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Great Unexpectations Chapter 24
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Faye smiled as she allowed herself to really believe that this was happening. They were on board. They would help find Cora. "At first, you’ll just be present whenever we discuss any new leads. You will become familiar with the technology that Richard is using. He will handle that end, don’t worry. I’d just like you to be aware of what his capabilities are. As time goes on, as I become unable to, you will become more involved in arranging for the logistics. Arranging for hotels, flights. I have a private plane. Well, I share it anyway. It’s a cooperative, if you like, but I’ve talked to the three other partners and they’ve agreed to let me use it as needed. So, for all intents and purposes, we have our own private plane. I’ll be giving you the contact information for the pilot. He’s on salary and available twenty four hours a day. You’ll need to let him know as soon as possible when we need to fly. It takes a bit of time to file a flight plan."
Bette began to create a checklist in her mind. Meet with lawyers. Sign papers. Learn technology. Entertain second thoughts. Get pilot’s info.
"Eventually", Faye continued, "you will have absolute authority to handle the search as you see fit, with Richard’s input of course. I’ve already resigned myself to the possibility that I may not be with you if she’s found."
Tina furled her brows sadly and took Faye’s hand. "Faye. Our first order of business is to keep thoughts like that out of your mind. We will find her. You will see your daughter again. You have to believe that."
Faye nodded appreciatively and tried to muster a smile that conveyed the impression she believed Tina’s words. The compassion these women had already shown her was more than she’d ever expected. More than she felt she deserved. Certainly more than she’d ever shown them. "Thank you Tina."
"Ladies", Richard interrupted. "If you’ll just follow me, I’ll show you to our ‘command central’." He used his fingers to indicate air quotes for that term. He didn’t wait for them to respond, instead walking directly to the room that Bette noticed on the night of their first visit. They neared the darkened room. Just as Bette remembered it, the room was lit by only the glow coming from the computer monitors.
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Another great chapter, great to see that B&T are helping, definitely would make them Bond girls. Please Post again soon.
This chapter had excellent dialogue especially the banter between Bette and Tina. Your NC-17s are smokin’. In fact, all your writing is totally enjoyable and this plot line is intriguing.
Another
amazing
chapter
Redhorse
(You
said
twenty
comments,
not
twenty
“commenters”)
:-)
NC-17
please.
well looks like Spumoni has covered most of da 20 comments lol. I’ll leave one more for further encouragement. Great Story, loved da Bond girls reference;)lol PPS
Okay, since I’m so busy, this should count for 2. I love the fact that after what Faye did to Bette and Tina they are still a forgiven couple. Lets find Cora before Faye is no longer with us, and get rid of Richard the easy way murder the sicko. thanks
ok comment from Md, are we close enough to 20 yet?
Shouldn’t Max be around to help with the computer searches? Just kidding. I’m sure the Bond girls can manage on their own. Now did someone say something about an NC-17?
You are so mean leavin off right there. The next chapter better be an NC-17. I think you got your 20 comments. Hope you enjoyed the game! PPS!!
Great chapter, only bette could get away with the pussy galore comment. Let’s get these two home so they can take care of the situation bette has gotten them into. PPS
Hi, I’m a silent reader but I had to go out of the shades to suport the team in order to help the cause to obtain an NC-17 for next chapter. So please!!!! Don’t let us down! We want a NC FOR NEXT CHAPTER!!!
“Entertain second thoughts” indeed. What have they gotten themselves into??
“Entertain second thoughts” indeed. What have they gotten themselves into??
Pull-over and practice “safe sex” LMAO!
Sorry, I finally caught up so I read the last two chapters together. This chapter had it all, well maybe not all, but the sex was close by. It had intrique, humor and suspense. It also brought some tears to my eyes. I sense some thawing between Bette and Richard. I hope that they can find Cora before Faye moves on from this world.
You are not playing nice, red… first being called a comment slacker, then left hanging with that Ursula Andress image, and finally teased with Bette’s wandering fingers. I’m loving the Cora storyline and am anxious to see much you’ll throw at the girls before she’s found. Very nice chapter, NC-17 or not!
Good chapter. Yeah everyone like James Bond’s movies but they only like to watch James Bond’s girls thats all lol!
The Bond Girls Line so loved that. Bette pull the car over right NOW!!!!! Thanks PPVS
ok you defiantly have 20 comments, I will so look forward to the next chapter. pps
In the immortal words of Bette Porter: “Oh Shasta!!” Look what I’ve gone and gotten myself into. Spumoni, you are a cheater!! ;-) You’re right. Technically I said 20 comments, not commenters. I also ‘technically’ never said chapter 25 would be NC-17 if ya’ll hit the mark. I just implied I would do another NC-17 at some point. Any lawyers out there with some advice??? Have I entered into a binding contract? Oh man. OK. Let me think of a scene. Car or home? Hmm…Tigers lost, by the way. Shasta again!! -red.
I could almost swear one of your readers is a fan of 4chan.org. lol I vote for them pulling over, having a quickie, then getting home and taking their time. ;)
I hope B&T don’t entertain too many second thoughts. Someone needs to find that girl, and it really mustn’t be the black hats. So then, red, is Bette gonna pull the car over, or is she going to make a few (oh, let’s say… *no less than 17*) traffic violations in getting them home? ;) Do post soon, red. Good luck to your Tigers & thanks for the post.
sure i’ll comment for a NC-17.another great chapter btw
LOVED this line, had me laughing out loud! “He noticed the women comparing the colors of their faux lipstick tubes and not-so-discretely trading with school girl enthusiasm.” Do i sense an NC-17 coming up?
Yay. You can totally get me to comment for an NC-17 chapter. Not that I don’t regularly comment..so I think this post should count at least three times. Think about it. PPS.