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    Great Unexpectations Chapter 24

    Story written on September 22, 2007 by redhorse.
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    Season 5ish. I’m Porter. Bette Porter.
    Ok. That summary sucked, but are you intrigued? Read on for more.

    There was the soft whir of the mainframe, added to the softened crackle of the emergency band scanner. Entering the room, Richard quickly turned on the lights. This revealed walls covered in maps and index cards affixed by plain silver thumb tacks. There was one large map of the continental United States that covered a five square foot section of one wall. There were other assorted state maps. California. Colorado. New Mexico. All of the maps were adorned by multi-colored thumb tacks. As Richard explained the layout Bette and Tina learned that each color had a definite significance. Red meant that Cora had been there, but had run afoul of the law. After being released from jail she skipped town. In the year that he had been following her tracks he learned that this meant there was a very good chance she would not be going back that city. Red means stop. Don’t bother with leads that originate from that city. It was usually just someone trying to collect a reward with bogus information.

    Green meant that there was currently activity in that city. Leads were coming in. Leads that had not yet been discredited. It did not escape anybody’s attention that currently there were no green tacks on any of the maps.

    Blue tacks were cities in which Richard had various contacts. Law enforcement. Other private detectives and well placed individuals whose help he could always count on. The ladies were impressed to see that blue was the most prominent color showing.

    "What are these black ones?", Bette asked, pointing to an entirely new map showing only black thumb tacks. Richard smiled. He was particularly proud of this map. "This is my ‘dis-information’ map", he said. Again with the air quotes.

    "Dis-information?", Tina asked, shaking her head not understanding.

    "Dis-information. Counter-intelligence. Whatever you want to call it. A large part of what I do is planting information to lead the black hats astray."

    "Black hats?"

    "Richard please. In English.", Faye kindly scolded.

    "Sorry, Mrs. B", he said, smiling while looking down at his shoes. "Black hats. The bad guys. Mr. Buckley’s men. I hack into their network and with the help of some of my friends I’m able to give them information that appears to be genuine LEIN data. Sorry. Law Enforcement Information Network. LEIN. So far I’ve managed to keep them chasing their tails." He looked to Faye and began to grin with a recollection. "Remember when we sent them to Anchorage?" Faye nodded, stifling a gentle laugh as she recalled that they’d picked the coldest time of year for that little excursion. ‘Fuck ‘em’ had been their slogan.

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    2. This chapter had excellent dialogue especially the banter between Bette and Tina. Your NC-17s are smokin’. In fact, all your writing is totally enjoyable and this plot line is intriguing.

    17. well looks like Spumoni has covered most of da 20 comments lol. I’ll leave one more for further encouragement. Great Story, loved da Bond girls reference;)lol PPS

    18. Okay, since I’m so busy, this should count for 2. I love the fact that after what Faye did to Bette and Tina they are still a forgiven couple. Lets find Cora before Faye is no longer with us, and get rid of Richard the easy way murder the sicko. thanks

    20. Shouldn’t Max be around to help with the computer searches? Just kidding. I’m sure the Bond girls can manage on their own. Now did someone say something about an NC-17?

    22. Great chapter, only bette could get away with the pussy galore comment. Let’s get these two home so they can take care of the situation bette has gotten them into. PPS

    23. Hi, I’m a silent reader but I had to go out of the shades to suport the team in order to help the cause to obtain an NC-17 for next chapter. So please!!!! Don’t let us down! We want a NC FOR NEXT CHAPTER!!!

    27. Sorry, I finally caught up so I read the last two chapters together. This chapter had it all, well maybe not all, but the sex was close by. It had intrique, humor and suspense. It also brought some tears to my eyes. I sense some thawing between Bette and Richard. I hope that they can find Cora before Faye moves on from this world.

    28. You are not playing nice, red… first being called a comment slacker, then left hanging with that Ursula Andress image, and finally teased with Bette’s wandering fingers. I’m loving the Cora storyline and am anxious to see much you’ll throw at the girls before she’s found. Very nice chapter, NC-17 or not!

    32. In the immortal words of Bette Porter: “Oh Shasta!!” Look what I’ve gone and gotten myself into. Spumoni, you are a cheater!! ;-) You’re right. Technically I said 20 comments, not commenters. I also ‘technically’ never said chapter 25 would be NC-17 if ya’ll hit the mark. I just implied I would do another NC-17 at some point. Any lawyers out there with some advice??? Have I entered into a binding contract? Oh man. OK. Let me think of a scene. Car or home? Hmm…Tigers lost, by the way. Shasta again!! -red.

    33. I could almost swear one of your readers is a fan of 4chan.org. lol I vote for them pulling over, having a quickie, then getting home and taking their time. ;)

    34. I hope B&T don’t entertain too many second thoughts. Someone needs to find that girl, and it really mustn’t be the black hats. So then, red, is Bette gonna pull the car over, or is she going to make a few (oh, let’s say… *no less than 17*) traffic violations in getting them home? ;) Do post soon, red. Good luck to your Tigers & thanks for the post.

    36. LOVED this line, had me laughing out loud! “He noticed the women comparing the colors of their faux lipstick tubes and not-so-discretely trading with school girl enthusiasm.” Do i sense an NC-17 coming up?

    37. Yay. You can totally get me to comment for an NC-17 chapter. Not that I don’t regularly comment..so I think this post should count at least three times. Think about it. PPS.

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