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    Great Unexpectations Chapter 27

    Story written on October 5, 2007 by redhorse.
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    Season 5ish. Bette smiled into her pillow, loving the warm feeling of Tina’s hand on her. “That’s nice, T”, she moaned.

    "Boy, you two are gonna milk this Faye thing for all it’s worth aren’t ya? You can tell me if you just need to get away to…you know."

    "That’s not it, Al. Honest. We’re going to see Faye. Something’s going on."

    The sound of a loud exhalation came from Alice’s end of the phone followed by a pregnant pause. "Ok", she finally said. Tina couldn’t swear to it, be she could almost hear the sound of the sleepy being wiped from Alice’s eyes. "When do you need me?"

    " ‘Bout an hour?", Tina ventured. Wincing and bracing for the torrent of expletive deletives that come when Alice gets short notice. To her surprise there were none. "Ok. I’ll be there. But, could you have a pot of coffee ready for me?"

    "Deal. Thanks, Al."

    "Yeah, yeah. I’m the best. Blah, blah, blah." Click. Tina sighed with relief, knowing that was the best possible sign off she could expect from Alice on a Sunday before noon.

    —

    True to her word, Alice showed up an hour later. Baseball cap to hide her hair and sunglasses to hide her bleary eyes. Bette handed her a hot cup of coffee as she came through the front door. "Thanks, Al."

    "Say it with caffeine", Alice grumbled before sipping the hot beverage.

    Bette smiled as the caffeine visibly went to work. A soothed calm swept over Alice’s countenance and she finally allowed her sunglasses to leave her face. Her eyes adjusted to the new light as she looked around the house. She took another sip, longer this time, from the coffee mug. "Where’s the little one?", she asked with more pep to her voice.

    "She just went down for her nap."

    The disappointed look on Alice’s face was not easily camouflaged. "Aw, crap", she said. "I wanna play".

    "Her crayons are still out. Help yourself", Bette smirked.

    "Don’t think I won’t", Alice said, accepting the challenge.

    "Just don’t use up all the green", Tina called out from the hall. "That’s her favorite." Bette watched with a great deal of interest as Tina neared them, striding confidently in the low-rise faded jeans that hugged her curves perfectly. The simple light brown V-neck tee shirt set off her skin beautifully and Bette’s only thought was a mere wondering. Will we be stopping on the way there or on the way back?

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    2. Tina did Cagney and Lacey proud with that bit of detective work. Now, to repeat the latter half of Bette’s earlier thought, Will they be stopping on their way back?

    3. I always loved Tina. Great body and also a great mind. Loved Bette’s body and mind as well. Hopefully that will break the case wide open and allow Faye to have some closure before her final breath. My Cubs did not even make it past 3 games but they are not alone.

    4. Great update Red! And some gratutitous sex tossed in as well!! I love it. But ABBA?? Had to you been to Ikea and were feeling the Swedish love? I must admit the meatballs there could turn anyone into lovong all things Nordic! LOL Loved Bette saying “She’s with me.” Very cute. Well done, hope you’re already working on the next update! PPS

    7. good this is heating up; altho if someone phoned me at 5 for an 11 mtg, i’d kill ’em. Luckily B and T found something more constructive to do. Lmao. pps

    9. Any time the phone rings after/before a certain hour, the immediate reaction is to worry, and worry hard. Really, Richard could have waited an hour or so. But then, yeah, as Bette said, that worked out OK. And Tina, of course, is brilliant. Her choice of partner is already evidence of that. And I swear, Alice is as cute as Angie is. Great update, red. Thanks (and I’m glad things worked out).

    12. You just get better and better, red. Such a great read! Yaaay Tina, sexy sleuth that she is, and I love Bette’s “she’s with me” declaration.

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