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Great Unexpectations Chapter 10
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"Not just yet. Pull around so I can see the door. But stay hidden."
He nodded and started the car, maneuvering the vehicle to her specific orders. They sat. They waited.
Back inside the Planet…
"Here Tina. Bette", Helena said as she handed them their purses. "Is there anything we can do?"
"No, but thanks. I think I should just get her home", Bette said, with an appreciative smile.
"I’m really sorry guys", Tina said, disappointed in herself. "This was supposed to be a fun night."
"What are you talking about? That was fun!!", Alice grinned. An assortment of groans and eye rolls abounded.
"Well," Kit said with raised eyebrows, addressing Alice. "Since you had so much fun, maybe you won’t mind helping me clean up."
Alice was about to protest when Shane abruptly bumped her shoulder. "We’ll all help, Kit. ‘Cept Bette and Tina. You two go home. Make sure she’s ok, Bette." Shane indicated Tina with her tilted head.
"Thanks you guys", Bette said as she helped Tina with her wrap and purse. "Why don’t we do something this weekend? Maybe at the house? We’ll call you, set something up."
"Yeah, that’d be fun", Shane smiled, while the rest of the gang nodded and smiled.
"Ditto. No bar tabs at your house", Alice agreed, still regretting the absence of her coin. Her devious mind was already working on a way to remedy that situation. Bette and Tina waved their final farewells as they left the club, arms around each other.
Outside, in their darkened car, Richard and Faye watched and waited. They were now on the other side of the street, parked in a shadow, watching the two lovers as they exited The Planet. Although too far away to hear them, Faye could see their actions fairly clearly. They had their arms around each other as they walked to Bette’s car. She observed them expectantly, "Come on. Come on", she muttered under her breath. Waiting for the one thing she needed to see more than anything at this moment. Bette hunted for her keys in her purse while Tina waited. Finding them, she pushed the button on the fob and unlocked the doors. She opened the passenger door for Tina, but before the blonde stepped into the car, she leaned in for a slow tender kiss. Faye watched as their faces disappeared in the meshing of hair and hands caressing each other. A slow grin began to appear on her face as Faye continued watching. When their kiss separated she saw Bette sweetly rub Tina’s back. Bette said something to Tina, and Tina nodded with a smile. As she watched the lovers gaze lovingly at each other Faye allowed a now full and satisfied smile to cross her own face. "Ok, Richard. That’s all", she said, very contentedly. "Wait until they’re gone, and then we can go." Richard readied the key, waiting for Bette to drive off.
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Gosh, nothing like a barroom brawl to arouse the libido. Excellent chapter. Have a great time and please write when you can.
WOW! Tina really saw red didn’t she. Great chapter, have a good time at the festival and we will be eagerly awaiting your next post.
Well, Alpha Tina was really greatbut I really would have liked for her to have socked her another one for good measure. Anyway both Buckley’s got what they deserved. Now I just know the next chapter will be an NC-17. RIGHT? Have a great time on your vacation.
U r right, I’ll say it again “U can not Stop there”LOL but seriously I love this story and Tina’s Punch was GREAT shame about the hand though:)
Wow, that was something! Alpha Tina to the rescue and Bette liked it too. Have fun at the festival.
Ok, Tina was waiting for any explanation was she? Still don’t get this whole Faye thing. If she just wanted to apologize why come to The Planet. Don’t trust her, and hope she stays away from B&T.
Every girl should know how to deliver a good punch. Just in case certain people show up.. But what’s up with Faye B? Was that genuine remorse? Can’t wait until your next update, I love the story :) Peace ADx
Bette finds Alpha Tina hot? Niiice. Buckley is a creep. Hope the next chapter is hot and sweet.
No doubt about it: Alpha Tina is a hottie. I hope that sore wrist of hers won’t be an impediment when she gets her reward. And I hope Bette and Tina will be united as they battle whatever evil scheme Buckley’s cooked up. PS: I didn’t think you were going for laughs with the hand-stepping moment in Chapter 9. My (very nervous) laughter was a cathartic response to a truly wrenching situation (which would have made great TV; damn you, IC). I encountered the “Bax” concept on an L Word forum; sorry for sharing, because I know too well how hard it is to get that horrible image out of your head.
Yeah, Alpha Tina is well hot. And Faye Bitchley had it coming. It’s just a pity Tina didn’t get a second wallop in. That being said, I don’t think her appearance has done Bette and Tina any harm… Or has it? What’s Faye up to? Enquiring minds wanna know, so post as soon as you can… waiting 10 days is gonna be an agony. (But have fun!) Cheers, red.
Gotta agree with Bette, Tina was so fucking hot! Can’t figure Faye out though…guess I’ll just have to wait those ten days… Enjoy the festival.
Damn Red! You weren’t kidding when you said that Bette wasn’t gonna have a lot to say about it. Tina had everything to say about it…with her fist! LMAO. Tina definitely shouldn’t be embarassed and I have a feeling Bette will show her why!
Hmmmm…Bette will have to show Tina some “hands on” appreciation for coming to her rescue. LOL! PS.
I LOL’d@the air horn. XD Foxy Brown has spoken! And I am not surprised that Tina hurt herself from that punch. lol
Sweet, I love it when someone gets what’s coming to them and in this lifetime as opposed to the next! Awesome update. PPS
:) Just great! Will you give us another dose:)? PPS!
good for tina to defend bette…i think that faye is bette’s mother LOL
oh yeah!!!! thanks 4 posting b4 u go…waiting for u 2 get back…..
Oh no no sarcasm at all. I am pleased that you write the story as you do. And yet this is again a great update.
I understand Faye wanting to apologize but watching Bette and Tina get in the car and then leave. Not sure why she needed to see that. What I would think that she needs to see is Bette, Tina and Angelica. She needs to see how much Angelica’s mommies love her and how much Angelica loves her mommies.
That was awesome!