before starting the Benz. "We’ll be home in about 15 minutes, Mrs. B", he said not looking back. After a few minutes of quiet driving he looked back to check on her and found that she had fallen fast asleep. He turned back around with a worried brow. "I knew this was a bad idea", he mumbled under his breath while shaking his head.
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Gosh, nothing like a barroom brawl to arouse the libido. Excellent chapter. Have a great time and please write when you can.
WOW! Tina really saw red didn’t she. Great chapter, have a good time at the festival and we will be eagerly awaiting your next post.
Well, Alpha Tina was really greatbut I really would have liked for her to have socked her another one for good measure. Anyway both Buckley’s got what they deserved. Now I just know the next chapter will be an NC-17. RIGHT? Have a great time on your vacation.
U r right, I’ll say it again “U can not Stop there”LOL but seriously I love this story and Tina’s Punch was GREAT shame about the hand though:)
Wow, that was something! Alpha Tina to the rescue and Bette liked it too. Have fun at the festival.
Ok, Tina was waiting for any explanation was she? Still don’t get this whole Faye thing. If she just wanted to apologize why come to The Planet. Don’t trust her, and hope she stays away from B&T.
Every girl should know how to deliver a good punch. Just in case certain people show up.. But what’s up with Faye B? Was that genuine remorse? Can’t wait until your next update, I love the story :) Peace ADx
Bette finds Alpha Tina hot? Niiice. Buckley is a creep. Hope the next chapter is hot and sweet.
No doubt about it: Alpha Tina is a hottie. I hope that sore wrist of hers won’t be an impediment when she gets her reward. And I hope Bette and Tina will be united as they battle whatever evil scheme Buckley’s cooked up. PS: I didn’t think you were going for laughs with the hand-stepping moment in Chapter 9. My (very nervous) laughter was a cathartic response to a truly wrenching situation (which would have made great TV; damn you, IC). I encountered the “Bax” concept on an L Word forum; sorry for sharing, because I know too well how hard it is to get that horrible image out of your head.
Yeah, Alpha Tina is well hot. And Faye Bitchley had it coming. It’s just a pity Tina didn’t get a second wallop in. That being said, I don’t think her appearance has done Bette and Tina any harm… Or has it? What’s Faye up to? Enquiring minds wanna know, so post as soon as you can… waiting 10 days is gonna be an agony. (But have fun!) Cheers, red.
Gotta agree with Bette, Tina was so fucking hot! Can’t figure Faye out though…guess I’ll just have to wait those ten days… Enjoy the festival.
Damn Red! You weren’t kidding when you said that Bette wasn’t gonna have a lot to say about it. Tina had everything to say about it…with her fist! LMAO. Tina definitely shouldn’t be embarassed and I have a feeling Bette will show her why!
Hmmmm…Bette will have to show Tina some “hands on” appreciation for coming to her rescue. LOL! PS.
I LOL’d@the air horn. XD Foxy Brown has spoken! And I am not surprised that Tina hurt herself from that punch. lol
Sweet, I love it when someone gets what’s coming to them and in this lifetime as opposed to the next! Awesome update. PPS
:) Just great! Will you give us another dose:)? PPS!
good for tina to defend bette…i think that faye is bette’s mother LOL
oh yeah!!!! thanks 4 posting b4 u go…waiting for u 2 get back…..
Oh no no sarcasm at all. I am pleased that you write the story as you do. And yet this is again a great update.
I understand Faye wanting to apologize but watching Bette and Tina get in the car and then leave. Not sure why she needed to see that. What I would think that she needs to see is Bette, Tina and Angelica. She needs to see how much Angelica’s mommies love her and how much Angelica loves her mommies.
That was awesome!