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Great Unexpectations Chapter 7
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"On your back", Alice grinned.
Bette reached around for a feel but came up empty. She craned her head as far as she could, but could spot nothing.
"What is it, Al? A mole or something?"
"No, not a mole", she grinned widely. "It, uh. Well, it looks like writing", she began to laugh.
Bette stood up straight, and turned around to face Alice fully, hiding her back. Crimsoned, she engaged in a battle with her lips to conceal her smile, a battle she inevitably lost. Jesus!! Front and back?? How in the hell did I sleep through this?
"Oh man, you two really had some fun didn’t you?"
Bette smiled widely, relenting. "OK, just shut up and tell me what it says", she turned around and lifted the back of her shirt. Alice studied the writing on Bette’s lower back with a glint in her eye. "Come on, Al", Bette said impatiently.
"It says ‘This Too’ and then there’s a line that goes down-"
"Ok", Bette said quickly dropping the shirt and turning back around, grinning like a fool. "Thanks Al. I got it"
"Wow, happy days are here again", Alice teased.
"Pretty much. Let’s hope anyway", Bette sighed, allowing a hint of uncertainty in.
"Ok, Bette. I can see something is bothering you. I’m not gonna push, but if you wanna talk about it, I’m here."
Bette sat down on the sofa, rubbing her forehead as her elbow rested on her knee. "Well, things are good for the most part. Great actually. It’s just…sometimes I still get these images of them together and I can’t get them out of my head."
"Them. You mean Tina and Henry."
Bette nodded, staring at the floor.
"Bette", Alice said with all the sincerity that was possible for Alice. "Can’t you just repress, like normal people?"
Bette smirked. "Sounds healthy, Al."
"Hey, don’t knock it ‘til you try it. I mean, come on. You’ve met my mother. You don’t think that took some serious repression?"
Bette said nothing, simply letting her raised eyebrows handle the communicating.
"Ok ok", she paused. "I don’t know Bette. I think you just have to give it time. You know, Tina had a lot of bad memories to deal with too. If you don’t believe me I have a tear-stained couch I could show you."
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I’d better be first ’cause I LOVED that chapter :D “This too” :) I love your story.. Tina and Bette reunited :’D Your wonderful writing makes it difficult to not enjoy :) Well done, post soon :)
I’m well impressed, red. You keep topping yourself. Excellent. More soon, please!
Oh, heck. This page has refreshed, and that last comment came out 31 flavors of wrong, either side of the pond. I meant excelling yourself, or something like. You know what I meant though, right, red? Ack, this is what I get for staying up this late on a weeknight. Still tho, post soon!
Another great chappie Red, thanks for updating. And JP, your comment made sense although with you falling all over to clarify your intended meaning the image of “topping yourself” took on a whole new light!! LOL. Don’t worry, all the kids are doing it these days!! *wink*
you were fine the first time jp. laughing my ass off!! thanks for the words though.
So Tina’s handiwork was more extensive than we thought. I did notice the word, redhorse, but truth be told page 3 of chapter 6 went into my archives file because of the scorching-hot Tibette sex scene. Tina and Bette aren’t the only ones basking in the afterglow in chapter 7. I do wonder if Alice can zip it for three whole days; that seems a tad ambitious. And I hate to say it, jp, but the double entendre occurred to me only after I read your clarification. But then I can be pretty slow on the uptake.
great update..i was too surprised that alice would wait, but will she really? thanks for keeping tibette together
Great chapter! PPS!!
Another wonderful chapter made even better with the return of the Sharpie! Much more than ‘mildly amusing’… love your writing especially the playful B & T.
Red you are soooo good! It was hilarious when Alice found the writing on Bette’s back side that Bette didn’t even know about! If anyone is watching me they probably think I’m crazy because I’m sitting here giggling to myself with the thought of that scene playing over and over in my mind. The look on Bette’s face is classic. This was so much more than “mildly amusing!” Thank you Red for the happy days! More please!
Thanks for the lovely story and excellent update. More please.
loved the dialogue…excellent update.
LMFAO@This too! XD Wow, so Alice is giving them 3 days. Is that 3 days in real people time or 3 days in Alice time, which is about the same as 10 seconds?
You just gotta love this. Cracking up at Tina marking her territory, you go girl. 3-days, wow, I don’t know how Alice is gonna do it. Bette love tina, now she just needs to learn a bit of trust.
Wonderful!
oh what a happy chapter…even Alice isn’t gonna blow it for them…u have to post soon…
Red….You’re smooth. Your writing is smooth, freakin’ funny and realistic dialogue w/all the characters. You do have a way w/words, so natural. You must be very clever and comedic in person. PPS. I can’t wait.
I started this story last night but thunder and lightening forced me turn off the computer. I was bummed by that because I was really getting into the chapter. I have always loved the banter between Bette and Tina. That is something that the show has missed out on. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Oh, I do love the body art that Tina put on Bette.