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    Great Unexpectations Chapter 13

    Story written on August 10, 2007 by redhorse.
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    Season 5ish. Scenes from a barbeque, Part 2.

    Shane grinned as she spoke. "Yeah. Well. I’d rather have ‘em and not need ‘em, than need ‘em and not have ‘em."

    Tina pondered this simple adage before agreeing. "I think that’s a philosophy I could get behind. I’ll have to rethink the whole ‘do unto others’ thing."

    Shane laughed as she accepted a hug from Tina and took the opportunity to whisper into her ear. "I haven’t seen you since The Planet. Is everything ok?" Tina held the hug and rubbed Shane’s back. "Everything’s great, Shane. Thanks."

    Shane could hear it in Tina’s voice. Everything was great. Finally. Shane’s eyes were hidden, but her eyebrows and dimples gave away her joy. "But remember", Tina gently warned. "We’re not the ‘perfect couple’ okay?"

    Shane looked at her feet shyly. "Oh man, she told you about that, huh?" Tina nodded with a smile.

    "Am I allowed to say you two are ‘perfect for each other’?", Shane tested.

    "Well, she’s perfect for me. I’m sure she could do better, though. Let’s just hope she doesn’t figure that out, ok?", Tina winked conspiratorially.

    "She won’t hear it from me", promised Shane as she grabbed one of her beers and twisted off the cap. She lifted it to her mouth while finding a seat.

    Tina wandered over to Bette at the grill for a quick kiss before stepping into the kitchen to ready the food she had prepared earlier. The house still smelled deliciously of the fresh baked bread and steamed vegetables. A little bit of minced garlic and curry powder in the boiling water went a long way.

    Tina looked up suddenly as she heard a knock on the door. Wiping her hands with a dishtowel she ran to let in her next guest. Finding Helena, she was secretly disappointed. Not at seeing Helena. She’d invited her after all. No. Tina was beginning to worry about her little wager with Bette. Alice would bestow victory on either Bette or Tina, and anybody who showed before that moment would be audience to one or the other’s great embarrassment. As the crowd grew bigger Tina was beginning to fear for her humility.

    After kissing each other on the cheek with their greetings, Tina escorted Helena to the backyard and offered her a drink. "Wine please. Any red will be fine. Thank you, Tina."

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    2. Love this story. That was pretty funny. Can’t wait to read what happens when Tina goes to Bette. Hot. I hope that this Faye drama isn’t some sad stuff for B and T because this story is so great when its happy..and them rediscovering their relationship. PPS.

    4. You’re such a tease, but don’t get me wrong, I loved every line of it.Too bad the sharpie notes were gone or Bette would have taken even more comments from Alice. Tina has grown quite a new personality, leaving their guests by the pool to join Bette, it’s very endearing, I really like this Tina, she knows what she wants. Great story.

    6. Are you sure those cheers weren’t hisses for you ending it THERE? What are you trying to do to me? Haha, thanks for the update. I always get excited when I see you’ve posted. Post soon, ADx

    7. Wow! They play for high stakes. That’s pretty gutsy on Bette’s part even in front of friends. Of course, she has a slammin’ body so not too much embarassment there. PPS.

    8. What a treasure trove of visual delights, from Tina’s sexy moves with the wine to Bette strutting her magnificent stuff. Framily scenes with Tibette at the center: what more could a reader want? You even manage to make Angus appealing, though it’s beyond me how he could resist sneaking a peak. Bette’s complex feelings toward Helena were beautifully conveyed in this chappy too.

    11. That was fantastic and yes indeed it did backfire on Tina but she got the spoils of war in the end. Lovely. So happy to see this chpater. I read every chapter that you post but, sometimes I read at work and can not comment. When you don’t see a comment from me just know that I was at work reading and could not write anything. Rest assured I will be with you until the end and Yes, I most certainly want to know what the Buckley woman is up to. PPS

    13. Bette Porter walking & swimming naked for all to see? That is one HELL of a barbeque get together! LOL! Hell the only thing I see at our family barbeque is my Daigo uncle in his t-shirt and plaid shorts cooking burgers on the grill with his big gut hanging over his belt, Ughh ! ….I’m all for pool party at Porter’s. Who’s with me?? LOL! Ciao.

    14. Hoo, damn. I’d dump everything and run after a sight like that too, houseful of guests or not. Good ol’ predictable Alice, gotta love ‘er. Seems like winner’s about to take all. Go T! Great post red, thanks.

    15. I don’t think I would have taken that wager in a million years :). Loved Tina’s last two statements. It’s nice to see them in love and lust again. Thanks for the update–anxiously awaiting Monday :)

    16. I totally love the way you write. It makes me fall in love the TLW all over again. It could almost give me the warm and fuzzies for IC. (well maybe not).

    17. Ohhhh, that was perfect! Funny chapter. I loved Shane waving dollar bills. Bette’s got a lot of guts….Damn! Now, are we going to see what happens when Tina follows Bette into the house? Please! PPS!!

    18. I haven’t gone anywhere, sorry I was so quiet. If I wasn’t already in love with Tibette, you would cause me to fall head over heels with them again.Perfect. Love the playfulness of all your characters, feels very much like all the good stuff from s1. I’ve heard a great story is in the details, but I think partly it is in the generosity of the writer to give attention to all characters. Really like all these people and that they all have their own existance other than a backdrop for Tibette. ..So..Tina seems to be 2 up on Bette, still hasn’t gotten her back for the sharpie….Looking forward to your next post.

    20. OMG, that was tooo funny. Actually it was tooooo hot. If I only I could have been at that pool side to get a bird’s eye view. Then I would love to have followed Ms. Tina to continue with that bird’s eye view.

    22. I’d say B&T both won that bet. I guess the family will have to entertain themselves while Bette gets “changed” with Tina’s help of course. PPS

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